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Nice work
You always paint good scenes, sandspike. All of them are clear pictures as this.
Sand..Shifts..
You are a true inspiration 4 me this day ...such lovely images from a unique and
poetic soul humbles the heart of blue...a willow sprouts its wings..ty so much for your support...blue
poetry on the beach!!
and you might just have a writing neighbor kinda soon.:)
good work spike, always waiting for more from you. You make me feel closer to my natural home
xoxox
marrria
out of the blue
I enjoy your poetry and this one was sprinkled with the sandspike charm, thanks
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suffers from an erratic rhyme scheme. The first stanza (while being shopworn) is so tight in flow it demands the rest of it follow.
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