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Very good writing and love story, but alas sad.
Unrequited love so well written but makes my heart weep.
Thank you for the wonderful story
Great
Very sad and poignant!
Boyd
Delightful
The writing is so nice and paints a great picture in one's mind. It is unrequitted love with genuine respect between two adults. The story could have gone a number of ways but went the sad but lovely way. It proves that erotic writing need not be four letter words and wild fornication. This story seemed very real!
Bruce...
Very good
I wish you were still writing!
Good
But too short.
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