I enjoy all your stories You might look look at the usage of the words "to, too, two" and " there, their, they're" Two ladies went to the store too. They're going over there with their things. Ok??
Poor grammar, sick plot, stupid development.....What more could one ask for. Please, no more!
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I enjoy all your stories
You might look look at the usage of the words "to, too, two" and " there, their, they're"
Two ladies went to the store too.
They're going over there with their things.
Ok??
Perfect
Poor grammar, sick plot, stupid development.....What more could one ask for.
Please, no more!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to The Date or
More submissions by L.A. Wicker.