All Comments on 'Japan Guide Ch. 02'

by king_wesley

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mindzmindzabout 18 years ago
So far...

Interesting so far. The elements of a good mind control story introduction are there, but we'll have to wait to see if the remainder delivers. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
so far, so good...

it's looking good so far; taking your time, building it up...groundwork is always necessary. don't let any negative barbs deter you.

StoryTeller07StoryTeller07over 17 years ago
Nice

I can see whre this is going and appreiate the good build up.

jls152jls152over 10 years ago
Second Chapter

Story's approach to your erotic part of your story is fairly original.

Wendylooking4BbcWendylooking4Bbcalmost 8 years ago
Lovely

To be in another country and turned into a slut for the men there! Every girls fantasy!

Well at least it is this girls fantasy!

Kisses,Wendy

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