That was a riot. Thank you so much. I don't know if you were spoofing or not, but it was a great read and a nice break where the guilty party gets it in the end...Hope Grandma doesn't have a heart attack when she sees her little girl getting in the end though!! Thanks again for your stories JPB I do appreciate them and you.
You have, as always taken print and made a very good visual image and story out of it. Pretty entertaining and funny. Thnx, especially in todays misery and politcal situation.
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Anonymous02/12/06
i new you had in you
outstanding you got it in you down deep.thanks for writing some common sense story.real people don't let betrayal and deceit go without consequences.in your other stories you let it be known that sluts,whores and tramps get away with evil and no consequences.thanks for writing about there is a hell to pay if you fuck over people.
"Revenge, is a dish best served cold" has neither of the meanings listed. It means that you will enjoy the revenge more if you don't do it in anger, but stop and think about it. Take your revenge after calmly thinking it over and making sure that was what you wanted (which you did quite well!).
(The source of the expression: Pierre Ambroise Francois Choderios de LaClos (1741-1803). He originally said it in French in his 1782 book Les Liasons Dangereuses: "La vengeance est un plat qui se mange froid,")
All in all I thought it one of you better stories. The writing is good and the story flows easy.
that revenge is best served cold. He would say that the closer the negative respons to a given stimuli then that action would possibly not be repeated. That's behavorist Psych.
For the record, I have enjoyed many of your stories, JPB.
The title has been ascribed to "Klingons" of Star Trek fame; I first ran across the saying in Mario Puzo's "The Godfather." However, Dynamite Jack seems to have nailed the phrase's historical context.
The implementation and effects of the revenge reminded me of the Art of War, chapter 5, "...terrible in his onset, and prompt in his decision." The set up went VERY smoothly for an amateur; it seems to me that there would have been a significant amount of trial and error to get the recordings and video footage of the trysts.
Prolonging the distribution of information might have intensified the amount of agony Bob wanted to inflict on the perfidious couple. A little tid-bit here, a reference there, some curious phone calls from third parties to ratchet up the tension perhaps even to the point that Marlene and Brian would "cool it" for a while. And then, when things looked as though everything was settled down and the cheaters' rutting is consummated (whew, we got away with it, right?) Bob triggers the whole sordid mess on the unsuspecting duo.
Just some random thoughts, a worthy effort and a solid read. Well done.
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Anonymous02/13/06
Hot Damn!
Not only revenge that was served icy cold but also the punishment fitting the crime.
Boyd
by
Anonymous02/13/06
Just Plain Well Done
No superfluity, no illogic to the actions of characters, and no sentimental crap that ruins a good revenge story. I tire of the stories in Literotica that make the husband out to be a wimp who crawls back to "forgive" his wife for cheating on him. Thanks.
Love most of your stories and this one is no exception. Thanks to Dynamite Jack my knowledge has increased. I'd always thought the phrase came from Shakespeare, and my trusty Bartletts failed to clear the matter up. Anyway it warms the cockles of my vengence seeking heart. Thank You. Ronnie W.
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Anonymous02/13/06
I would like a follow up
I liked the story, but felt it ended too quick.
by
Anonymous02/13/06
Well written but...
This is written well enough but since there's not a single original thought, pretty much a waste of time and bandwidth. Not up to JPB's usual standard.
Just Plain Bob is a man after my heart. What a good story. As one comment said not an original thought no need to be original when you can write like this. But remember there are no original jokes they have all been told at one time or another
Plain BOb..First..you KNOW BOB isa gurls toy..so nothin is plain about bob..and ..um..you know a LOT about cheating..Has it hit yu close to home.??Your story was great..and well.it was good..
I sold my husbands van for 500 dollars out of revenge and gave two hundred of that away ..I wanted revenge for him callin cps on me because I had told him we were done..so I understand revenge..NOTHIN ...............EVER ..tasted so sweet..cause I'm a evil bitch..Keep on writn Bob..whatever the reason..Jean or aka..funnygurl953
The adulterers always think they're untouchable till they're caught and then, like Marlene, can't uderstand why hubby gets revenge.
Why do you hate me so much? Simple--you're fucking Brian.
Bob I bet Marlene had a slew of calls from every tom dick and harry .
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga.
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Anonymous12/11/06
Justified reaction
I'm glad to see he and Bev didn't wind up in bed right away like too many other stories with similiar circumstances. It may happpen in time but in the meantime they can share in a suitable handeling of the situation.
I'm sick of stories where the wife tries to babble her way out of a mess.
Even though she tries. All the husband has to say is, "You still here?"
I love it. This is what a real man is. Of course he's hurting, but you cross a certain line and apologies and explanations are worthless. And this story is a good example of that.
Love the Story and liked the set-up Now the 2 Lover's can Consol each other. and talk about How Good they have it being Together 24/7 . Makes a guy want to Smile lol
I would have rated it 5***** but he said, "...pack your shit and get out of here."
He can say it; however, the fact is, if anyone leaves, it will be the husband. All the wife has to do is call the police and he is out of there, and it doesn't matter if he owns the house because she gets to stay there and he pays for it.
And, the wife can get a restraining order and he can't come back to the house that he owns. Read about a similar case at glennsacks.com where the man wasn't even married but he let the women, the girl and her mother, stay for a while. It is his house, he cannot evect them, and there is a restraining order preventing him from coming near the house that legally he owns.
Sometimes I wonder if any of these stories strike close to home for some readers. After all, truth is stranger than fiction.
A rousing story of infidelity, plotting and revenge. It was a California wild fire, but what the hell? It's all good.
Who keeps the house? Well, that's a tough question.
A lot of factors come into play and unless a amicable settlement is made prior to the divorce, then it can get very nasty. To simply assume that one spouse over another will get the home due to gender is truly in error. For example, if the home belonged to the husband's family before the marriage, and the couple were allowed to live in it only while married, then yes, the husband can evict the wife. So could her in-laws, for that matter, although they'd probably have to evict their son as well.
If a couple purchased a home together, post marriage, and there are no children involved, then it can be as simple as who calls the cops first and whom the cops decide to haul away, or ask to leave. That can play a significant part in who eventually ends up with the home.
There are other instances of this sort of thing, only where the husband ends up staying in the home, while the wife gets kicked to the curb. It really depends on the judge. Judges are human too, and a male judge shit on by his ex-wife, might be more lenient towards the husband. Of course, that's a double edged sword.
Also, keep in mind that whoever holds on to the home has to be able to afford it. That too, plays a part in who keeps the home.
I'm sure one of the many fine attorneys reading and writing on Lit would be able to give more specifics and facts, so I'll leave it where it stands.
JPB has done it again, so no need to add to what has already been stated about this fine author. Other than, I enjoyed this story.
English
Funny stuff JPB...
That was a riot. Thank you so much. I don't know if you were spoofing or not, but it was a great read and a nice break where the guilty party gets it in the end...Hope Grandma doesn't have a heart attack when she sees her little girl getting in the end though!! Thanks again for your stories JPB I do appreciate them and you.
Better than your normal drivel
At least you show some consequences for once
Great stuff......
You have, as always taken print and made a very good visual image and story out of it. Pretty entertaining and funny. Thnx, especially in todays misery and politcal situation.
i new you had in you
outstanding you got it in you down deep.thanks for writing some common sense story.real people don't let betrayal and deceit go without consequences.in your other stories you let it be known that sluts,whores and tramps get away with evil and no consequences.thanks for writing about there is a hell to pay if you fuck over people.
Good
Nice job - short and to the point.
First, the meaning of the expression,
"Revenge, is a dish best served cold" has neither of the meanings listed. It means that you will enjoy the revenge more if you don't do it in anger, but stop and think about it. Take your revenge after calmly thinking it over and making sure that was what you wanted (which you did quite well!).
(The source of the expression: Pierre Ambroise Francois Choderios de LaClos (1741-1803). He originally said it in French in his 1782 book Les Liasons Dangereuses: "La vengeance est un plat qui se mange froid,")
All in all I thought it one of you better stories. The writing is good and the story flows easy.
Regards, DJ
Vintage Bob
Not a lot of superfluous dialogue; just straight to the point story telling.
Best
This is JPB back to his best.
Wow
This story of semi-normal people seems to be positively recieved by same. Would that it could be more often as the talent is there bobie.
B.F. Skinner would scoff at the saying
that revenge is best served cold. He would say that the closer the negative respons to a given stimuli then that action would possibly not be repeated. That's behavorist Psych.
Cold revenge; well deserved!
One of your best stories yet, Bob. If anything it was too short - more of the aftermath would have been fun!
Nice one
Paybacks are a bitch , Revenge was to the point and complete. They ruined his life so he paid them back in kind. Keep writing
Bob
Far be it for me to suggest...
For the record, I have enjoyed many of your stories, JPB.
The title has been ascribed to "Klingons" of Star Trek fame; I first ran across the saying in Mario Puzo's "The Godfather." However, Dynamite Jack seems to have nailed the phrase's historical context.
The implementation and effects of the revenge reminded me of the Art of War, chapter 5, "...terrible in his onset, and prompt in his decision." The set up went VERY smoothly for an amateur; it seems to me that there would have been a significant amount of trial and error to get the recordings and video footage of the trysts.
Prolonging the distribution of information might have intensified the amount of agony Bob wanted to inflict on the perfidious couple. A little tid-bit here, a reference there, some curious phone calls from third parties to ratchet up the tension perhaps even to the point that Marlene and Brian would "cool it" for a while. And then, when things looked as though everything was settled down and the cheaters' rutting is consummated (whew, we got away with it, right?) Bob triggers the whole sordid mess on the unsuspecting duo.
Just some random thoughts, a worthy effort and a solid read. Well done.
Hot Damn!
Not only revenge that was served icy cold but also the punishment fitting the crime.
Boyd
Just Plain Well Done
No superfluity, no illogic to the actions of characters, and no sentimental crap that ruins a good revenge story. I tire of the stories in Literotica that make the husband out to be a wimp who crawls back to "forgive" his wife for cheating on him. Thanks.
Yes!
Love most of your stories and this one is no exception. Thanks to Dynamite Jack my knowledge has increased. I'd always thought the phrase came from Shakespeare, and my trusty Bartletts failed to clear the matter up. Anyway it warms the cockles of my vengence seeking heart. Thank You. Ronnie W.
I would like a follow up
I liked the story, but felt it ended too quick.
Well written but...
This is written well enough but since there's not a single original thought, pretty much a waste of time and bandwidth. Not up to JPB's usual standard.
Original ideas or not
I thought it was great. I love the stories where the husband gets revenge and this was classic revenge. Not the deepest story here but I liked it!
thanks JPB
How appropriate
Just Plain Bob is a man after my heart. What a good story. As one comment said not an original thought no need to be original when you can write like this. But remember there are no original jokes they have all been told at one time or another
question is??
Plain BOb..First..you KNOW BOB isa gurls toy..so nothin is plain about bob..and ..um..you know a LOT about cheating..Has it hit yu close to home.??Your story was great..and well.it was good..
I sold my husbands van for 500 dollars out of revenge and gave two hundred of that away ..I wanted revenge for him callin cps on me because I had told him we were done..so I understand revenge..NOTHIN ...............EVER ..tasted so sweet..cause I'm a evil bitch..Keep on writn Bob..whatever the reason..Jean or aka..funnygurl953
Works for me
I liked the story, plain and simple.
Good story JPB
Sounds like the man got his revenge, all right.
The adulterers always think they're untouchable till they're caught and then, like Marlene, can't uderstand why hubby gets revenge.
Why do you hate me so much? Simple--you're fucking Brian.
Marlene
Bob I bet Marlene had a slew of calls from every tom dick and harry .
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga.
Marlene
Bob I bet Marlene had a slew of calls from every tom dick and harry .
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga.
Marlene
Bob I bet Marlene had a slew of calls from every tom dick and harry .
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga.
Justified reaction
I'm glad to see he and Bev didn't wind up in bed right away like too many other stories with similiar circumstances. It may happpen in time but in the meantime they can share in a suitable handeling of the situation.
great
great
So Good
That was incredible ass hole never saw what hit him or her that was great i give it a score of 1000 for greatness
LOL
that was good. have an affair if you have to, just dont disrespect. especially, if you say that you love that person.
Good stuff
I'm sick of stories where the wife tries to babble her way out of a mess.
Even though she tries. All the husband has to say is, "You still here?"
I love it. This is what a real man is. Of course he's hurting, but you cross a certain line and apologies and explanations are worthless. And this story is a good example of that.
Well Done JPB
That was so devious to can her and Brian at the same time great Job.
keep writing these great stories.
Pat
Atlanta,Ga
SHORT AND SWEET
I loved it! Especially, the way Marlene acted like she was the victim. No remorse no nothing then surprised when he kicks her out. Loved it!
Good story
This is a good story. A little more up front would make it a top vote. The ending is open for chapter 2..... any chance?
Sharon
NICE!!!
"You still here?" LOL
great story
I really liked thid story! She got what she deserves. Most times the wife gets to emotionally and finacially fuck the husband in real life.
well done all around
marlene never even said it was just sex or such dribble lol
A Fine Consequence Tale
JPB can turn out any kind of dish. He is polyvalent
Plan
Don`t you just love it when a plan comes together--The A-Team
Consequences are a Bitch
Love the Story and liked the set-up Now the 2 Lover's can Consol each other. and talk about How Good they have it being Together 24/7 . Makes a guy want to Smile lol
Superb!!!
Good anniversary gift for her parents...LOL
Now this is my kind of story...
I just love justice served. Way to go Bob!!
good bye chicka
did the door nobe hit her ass on the way out
RIGHT NOW A 4
maybe the sequel can move to a 5. TK U MLJ LV NV
Very good! I rated it 4****.
I would have rated it 5***** but he said, "...pack your shit and get out of here."
He can say it; however, the fact is, if anyone leaves, it will be the husband. All the wife has to do is call the police and he is out of there, and it doesn't matter if he owns the house because she gets to stay there and he pays for it.
And, the wife can get a restraining order and he can't come back to the house that he owns. Read about a similar case at glennsacks.com where the man wasn't even married but he let the women, the girl and her mother, stay for a while. It is his house, he cannot evect them, and there is a restraining order preventing him from coming near the house that legally he owns.
if any body leaves it would be the wife
DWorslut, the house is probley in the husband's name since he had the job, not her, so go and recheck your law degree back at the bubble gum machine.
Brrrr
Sometimes I wonder if any of these stories strike close to home for some readers. After all, truth is stranger than fiction.
A rousing story of infidelity, plotting and revenge. It was a California wild fire, but what the hell? It's all good.
Who keeps the house? Well, that's a tough question.
A lot of factors come into play and unless a amicable settlement is made prior to the divorce, then it can get very nasty. To simply assume that one spouse over another will get the home due to gender is truly in error. For example, if the home belonged to the husband's family before the marriage, and the couple were allowed to live in it only while married, then yes, the husband can evict the wife. So could her in-laws, for that matter, although they'd probably have to evict their son as well.
If a couple purchased a home together, post marriage, and there are no children involved, then it can be as simple as who calls the cops first and whom the cops decide to haul away, or ask to leave. That can play a significant part in who eventually ends up with the home.
There are other instances of this sort of thing, only where the husband ends up staying in the home, while the wife gets kicked to the curb. It really depends on the judge. Judges are human too, and a male judge shit on by his ex-wife, might be more lenient towards the husband. Of course, that's a double edged sword.
Also, keep in mind that whoever holds on to the home has to be able to afford it. That too, plays a part in who keeps the home.
I'm sure one of the many fine attorneys reading and writing on Lit would be able to give more specifics and facts, so I'll leave it where it stands.
JPB has done it again, so no need to add to what has already been stated about this fine author. Other than, I enjoyed this story.
SMACK!!
OOPS -
BOOM !! lol nice shooting
Swwet
Short, sweet, to the point, fun to read, 5 for sure.
WHEN IS PAYBACK JUSTIFIED
just about every time you are wronged. TK U MLJ LV NV
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