Nothing Between Us

Fabulous

I love to write, have read A LOT of stuff all over, first time on this website with a lot of time to kill, read a number of stories and nothing compared to this one! Loved it! Very well done....keep it up. PLEASE!

Great Story

I enjoyed the story. It's one of the best I've read. I just wanted to give you a shout out so you keep up the great work.

well done

this is the first time ive read something on this site that actually moved me and made me feel for the characters. they actually have personality!
i think you managed to make both the characters and the dialogue very credible, well done! made it all come to life.
The tenderness of it, the humour and the imperfections of life made this story great

Amazing

this was such a perfect story, I wanted to cry I was so into it! Thank you an KEEP writing!

Best story ever!

I've read a ton of submissions on this site and, usually, I find the horrible spelling, grammar, and other errors distracting. Your story had fully developed characters that drew me in and a plot that was both engaging and arousing. Please keep up the great work!

Thanks

This story moved me -- played my heartstrings. Thanks for the depth.

Simply Amazing

OMG THIS WAS AWESOME!
Totally moving and it was funny as well, I loved it.
To be honest I think this is what everyone would want!
Thanks for writing it!

My favourite

This story is one of the nicest, sweetest, most heartwarming stories I've read. I bookmarked it and read it when I'm in need of cheering up. I like how you've shown sex as a building of closeness between two people who love each other very much, which, in my experience, is what it really needs to be to feel right.

Amazing

Your story had it all- humor, sweetness and incredible passion. Keep writing.

Fantastic

Loved it. This was exactly what I was looking for. Keep writing! :D

Most well written story -ever

Clever, smart, erotic... best story I've read here in 3 years.

One of the best!

This is easily one of the best stories I have ever read!! I so hope my first time will be as passionate and as loving as this story was! Very good job amd keep up the good work!

Beautiful

A pure piece of magic.
(I wish my first time had been half that good !)

Amazing ... awesome .. i love it .. :D

Amazing ... awesome .. i love it .. :D

Lovely!

I wish my first time had been amazing like this! You've put this whole story in such detail and it's absolutely phenomenal! I'm going to favorite you!

Remarkable

I completely agree with Kiladra. Incredibly well written, amazing detail. I wish ANY experience I've had was even close to this wonderful. Hands down, the best I've ever read, and I can't wait to see more from you. Again, you are amazing.

Absolutely fan-freakin'-tastic. Loved the characters, loved the sex... and loved how I laughed my ass off at the very end. Outstanding!

Pure magic

Absolutely amazingly beautiful!

Wow

I loved it =] Amazing!!

Absolutely a great story. You should write more about them :-)

Omgggg,

This Just Inspired Me To Wait For That 'Special SomeOne To Lose My Virginity to.
Wonderful Story

Wonderful!

Great story telling! I smiled and laughed, even teared up a bit! Awesome how you inspired the 10/14/11 poster to wait for that special someone, too! Just wonderful all the way around.

Best closing comment I've read in a long time!

Safe to say I enjoyed this wee read. Guess the question now is 'more'?

great story

Kudos for a great story great build-up and finish.

((sixth star selected)) PEFECTION!!!

very hot, very erotic, very nice buildup and very, very passionate... and a hilarious ending too, lol :D

Thanks!

Great pacing. Loved the word play and the foreplay. You hit all the buttons. 'Mo?

outstanding

I dont know what you started out to write but you hit the big one with this. More please.

Damned good

Superb; well paced, exciting and with a smile at the end. What more could a reader ask ?

more please

Amazing story, very dinamic and 3D with a full storyline, and still managing to be erotic. I would love it if u would right more

I love this. LOVE LOVE LOVE this.

Love the ending :D

This was amazing..... I give it an 11 out of 10!!!!! Very Very Very great.....

Made me .... emotional

It reminded me so much of my first time (which was with the woman I am married to). You captured the moment perfectly. So beautifully done.

Rather surprised that it's not rated even higher

This story and Amy's Smile by JFinn(even though she didn't write the last chapter) are the two best Romance stories on this site IMO.

the best

4000 out of 10!

This is great

I'm really surprised this is not at the top of the
Charts. Very dynamic and beautifully written.
Great job! :)

beautiful

A beautiful story. I loved it.

this... is the best I have read on this site

absolutely wonderful.

The Best!

This was one of the most romantic and well written romance stories i've read. Should be on the top of the list

Great buildup!

Loved the buildup. Very good story. Believable and innocently erotic. Thanks.

Gorgeous!

That story was wonderful, I loved it. Sexy, intelligent, full of love, just perfect.

Beautiful!

This was wonderful!!! Write more please!

exceptional

You have some serious talent - great characters, and a wonderful story.

E57E

A truly beautiful story. Made me quite teary eyed as it brought back some memories

Beautiful

Looking back, I'd always wished I'd had the presence of mind to be more in the moment when my wife and I first did this.

Sweetest and hottest first time. Ever.

What a beautiful and sexy story. You capture the moment perfectly. Thank you.

wow!

So incredibly sexy and sweet and beautiful. Sex in love is the best there is.

This was beautiful. Every word. You have some seriously talent.

sweet and sexy

thank you for this one...best one I've read from this site...keep 'em coming.

I loved it

Funny thought, this is my first time reading this category on Lit. I really enjoyed what you put out here. Thanks for sharing.