Nothing Between Us

2nd hardest thing

Reading Thuy and correcting from Thooey to Twee you really don't need to ask what was hardest while I was reading do you

outstanding

Very well written - great interaction

Thank you

Love this story! You're an amazing writer. I was rooting for Jake & Thuy, even found myself hoping they were real and still together. If you haven't considered publishing your work as an author...you really should.

Don't stop writing :)

You are amazing! You swept my heart away

Kept my dick hard and best story that allowed me to cum more than once

Best ever! I was able to cum four or five times from reading this. Sad it's over I would def read this if you continued to write more about this story.

holy

Holy crap I cummed at least 4 times

Beautiful Story

Incredibly well written, I think I'm in love with the characters

You Got Me...

You hit my sentimental side. I loved this story. This is how it should be. The characters were great and real. Their banter wonderful. Even the little turn with Julie was interesting. This is one hell of a great story. 5 stars.

Wow

You are an incredible writer, just the right mix of emotion, lust, backstory, and awkwardness for first-timers. You made the story real, I'm pretty sure that was why the erotic parts were so incredibly powerful. Amazing job, keep writing!

amazing stuff

Incredible story, the perfect balance between love and passion for each other. The buildup was so worth it. Keep writing man!

Superb story with true emotions for people in love. Its really good one. Keep writing. You have God's gift..

Incredible story...

I loved reading about them fighting past their fear of losing what was the most important thing they had trying to get to something they knew they wanted more...
And it was funny knowing their moms had set up their chance... but even funnier finding out that his dad was involved too...

I loved the feeling given that while they were becoming MORE than friends that every moment still entailed it as BEING friends... like the fact they could still tease each other while getting condoms... it wasn't a case of having become uncomfortable in their friendship...

Best of the best!

This is one of the very best stories I have ever read...the way you had them banter with each other...the way they finally come/cum together...the realization...the love...the passion...intoxicating!

A wonderful story

Thank you for this lovely story. The hesitancy, love and affection between the two was a delight and the passion of their first time very erotic. Please keep writing more stories!

Sublime

I've never before found such a wonderful human story like this. Most beautiful and sexy story I've ever found. Loved the way the title changed it's meaning for me by the end: instead of "nothing between us" because we're just friends, it was, "nothing hidden, nothing left as a wall between us".

Beautiful story. One of my favorites!

Good story

Thuy so horny, she love you long time! She holler for dollar!

This was more than just an erotic story. It was beautiful. Good enough for an actual book well done :)

knew that was gonna happen

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE it!!!!!

You're an amazing writer, I really love the story

Unbelievable!!

Fantastic! One of only a handful of truly excellent stories on this site!
Very romantic, sweet, tender and still incredibly HOT!
Just ..... WOW!

Awwe

Makes me wish I had something like this

super

one of the top 5 stories ever written

Very tenderly written story, it was wonderfully sweet. And the dad's comment at the end made it. :)

Wonderful!!!

Best story I have read in a long time! I give it a 15 out of 10!!! :)

thank you for letting them take the time to figure it out

I give very few 5's and rarely favorite a story. Nothing Between Us is my exception. and The second time through it is even better. Kudos and congratulations on a marvelous reading experience.
to the parents who left them alone to experience self discovery, I congratulate you on your patience and enlightenment. Yes dad, you can come home now.
smiling is a good thing.

Was taken aback

This was an extremely passionate tale of two young lovers lead by their undiscovered bond ... Love. I was most certainly take along for the very pleasant journey.
Well done.

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It was truly beautiful. The whole story was passionate and so strong in their feelings for eachother.

Absolutely wonderful!

M-Y,

This is the first offering of yours that I've had the pleasure to read, and it was wonderful! I felt connected to the characters from the start, and that connection grew with each paragraph.

This is a wonderful love story, and the sex was magnificent. Thank you!

Super story

This is a lovely story of first love and it is erotic and funny too. I laughed, and was aroused and truly enjoyed every minute. I loved the last scene with the moms and dad and the words from an old song that tweaked my memories of when I was that young. That was over 60 years ago and the memory still warms my soul even though that young woman/wife has now been gone for over 10 years. Write some more like this one.

Sublime & Equisite

nearly 3 million views
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i think that says it all.

xxxhugsxxx

TwistedOliver.

Great Read

That was one of the best stories I've ever read. It wasn't even about the sex, just a great story. Well thought out and well written. Don't change a thing.

Too good to put down! I didnt sleep at all last night, had about an hour I could nap before I need to be up and I spent it reading this :)

Wow!

Absolutely unputdownable!

Does she look like your dream...

Or has your dream always looked like her?

I like that.

Favorite Story - WOW!!!

I felt like I was there! Could not stop reading.
Epic! Loving! Beautiful!

First times all around...

I've been reading Literotica on and off for 5 years or so, and this is the first time I felt compelled (that's the word) to vote (5 of course) and comment.
Bravo. Wow.
I also was a late lover, even later than Jake and Thuy. This story brought back those memories so, so intensely. Thank you for that.

Wow!

This is the 3rd or 4th time I've read this, and I find it even more enjoyable each time I do.

One of the best stories.. I hve ever read ..

How Magical it wz .. I cud feel each n every movement & jst can't stop reading it..

excellent

so so good.

wish

I could quote more.

Still awesome!

...gawd I loved re-reading this! Wonderful. Beautiful. Awesome. :).

Unbelievable Writer

Great story as well as all the stuff you wrote thank you and keep them coming.

wow!!!

i cant believe how clueless he was. her too actually, but not as much.
im sorry that i can only give 5* and a positive review.
GOOD JOB!!!

Great story, and thanks for writing! It honestly reminds me a lot of my own first time, and was quite an emotional ride.

Friendship is a great starting point.

Friendship is the best starting point for a lifetime as lovers. Great story! Thanks. Keep up the excellent work.

Truth and found love

This was me 42 years ago, slow to realize
but eventually it happened.
Great read..again and again..thank you

Sublime!

This is the yardstick to which other stories will be measured (I know all mine will come up short). This was absolutely beautiful, sweet, and hot. Definitely a 5 star performance.

Beautiful beyond words

Dear M-Y,

I've read this story many times over the last few years, and it never fails to touch me deeply. It really feels as if I was in Jake's head, in the head of a real person with real emotions, real insecurities, a real life and real love. So much said with no more words than necessary, so much deep emotion and intensity... I wish I could read more of your work than this wonderful story and its three siblings. I wish I could write like you do.

Thank you for sharing!

I created an account JUST to tell you how beautiful your story is! Made me smile, get teary, and laugh (seriously--his dad at the end? HI-LARIOUS)! Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful tale!