All Comments on 'Japan Guide Ch. 03'

by king_wesley

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Excellent!!!

Keep up the good work, I want to see where this is going!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Hope there is more coming!

You have a great foundation set for an a top notch series. Looking forward to the next chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
More!

Dude! you need more of this one, really great premise, now go for it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Where does this go?

I would have rated this story higher but it just barely got my mouth watering and it was over. where does it go? What happens?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I want to see more

Make MORE!!!! You've let this one sit for too long...and I'm an impatient sorta guy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
really need to do more

its great so far but you really need to add more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
rather pedestrian buid up

I would prefer a more lively buid up perhaps not a three chapter setup, hope the later episodes develop smoother

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wha?

This series should not be in mind control. The 1st 2 "chapters had no sexual cntent and this one was just a brief masturbatory scene. This should have gone into non-sexual.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good beginninng

I really enjoyed these first 3 chapters. However i am disappointed it was never continued. There was so much more about to happen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Go on

after a lousy and long start, now it´s speed up and becomes interisting.

Go on with the training and adventure. I like Mary in an allovertan for example!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Why don't you complete the series?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
finish this?

It's a really good story so far, but I'm a bit sad it is incomplete. Would you consider finishing it?

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