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A Creative Challenge Ch. 27

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by Anonymous02/13/06

every installment is terrific

Some of them have a lot of great sex, others not--but all of them are a pleasure to read. the continuing development of the relationship between Sam and Amy, and the underlying tension of whether her commitment to him matches his to her, is one of the most powerful things in this series of stories. Plus they are all very well-written.

I'm enjoying them very much--please keep writing!

ohio

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by Anonymous02/13/06

Very enjoyable

Besides the erotic sex and the totally unabashed free Amy your writing has kept the story fresh.

With Amy's unpredicitability is just plain fun!

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by Anonymous02/15/06

Again

Oh, you've done it again. Another wonderful, imaginative chapter. Even tho no one gets fucked on stage.

And Greta is getting closer and closer to being the third in a manage a trois.

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