Your story is the first I have read on this website, and honestly it got me going.. I like how natural and true it is, great job, and I hope to read more from you!
I enjoyed reading this story. It combines erotica with love; a truly wonderful read.
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Anonymous02/26/15
Best story I have read here!
This story is the best I have read on literotica. It has the slow build up and uncertainties that most of us feel on our first time experience of love, sexual excitement and fulfillment.
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Anonymous03/01/15
Best. Author. Story. Romance. Love. Omg. Please.
I just can't handle the beauty of this. This story is the best i've read. I'm not very confortable with those sex stories with like some hot things and yah. This combine love and erotic but more love. I like how the two caracters were best friends at first, I always dreamed about a situation like this; two secrets lovers that are narrating their love stories and always tease the other with sarcasm. And today i've found this story, well told. When i saw that i had only one page left i was kind of sad.
Okay it's just so good i want to read it again and again
(sorry for my english im french)
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Anonymous03/05/15
Nice!
Very well done. Sweet, precious gift of youth. What a lovely experience. Sigh! In hindsight...
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Anonymous03/07/15
sweet af
Amazing it was gorgeous. I love how you included all the awkward bits as well as the passionate ones. Love love love it
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Anonymous03/11/15
First time for me, too.
I believe this is the first time I have gotten to the end of one of these stories and laughed. Not smiled. Laughed. What a great, funny, sexy, touching story. Thanks a whole bunch for this one.
Live long and prosper.
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Anonymous03/12/15
Absolutely, really great!
Thoroughly enjoyed the experience of reading it to my wife!
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Anonymous03/23/15
so well written
It was such a beautifully written story that showed so much more than sex.
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Anonymous04/08/15
Wonderful, amazing, loved it!
You are so talented. Truly. I've visted this site fairly regularly for years now. I've never left a comment before but felt compelled to this time. Thank you. Please keep writing.
WOW! I just signed up for literotica, and this is the first story I read. I can't imagine there are many stories out there to rival this one. M-Y-Erotica, you have probably ruined me. This story was so profoundly beautiful. I agree with your opening comments about requiring the passionate build-up. Following the young lovers to the culmination of their blossoming love really pulls you into the story and makes it so much more powerful than if you simply described two 20 year olds having sex.
Thank you so much. A great pleasure to read. Completely believable shyness. And a good chuckle to end. I read this 'cos BurntRedstone favourited it, so thanks also to him.
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Anonymous04/26/15
Please write some more
I come back to this over and over. What a wonderful description of finding love. You know what it's about. Please try some where you don't know the people. They all fell the same thing so let it go.
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Anonymous05/18/15
THE BEST
NICE
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Anonymous05/23/15
Dicks
They are big like your moms skin. Your start was good but it lacked a serious ending. You need to make a second one if you want to impress me.
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Anonymous05/30/15
I love it
I love how we got to really see how close the two were in the beginning and the description throughout the entire short story is amazing. I came on here to read something straight up sexual to get me going but I got engulfed in a fabulously written short instead. I even forgot why I was reading in the first place. Anyway, it was really good and I loved every second of it.
Very believable and well written. If I could go back to my youth, this would be the perfect way to be introduced to sex my first time. You thought the story was too long, I think it wasn't long enough. Oh, and if you ever finish this as a novel, please let me know as I know who will be purchasing a copy.
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Anonymous06/06/15
Great job
It was a cute story but still has the right amount of erotica. Good job to you! :)
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Anonymous06/23/15
Wonderful
The chemistry between Jake and Thuy wasn't forced and the story related to very many people who are friends but can;t seem to take the next step. Well done.
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Anonymous07/02/15
Happy
Your story was sweet and poignant and made me happy as well as excited. Well-written. Thanks!
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Anonymous07/11/15
Duh!
The whole town, family, God knows who else and they just now fiqure it out. The ironic part is that it happens all the time. The banter back and forth between them was great. Satire and dry humor. Great! Keep it going.
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Anonymous08/12/15
Gorgeous. Brilliant.
You have an amazing gift for dialogue and pacing. I can't wait to read more of your work! Thank you for posting this!
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Anonymous08/19/15
Perfect! We all want more!
Excellent writing style. I love descriptive fiction and this is some of the best. You need to move off into the adult fiction world and bring us some of you're talent in other forms. This was sensual and delightful. We need to see much more of your writing, and not just here. Go find a publisher and start your career! I will buy anything you write, no matter the genre. No joke, you are good!
I could not find one error. You have done an excellent job of self editing, if this came completely from you.
Well done. Beautiful. Even in this sexy world of heavy breathing.
Did I say I enjoyed it immensely?
Thank you.
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Anonymous08/21/15
Beautiful!
Kept me cumming and wonderful literature! Great job and hope to see more!
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Anonymous09/29/15
Damn...
That was some damn good story tellin' right there.
... Couldn't ask for more. Wonderfully spun story that had me laughing at times, smiling at others, reminiscing, and feeling a bit naughty 😉
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Anonymous10/28/15
Still possibly my all-time favorite...
...even after reading hundreds of other stories here, from dozens of other authors, many professional-grade. There's a lot of truly spectacular material on literotica, but your voice is every bit the equal of the best of them, and as this story squarely targets my own friends-to-lovers, first-time, and happy-ending fetishes, this is just really hard to beat.
First story ever read here and I have to say it was wonderful! I laughed at some parts and totally remembered happy memories! Thank you for a beautiful story! The build up was worth the story!
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Anonymous10/30/15
Best of the BEST
Read a number of stories on this site, but this is far and away the best of this genre.
The two protagonists are intelligent funny and caring, making their coming together an exquisite voyage of truly loving sexual discovery. Great stuff, wish I could write as powerfully as the author.
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Anonymous11/08/15
The story tells it "just like it happens"
Just shows how you can confuse friendship when it's really a lot more meaningful.
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Anonymous11/12/15
nice try
not bad but too drawn out. developing the story is one thing but went on too long. better luck next time.
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Anonymous11/13/15
excellent.
Wow. Loved the buildup. a great story about young lovers.
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Anonymous12/03/15
This was absolutely great. I have a male best friend that I missed out on, but if we had realized the way we felt for each other earlier, I think this is a perfect example of how it would've went, so I connected with this story on a personal level.. I love the story and the sincere love they have for one another, beyond the sexuality. But first times are never perfectly smooth, and I think you found the perfect essence of that awkward and funny, yet passionate and sweet, first time.. A job well done. I won't forget the name of this, so that I can come back and read it again. Absolutely fantastic.. 👌🏼
~First time Literotica user and fan, thanks to you!
This was absolutely great. I have a male best friend that I missed out on, but if we had realized the way we felt for each other earlier, I think this is a perfect example of how it would've went, so I connected with this story on a personal level.. I love the story and the sincere love they have for one another, beyond the sexuality. But first times are never perfectly smooth, and I think you found the perfect essence of that awkward and funny, yet passionate and sweet, first time.. A job well done. I won't forget the name of this, so that I can come back and read it again. Absolutely fantastic.. 👌🏼
~First time Literotica user and fan, thanks to you!
Well done! I agree with other commentators that this was a great story - one of my favorites on literotica. For old sentimentalists like me, the comical best-friends to lovers tale brings the odd tear to the eye!
Awesome, no other words for it ! Thanks M-Y E, you made my day.
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Anonymous02/04/16
No words to explain
Holy shit! I wish u guys get married! This is awesome! No words can describe this!
It's irresistible the way u guys loved each other deep down and couldn't find ur way to each other until now
I had the same experience with my best friend, Aaron , we always played together until I realised I liked him, he was the reason I blushed when he looked at me and he was shy when talking to me
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Anonymous02/07/16
WOW!!
A true story of hot love Right on!!
This is truly what it's all about love and compassion and feelings keep writting good things like this !!!!
English
great story
Your story is well planed.i loved.good work.thx.
Anonymous - first time literorica visitor
Your story is the first I have read on this website, and honestly it got me going.. I like how natural and true it is, great job, and I hope to read more from you!
WOW!
I enjoyed reading this story. It combines erotica with love; a truly wonderful read.
Best story I have read here!
This story is the best I have read on literotica. It has the slow build up and uncertainties that most of us feel on our first time experience of love, sexual excitement and fulfillment.
Best. Author. Story. Romance. Love. Omg. Please.
I just can't handle the beauty of this. This story is the best i've read. I'm not very confortable with those sex stories with like some hot things and yah. This combine love and erotic but more love. I like how the two caracters were best friends at first, I always dreamed about a situation like this; two secrets lovers that are narrating their love stories and always tease the other with sarcasm. And today i've found this story, well told. When i saw that i had only one page left i was kind of sad.
Okay it's just so good i want to read it again and again
(sorry for my english im french)
Nice!
Very well done. Sweet, precious gift of youth. What a lovely experience. Sigh! In hindsight...
sweet af
Amazing it was gorgeous. I love how you included all the awkward bits as well as the passionate ones. Love love love it
First time for me, too.
I believe this is the first time I have gotten to the end of one of these stories and laughed. Not smiled. Laughed. What a great, funny, sexy, touching story. Thanks a whole bunch for this one.
Live long and prosper.
Absolutely, really great!
Thoroughly enjoyed the experience of reading it to my wife!
so well written
It was such a beautifully written story that showed so much more than sex.
Wonderful, amazing, loved it!
You are so talented. Truly. I've visted this site fairly regularly for years now. I've never left a comment before but felt compelled to this time. Thank you. Please keep writing.
Great story, really nice job with the sex parts and a hilarious ending.
My broken virginity
WOW! I just signed up for literotica, and this is the first story I read. I can't imagine there are many stories out there to rival this one. M-Y-Erotica, you have probably ruined me. This story was so profoundly beautiful. I agree with your opening comments about requiring the passionate build-up. Following the young lovers to the culmination of their blossoming love really pulls you into the story and makes it so much more powerful than if you simply described two 20 year olds having sex.
Very well done. More please.
Reallly
Very, very well done!
Best story ever
Just the best story on this site.
A real delight
Thank you so much. A great pleasure to read. Completely believable shyness. And a good chuckle to end. I read this 'cos BurntRedstone favourited it, so thanks also to him.
Please write some more
I come back to this over and over. What a wonderful description of finding love. You know what it's about. Please try some where you don't know the people. They all fell the same thing so let it go.
THE BEST
NICE
Dicks
They are big like your moms skin. Your start was good but it lacked a serious ending. You need to make a second one if you want to impress me.
I love it
I love how we got to really see how close the two were in the beginning and the description throughout the entire short story is amazing. I came on here to read something straight up sexual to get me going but I got engulfed in a fabulously written short instead. I even forgot why I was reading in the first place. Anyway, it was really good and I loved every second of it.
Simply Amazing
Very believable and well written. If I could go back to my youth, this would be the perfect way to be introduced to sex my first time. You thought the story was too long, I think it wasn't long enough. Oh, and if you ever finish this as a novel, please let me know as I know who will be purchasing a copy.
Great job
It was a cute story but still has the right amount of erotica. Good job to you! :)
Wonderful
The chemistry between Jake and Thuy wasn't forced and the story related to very many people who are friends but can;t seem to take the next step. Well done.
Happy
Your story was sweet and poignant and made me happy as well as excited. Well-written. Thanks!
Duh!
The whole town, family, God knows who else and they just now fiqure it out. The ironic part is that it happens all the time. The banter back and forth between them was great. Satire and dry humor. Great! Keep it going.
Gorgeous. Brilliant.
You have an amazing gift for dialogue and pacing. I can't wait to read more of your work! Thank you for posting this!
Perfect! We all want more!
Excellent writing style. I love descriptive fiction and this is some of the best. You need to move off into the adult fiction world and bring us some of you're talent in other forms. This was sensual and delightful. We need to see much more of your writing, and not just here. Go find a publisher and start your career! I will buy anything you write, no matter the genre. No joke, you are good!
I could not find one error. You have done an excellent job of self editing, if this came completely from you.
Well done. Beautiful. Even in this sexy world of heavy breathing.
Did I say I enjoyed it immensely?
Thank you.
Beautiful!
Kept me cumming and wonderful literature! Great job and hope to see more!
Damn...
That was some damn good story tellin' right there.
That was an outstanding piece.
Congratulations and keep up the good work. 5*
Great story!
That was very well written and very warm and romantic.
Perfect ...
... Couldn't ask for more. Wonderfully spun story that had me laughing at times, smiling at others, reminiscing, and feeling a bit naughty 😉
Still possibly my all-time favorite...
...even after reading hundreds of other stories here, from dozens of other authors, many professional-grade. There's a lot of truly spectacular material on literotica, but your voice is every bit the equal of the best of them, and as this story squarely targets my own friends-to-lovers, first-time, and happy-ending fetishes, this is just really hard to beat.
Please, PLEASE do expand this...
Awesome!
First story ever read here and I have to say it was wonderful! I laughed at some parts and totally remembered happy memories! Thank you for a beautiful story! The build up was worth the story!
Best of the BEST
Read a number of stories on this site, but this is far and away the best of this genre.
The two protagonists are intelligent funny and caring, making their coming together an exquisite voyage of truly loving sexual discovery. Great stuff, wish I could write as powerfully as the author.
The story tells it "just like it happens"
Just shows how you can confuse friendship when it's really a lot more meaningful.
nice try
not bad but too drawn out. developing the story is one thing but went on too long. better luck next time.
excellent.
Wow. Loved the buildup. a great story about young lovers.
This was absolutely great. I have a male best friend that I missed out on, but if we had realized the way we felt for each other earlier, I think this is a perfect example of how it would've went, so I connected with this story on a personal level.. I love the story and the sincere love they have for one another, beyond the sexuality. But first times are never perfectly smooth, and I think you found the perfect essence of that awkward and funny, yet passionate and sweet, first time.. A job well done. I won't forget the name of this, so that I can come back and read it again. Absolutely fantastic.. 👌🏼
~First time Literotica user and fan, thanks to you!
A Memory Captured Perfectly!
This was absolutely great. I have a male best friend that I missed out on, but if we had realized the way we felt for each other earlier, I think this is a perfect example of how it would've went, so I connected with this story on a personal level.. I love the story and the sincere love they have for one another, beyond the sexuality. But first times are never perfectly smooth, and I think you found the perfect essence of that awkward and funny, yet passionate and sweet, first time.. A job well done. I won't forget the name of this, so that I can come back and read it again. Absolutely fantastic.. 👌🏼
~First time Literotica user and fan, thanks to you!
A great story
Well done! I agree with other commentators that this was a great story - one of my favorites on literotica. For old sentimentalists like me, the comical best-friends to lovers tale brings the odd tear to the eye!
Excellent!!!!
wow
So good i wanna date my bestfriend too
Awesome!!
Awesome, no other words for it ! Thanks M-Y E, you made my day.
No words to explain
Holy shit! I wish u guys get married! This is awesome! No words can describe this!
It's irresistible the way u guys loved each other deep down and couldn't find ur way to each other until now
I had the same experience with my best friend, Aaron , we always played together until I realised I liked him, he was the reason I blushed when he looked at me and he was shy when talking to me
WOW!!
A true story of hot love Right on!!
This is truly what it's all about love and compassion and feelings keep writting good things like this !!!!
Wow
That was excellent. You described Thuy so well that I fell in love with her. Well done, mate. Well done.
Sweet
So cute.
Love The but at The end when Jacob's dad wants to go home!
This just might be the very best story on this site.
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