All Comments on 'Open Window'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Strong and sexy

Strong narrative and good use of dialogue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Ummm

Sooo, how did this guy get in if you're on the 6th floor? How did he know which apartment you were in? If you had just left the bar, he would have had to take a cab to follow you. Whatever...

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
loved it!

i actualy forgot where i was when i read this!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Nice work

Nice work but the story ended kinda bluntly... Write with a bit more patience..

LadyLaVeauxLadyLaVeauxabout 16 years ago
The usual detractors...

Screw what all the detractors say. This was a hot story, although a bit short. What it lacked in length it more than made up with intensity.

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