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by Anonymous

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by mindz02/13/06

So far...

Interesting so far. The elements of a good mind control story introduction are there, but we'll have to wait to see if the remainder delivers. Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous02/13/06

so far, so good...

it's looking good so far; taking your time, building it up...groundwork is always necessary. don't let any negative barbs deter you.

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by StoryTeller0708/14/06

Nice

I can see whre this is going and appreiate the good build up.

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by jls15208/16/13

Second Chapter

Story's approach to your erotic part of your story is fairly original.

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by Wendylooking4Bbc06/13/16

Lovely

To be in another country and turned into a slut for the men there! Every girls fantasy!
Well at least it is this girls fantasy!

Kisses,Wendy

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