Will there be a catheter in the next chapter, I wonder? Very fond of your setting in the hospital, and your specific knowledge of traction. The little practical details make it more believable. Oh, props on her fears of carpal tunnel syndrome, it sounds so right in a medical love story. The set-up seems top-heavy for an erotic story. Perhaps next time you could put a sex act on the first page, and tell her back story bit-by-bit gradually after that.
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Anonymous03/04/06
Really sweet...!
I'm not sure what that first person meant w/ the bad comment. It was a great story, but I do hope you have a sequel to it!
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Anonymous07/25/07
good story
i agree there has to be another chapter maybe of them finding each other once the returned home .i would really like to see another chapter to this
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i like
there has to be another chapter to this.....dont leave it like that plz
Wonderful story of chemistry and passion!
Great story of chemistry and slow building passion, extremly erotic!
Wonderful job!
Grown-up orphan Annie can't stay out of trouble
Will there be a catheter in the next chapter, I wonder? Very fond of your setting in the hospital, and your specific knowledge of traction. The little practical details make it more believable. Oh, props on her fears of carpal tunnel syndrome, it sounds so right in a medical love story. The set-up seems top-heavy for an erotic story. Perhaps next time you could put a sex act on the first page, and tell her back story bit-by-bit gradually after that.
Really sweet...!
I'm not sure what that first person meant w/ the bad comment. It was a great story, but I do hope you have a sequel to it!
good story
i agree there has to be another chapter maybe of them finding each other once the returned home .i would really like to see another chapter to this
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