All Comments on 'Babysitter'

by indianbarbie86

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don87654don87654about 18 years ago
Good, but could be better

Babysitters should realize that the father of the babies they babysit are very capable of making mommies out of them. Perhaps in this case she might want to have your baby as well as babysitting for you, so that she can maybe move in with you and create some more half-siblings for the baby you already have with your wife, as well as full siblings for your and her baby, so that eventually all adults can run around the house naked and fucking at will in a group-like marriage.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
more!

when are you gonna write more...i like these characters...you should give them at least one more story. i loved this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Poorly written

Proofread!

And how do you forget to wear panties under a miniskirt?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
wrong section

Good, but this should be in the nonconsent section!!

Dark_RayneDark_Rayneover 15 years ago
oh wow!

That was so hot! Especially when he came home early and came right at her! You should definately make a part two

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
:)

pretty good but i wish it had been a little more in detail and a better story line

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Pretty much written by someone who'se never had sex in their life.

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