by WFEATHER
I like it. Congratulations on breaking away from the usual formulaic BDSM story. This one is quite unique.
An artist and musician as well, I find the stunning beauty in this story captiviating. I have felt the joy of such a metranome, and must say, this story brings back fond memories.
Your story made my skin crave the unique (and all too infrequent) kiss of the whip. Thank you for those well crafted paragraphs of bliss. The structure and tone was refreshingly different, and I am curious to read more of your work. Thank you.
Came upon this gem today and like others have said before - very much captivating and refreshingly different. Well done!