...whether it's your intent or not, I found myself squirming in my chair as I read this! I'm not even sure who I wanted to be more: the sub or the dom, for both sides have been treated to a special moment...and we, the readers, get to experience a touch of both, through your powers of descriptive writing. Nice!
know if the instructions were indeed from a MAN herecomestherain? I like to think the instructions were from a woman to a woman. Very hot and I say this with a bit of surprise on my part. I generally dont read BDSM in the first place as I find it at the least ridiculous or the most disgusting. I also never read stuff about spanking as I never have experienced it and think it to be completely silly, BUT......this blew me away. Well done!
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MMMmmmm!
Thank you for submitting this! What a gift! Beautiful piece of work, and perfect title... :)
SelenaKittyn
The crossover sensibilities...
...of this piece, the meeting between prose and poetry, is what I love most about it...
I agree with Bel ...
... but what I most like about it is the peek into your beautiful mind. Fascinating place. ~Imp
Oh my god, logo...
...whether it's your intent or not, I found myself squirming in my chair as I read this! I'm not even sure who I wanted to be more: the sub or the dom, for both sides have been treated to a special moment...and we, the readers, get to experience a touch of both, through your powers of descriptive writing. Nice!
Mmmm!
I love a good spanking (giving or receiving), and this sounds like a fabulous one. Well done. :)
Mmmmm!
Beautifully paced and described - lovely writing logophile, the dialogue or his instructions are very sexy too - nice work.
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That was really great!
Wow.
Mmm.
How do you....
know if the instructions were indeed from a MAN herecomestherain? I like to think the instructions were from a woman to a woman. Very hot and I say this with a bit of surprise on my part. I generally dont read BDSM in the first place as I find it at the least ridiculous or the most disgusting. I also never read stuff about spanking as I never have experienced it and think it to be completely silly, BUT......this blew me away. Well done!
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