Nothing Between Us

That was amazing, a really great piece of literary work. I was actually laughing out loud at some parts, so sweet. Loved it!

Incredible!

Literally the best story erotic story I have read....not only on this site, but on all of the internet! Worthy of publication! Absolutely delightful and impresive.

Amazing

Plz plz more!!! Such great work a beautiful piece my friend!

Amazing

This was just incredible

wow...

you are an amazing writer! this was an excellent piece of work! :D
please more!

young love

I usually don't read stories over one page, two the most. Young love always excites me. Two people who don't know that their in love or ment for each other.
I was working in this large building when I was much younger and there was this girl -
she was blonde and pretty. Five foot three inches and not very big on top. I'm a leg man and she had very nice legs. I only saw her in the building.
One day, one of my coworkers said to me that she liked me and asked if I liked her. I said yes and he told me to speak to her. I had my car with me and asked if she would like me to drive her home.
Half way there I asked her if she would like to go out with me. We kept on talking and when we got to her house we talked some more. I said, that I guessed that she did not want to date me and she said what gave me that idea. I said that I asked her the question about a half an hour ago and she didn't answer. She said that she never heard me ask her.
I guess that when you want someone sometimes you don't listen; you just hope for the best. we got married a year later and had a wonderful honeymoon in Portugal.
Sex with her was the greatest. She never said no.
Good luck to all who want to meet someone special.

Fantastic

This is one of the best stories I have read on Literotica. Quite apart from the outstanding writing, the way in which you maintained the suspence in the story was outstanding. Lots of people try, but few succeed. Thanks for taking the time.

Literally the best story I've read here! Love it! I can read it over and over and never tire of it =) Great job! Keep writing, please!

Lovely story, what sex should be.

You capture the feelings of finding love beautifully. The best, most thoughtful erotic tale I have ever read.

Oh my gosh

I'm in love with this story. Your detail and description of the love and the little ways they showed it was great. The ending was so cute and funny too. And it surprised me because usually stories over one page are just drags but this one was one that I had to finish to the end. The add of young unknown love gave it a twist the kept the story going. I loved it.

Really good! But, um...the hymen isn't inside. It's a little bit of skin that partially covers the opening. A quick Google search could have told you that.

My first!

I'm new here and haven't even made an account yet but I just couldn't wait to read this. Your story is my "First", and I have to say, it was good. You showed me a good time and now I need a smoke! The fact that Jacob just kept popping up in my mind as a certain wolf, playing in a certain teen vampire movie, and who's known by the same name just added to the fun.

Hahaha

"Really good! But, um...the hymen isn't inside. It's a little bit of skin that partially covers the opening. A quick Google search could have told you that"
Lol!

Anonymous a virgin

Anonymous don't believe everything you google. The hymen is located a little within the vaginal canal and sometimes requires a substantial amount of penetration to break. I didn't read this on google I actually have broken one or two. A nice romantic story.

Good story

Loved it. Great detail and somewhat funny and overall it was a great story

wow

So i have been quite horny as of late and im away from home at college. I'm not the most outgoing so I don't want to act like the new piece of ass on campus. For some reason my best friend from home has started to look really attractive to me. I think I'm going to initiate some of this when I return home for the holidays... Thanks!

Rubbish

Total Crap

My kind of story

I've read and re-read this, and enjoyed it each time.

I know I'm late.

This story deserves much more than a mean 5#, as SO many of your admirers have already said.
I wish I could honour you more.

Holy butt

This was an amazing story, loved the connection between Thuy and Jacob. The story line was absolutely astonishing, I've read this story a few times and it still causes a tingling in my thighs. I think you should make a sequel and keep the characters the same. Thanks anonymous :p

SO GOOD

I've made comments on others before, but NOTHING I've read has compared to this sweet short story!!!!! I could read anything you've written!!!
THANK YOU!!!

amazing

this is really really really good. truly wonderful stuff. i'm new to all of this but holy wow I can see why your story is so highly rated (and yes it should be higher)

Great Story

Truly enjoyed this story. Great writing.

To the author of the best story on this site...

This was the absolute best story I've ever read in my life!!! The connection between Thuy and Jake was perfect for this story! I was going to write more but I can't even find the words! All I can say is, keep writing!!!!

Amazing read

A nice, thick plot, plenty of emotions to go around, love, and humour; what's not to love?

Very nice

I knew the moms were up to something from the beginning

Loved it

This was an amazing story. Best I have ever read. :)

Magnificent

A real love story.

Wow.

Absolutely amazing. I never favorite stories but yours I needed to. I'm amazed with craftsmanship of this piece of work. Thank you. A lovely reed.

Without words........

Your ability to write without the fowl words and still say everything is wonderful. You ended with just the right thoughts and words. Thanks...................

Thank you.

It is nice to see that love is not dead. Being male most women think we only think about sex. That is so not true. You have proven that there is still love and romance in the world. So thank you again and please keep posting stories.

A six, five's not enough

Very well written and totally hot. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

loved it! such a great story. reminds me of my own personal story...hope you come back and write more!

Brilliant!

This is by far the BEST story I've read on here. I look forward to reading more of your work. It was extremely hot and beautiful. I love it! Being a guy in my early twenties, I would like women to know that we do NOT think about just sex. This does a good job of proving it.

gave me goosebumps

awesome! beautiful and hot.

beautifully written

Really nice job. Slow and steady build. You captured the insecurities really well.

Are there others?

Are there others like you? Bright, young English students writing porn so well it almost isn't porn. Put their names in your favorites.

Amazing Story

I've never left a comment on a story before, but I just had too when I read this one. It was an amazing read and to be honest with the way wrote it, you could have left the sex out and people still would have read it. Well done.

Wonderful story.

Thank you. I wish you wrote more stories because I can't get enough of them.

Amazing

Honestly amazing! That's all I can say.

Could have been good!

But it wasn't - IT WAS AMAZING. We all knew where it was going from the first paragraph, but it wasn't where it was going, it was how you got there. The build up was slow, so slow that I wanted to give them a push. The realization, when it eventually came, was beautifully handled. Their flow into the bedroom almost had me chewing at the table! Their hesitant move towards what had been written in the stars, led, as it should always be, by the lady, tempered by a real concern for her by the one man she wanted, who was so much in love with her he was afraid he might cause her pain. All I can say is ... Wonderful!
More years ago than I care to admit to, I remember feeling as he did about her, on my first time with the lady who is still my wife. I can only hope I handled that night, even half as well as you had him manage it here. Maybe I did something right, as we are still together 40 years down the line.
Thank you. I will read more of your work, assuming I can find time between my own attempts to emulate the standard you achieved here.

saving lt for me

I read other stories and all of the comments. Most stories had 15 or 20 at the most but 491. I could not read all so I read none. I am sure the all said the story was
great.
I am pretty old and I read these stories when my lady friend is not around. We have sex whenever she is horny.
I live in an apartment building on the top floor and last summer I realized that everything I owned was between 15 and 25 years old. I went outside where all the women and men were sitting and mentioned the fact. One of the women said that she would come up and take a look.
I remember her first words. "The drapery should be white not gray." She then ent on to say that everything had to go and that she would go shopping with me for new items.
As we were checking out all the rooms. I had two bedrooms and she would make the smaller one into a den. we were in the larger room and she put her arms around my waist. I kept my arms at my side and said something like becareful because you don't know what might happen. Well nothing did happen.
We went shopping and purchased all sorts of furniture and a new couch and a kitchen table and other items.
The next time she came up we wound up in the bedroom again and she held me around my waist. This time I did not keep my hands at my side. I hugged her back and lifted her blouse with my hands underneath. I unclasped her bra and we wound up on the bed. The sex was great but I didn't use a condum because it was so spontainious. Now we were worried but we quickly went to the druggest and asked if he had PLAN B which I recently heard about. He did not look at us as if to say that he realized that we just had sex but gave us the package. It contained two pills and he said that she should take one in the early evening and one in the morning and that would be that.
Now every time she comes into my apartment we wind up in bed.Just like those young people it was unexpected and it was great.
I hope that somene reads comment number 492.
Keep up the good work.

Loved it!

I absolutely love this story! It was so beautiful a so full of love. It wasn,'t nasty, or dirty, just two people who love eachother doing what's right. I can't wait to read more!!!!!

Thuy

I was once in love with a classmate named Thuy Nguyen. Thanks for making the fantasy come to life!

Great narration

I usually read stories in literotica just for the sex but this time I was more involved with the loveline..and thats a first for me...such an endearing way of narration...can we hope for more??? ;)

I can completely see why that made the top list!

Beautifully constructed and extremely sweet.

Bravo!

True love awaited

Very well written with the absolute right tension.alongr with the right fireworks

loved it

the last line had me in knots laughing so hard 5 stars without a doubt

True Love

Seemed like it was taking forever to get there but once it did wow.

More?

Great story, definitely deserves to be on the hall of game list. Sequel plz?