THIS IS A WONDERFUL STORY, IT IS SOMETHING IV ALWAYS DREAMT ABOUT, WHICH I KNOW WILL NEVER COME TURE FOR ME. FALLING IN LOVE WITH MY BEST FRIEND BUT CAN ONLY LOOK AT HIM FROM THE SIDE LINE. YOU'VE MADE MY FANTASY EVER SO MORE CLEAR TO ME.
The author's ability to put into words the feelings that these two young people have for each other is great. This is seldom found.
Nookiehunter
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Anonymous04/20/06
Thank you for a great story!
This is the best first time story i have ever read. Thank you for writing this! Please do not stop writing :-)
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Anonymous05/10/06
Excellent
This is hands down one of the best stories I have ever read. It's also one of the better written stories I have read. The author exhibits a genuine understanding of love and desire. The story line is also very plausible, and the characters are charming. Great read!
I remember those feelings! You put words around an experience that many of us have had, the discovery that love is and has been right beside us.
Life is good!
Thanks for the memories.
by
Anonymous05/17/06
Truly outstanding.
Tenderness, exploration, wonderfully evocative style - best erotic story I've ever read, and first I've ever felt moved enough to comment on.
Thank you.
by
Anonymous05/17/06
Yummy.
This story was like a stack of blueberry pancakes smothered in thick, maple syrup. Thank you.
by
Anonymous05/17/06
One of the best I've ever read, period.
Possibly one of the best stories I've ever read. The characters were compelling, the emotions intense and the dialogue entertaining. Thanks for the great work!
by
Anonymous05/23/06
Truly Amazing
This story makes me realize just why i act the way i do. I've waited to have sex but have experimented some. This story shows me why im waiting. Its almost a perfect resemblence of exactly what im going thorough.
by
Anonymous05/28/06
great!
thanks for a sex story for the brain! I really liked the development and it made the end (or the beginning) of the story so much better. write more!
Best written story I've read on Literotica, takes one back to the true deep feelings of love and true passion, and passion & love are far better than just raw sex.
Writing style is unique, and you really hit it with this story. Thank you for reminding me what passion feels like, been missing in my life for too long.
by
Anonymous05/31/06
nice
wow that was 1 good wank lol :P
by
Anonymous06/01/06
Probably the best I've read, period.
I've given a number of stories fives, because I felt they deserved it. Now, with this story, I find that my votes for many of the earlier stories by others may have been premature in giving them 5's.
With only one wrong word (The ball came down through the net, so I ran *threw* it, down the baseline, and then did a quick pivot and shoot), and an actual care for the proper handling of dialog and such, this has proven to be the best written story I have read. And that's just talking about the mechanics.
When it comes to the story itself, pure magic. It builds nicely, innocently. You get to know the characters, it is not just a fuck fuck story, for which I am grateful. I truely appriciate storys of this caliber, and look forward to more like it.
Thank you for your skill and fine artsmanship.
by
Anonymous06/03/06
Heart-Warming
This is without doubt the most romantic story that I have ever read. And that's saying something indeed. It was simply perfect.
by
Anonymous06/11/06
Awesome
This was a really good story! I really like the part where Jacob gets a phone call from his mom. I actually laughed out loud. But wow, hotness in there too. Passion, love, sex? What's not to love? :))
In the three years that I have been reading and contributing to Literotica, I've read many, many stories. As in all content sites, the quality of the writing varies, ranging from the barely readable dross to the so-good-it-should-be-published-as-a book level of greatness. As a writer and proofreader, therefore, I can honestly say that this story certainly falls into the latter category.
I wish all the stories in Literotica, including my own modest contributions, were this good.
Sincerely,
Alex
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Anonymous06/18/06
Beautiful, tender, confused kids, like we were....
A beautiful love story. Would that everyone could be so lucky.
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Anonymous06/21/06
great!
it got me hoooked!
it didn't feel like i was reading an erotic story but it still got me freakin' wet.
there should be more stories like this.
it definitely deserves the number one spot.
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Anonymous06/22/06
Thank You!
No one has mentioned the great divide of the races and cultures. I am not sure how Thuy really feels. Or her family. Do they or she wish Jake was one of "their kind." We generally think that it is only natural for assimilated folks to feel as we feel. I recall from many years ago that Oriental girls do not respect "oral sex." But Thuy seems very Americanized. Of course, Love is the great uniter. Excelsior!
Thuy and Jake are people I'd love to have as neighbors. That's how believable this story is. The writers presentation of a friendship turning to love, turning to incredible intimacy, has me smiling and wanting more. The mom's setting them up is a cute touch also...BTW..The sex was well worth the wait.
It was really awesome
you are really great
I am going to see your other stories
by
Anonymous07/02/06
One of the best
This is, bar none, one of the best erotic stories I have ever read, and I've read a lot. The truthfulness of it along with the passion makes it fantastic.
by
Anonymous07/05/06
What A Beautiful Story!
I love your story and I am a conservative Vietnamese dad with a daughter going to Yale.
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Anonymous07/18/06
Becoming Jake
It isn't often that I read a story which makes my mind want to become one of the characters. This is one of those, rare, stories. I truly appreciate the way you have made Jake and Thuy real. I became Jake. I could feel, smell and taste Thuy. I am way impressed with your efforts. Thank you for this story.
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Anonymous07/22/06
loved it
Reminds me of my first time. Thanks for a story that takes me down memory lane.
by
Anonymous07/24/06
awesome
you're a great talent, keep up the good work. Definately one of the best stories i've read on here:)
by
Anonymous07/25/06
Amazing
That was thoroughly amazing, it made me hot and it was just a good story anyways.
by
Anonymous07/25/06
great
really very indearing. loved the story and thought it was very hot
by
Anonymous08/01/06
Something different
To be honest, I usually come to literotica to..get off.. heh. Then I read your story, and it was perfectly lovely. Reading it gave me the same anxious feeling that I would imagine Jake and Thuy having. Your characters are beautiful. The story was beautiful. I just really, really loved it. Thanks!
Oh P.S. still got me off. haha!
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Anonymous08/02/06
wow
this was the best story i've ever read on this site, or any other for that matter. i love how you took a little time for the characters to interact so we could understand their exact feelings. there are only two words for this story-
absolutely AMAZING
i love it
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Anonymous08/11/06
Amazing
Simply the best story I've ever read on this site. I was there with them, I was him. I cried.
It felt more real than most mainstream romances. Truly sensational.
Thank you.
That was so lovely. It was really nice to read something that just wasn't about sex and getting there straight away! It felt realistic and it made me feel all gooey inside when I'd finished reading haha. Good job.
by
Anonymous08/22/06
I Could Just Die!
I absolutely LOVED Nothing Between Us. It was my first erotic story I've ever read and I'm glad I picked this one. You rock.
by
Anonymous08/24/06
holy crap
It was so realistic, its like what I wanted my first time to be like. you could feel the love and romance flowing out of every word, it was like it was like how I felt the first time. EXCELLENT! Keep up the good work!!!
This is quite likely the best story on Literotica, and I have read a lot of them. Romance, the innocence of the two young people, the passion of one's first love, a slight inter-racial touch, not too much. It is realistic, tender, sexy, and even this middle-aged man loved it!
by
Anonymous08/29/06
Wow
This one should be published... majorly hot
by
Anonymous10/02/06
wow
it was beautifully written. think about getting this published, this could be a great short story. amazing
by
Anonymous10/03/06
gud
It was good, really described the passions and feelings two go through on their 1st time. Credit to you and the original Author!
by
Anonymous10/09/06
Very professionally done; excellent
I agree with what others have been saying about this story. It's very well written. What stands out the most about this story is the character development. The author really takes his time to describe the characters' personalities, their appearances, and backgrounds, giving the reader the feeling of knowing these two characters. Also very well edited.
by
Anonymous10/10/06
awesome!!
cute story! it was very well written.
by
Anonymous10/13/06
Utterly Believable
This is one of the best stories I have come across on this site. I was particularly impressed by the dialogue between Jake and Thuy during the first two pages, while they are still just friends. The give and take was exceedingly well done, with even inside jokes from their past thrown in. You are to be commended on a superior story, please keep up the good work.
by
Anonymous10/18/06
WoW!
That was by far the most impressive story I have ever read on this site and deserves it's top billing. Well Done and thanks
by
Anonymous10/23/06
nice
this was an incredible story. it seemed like it could be real. the dialogue, the action, the intensity of the emotions...everything. fantastic.
A beautiful story. Reminded me in part of my first time with the woman I loved and still love. Made me jealous, too. I only wish my own experience could have been like Jake and Thuy's.
English
totally made me cry.
This was so beautiful!
Wonderful !
THIS IS A WONDERFUL STORY, IT IS SOMETHING IV ALWAYS DREAMT ABOUT, WHICH I KNOW WILL NEVER COME TURE FOR ME. FALLING IN LOVE WITH MY BEST FRIEND BUT CAN ONLY LOOK AT HIM FROM THE SIDE LINE. YOU'VE MADE MY FANTASY EVER SO MORE CLEAR TO ME.
About "M-Y-Erotica"
The author's ability to put into words the feelings that these two young people have for each other is great. This is seldom found.
Nookiehunter
Thank you for a great story!
This is the best first time story i have ever read. Thank you for writing this! Please do not stop writing :-)
Excellent
This is hands down one of the best stories I have ever read. It's also one of the better written stories I have read. The author exhibits a genuine understanding of love and desire. The story line is also very plausible, and the characters are charming. Great read!
I remember!
I remember those feelings! You put words around an experience that many of us have had, the discovery that love is and has been right beside us.
Life is good!
Thanks for the memories.
Truly outstanding.
Tenderness, exploration, wonderfully evocative style - best erotic story I've ever read, and first I've ever felt moved enough to comment on.
Thank you.
Yummy.
This story was like a stack of blueberry pancakes smothered in thick, maple syrup. Thank you.
One of the best I've ever read, period.
Possibly one of the best stories I've ever read. The characters were compelling, the emotions intense and the dialogue entertaining. Thanks for the great work!
Truly Amazing
This story makes me realize just why i act the way i do. I've waited to have sex but have experimented some. This story shows me why im waiting. Its almost a perfect resemblence of exactly what im going thorough.
great!
thanks for a sex story for the brain! I really liked the development and it made the end (or the beginning) of the story so much better. write more!
Really Moving.
that is the way true love feels,best yet.
Outstanding, More Love than Sex!
Best written story I've read on Literotica, takes one back to the true deep feelings of love and true passion, and passion & love are far better than just raw sex.
Writing style is unique, and you really hit it with this story. Thank you for reminding me what passion feels like, been missing in my life for too long.
nice
wow that was 1 good wank lol :P
Probably the best I've read, period.
I've given a number of stories fives, because I felt they deserved it. Now, with this story, I find that my votes for many of the earlier stories by others may have been premature in giving them 5's.
With only one wrong word (The ball came down through the net, so I ran *threw* it, down the baseline, and then did a quick pivot and shoot), and an actual care for the proper handling of dialog and such, this has proven to be the best written story I have read. And that's just talking about the mechanics.
When it comes to the story itself, pure magic. It builds nicely, innocently. You get to know the characters, it is not just a fuck fuck story, for which I am grateful. I truely appriciate storys of this caliber, and look forward to more like it.
Thank you for your skill and fine artsmanship.
Heart-Warming
This is without doubt the most romantic story that I have ever read. And that's saying something indeed. It was simply perfect.
Awesome
This was a really good story! I really like the part where Jacob gets a phone call from his mom. I actually laughed out loud. But wow, hotness in there too. Passion, love, sex? What's not to love? :))
Beautiful
In the three years that I have been reading and contributing to Literotica, I've read many, many stories. As in all content sites, the quality of the writing varies, ranging from the barely readable dross to the so-good-it-should-be-published-as-a book level of greatness. As a writer and proofreader, therefore, I can honestly say that this story certainly falls into the latter category.
I wish all the stories in Literotica, including my own modest contributions, were this good.
Sincerely,
Alex
Beautiful, tender, confused kids, like we were....
A beautiful love story. Would that everyone could be so lucky.
great!
it got me hoooked!
it didn't feel like i was reading an erotic story but it still got me freakin' wet.
there should be more stories like this.
it definitely deserves the number one spot.
Thank You!
No one has mentioned the great divide of the races and cultures. I am not sure how Thuy really feels. Or her family. Do they or she wish Jake was one of "their kind." We generally think that it is only natural for assimilated folks to feel as we feel. I recall from many years ago that Oriental girls do not respect "oral sex." But Thuy seems very Americanized. Of course, Love is the great uniter. Excelsior!
Great Story
Loved the story. It was detailed, had great conversation, and was throughly erotic. Good job and I can't wait to read more of your work.
Kromen
Great!
This was Brillant. I look forward to more of your work. :D
Too wonderful
Thuy and Jake are people I'd love to have as neighbors. That's how believable this story is. The writers presentation of a friendship turning to love, turning to incredible intimacy, has me smiling and wanting more. The mom's setting them up is a cute touch also...BTW..The sex was well worth the wait.
...they should have sent a poet...
Unbelievably awesome! A must read!
Awesome
It was really awesome
you are really great
I am going to see your other stories
One of the best
This is, bar none, one of the best erotic stories I have ever read, and I've read a lot. The truthfulness of it along with the passion makes it fantastic.
What A Beautiful Story!
I love your story and I am a conservative Vietnamese dad with a daughter going to Yale.
Becoming Jake
It isn't often that I read a story which makes my mind want to become one of the characters. This is one of those, rare, stories. I truly appreciate the way you have made Jake and Thuy real. I became Jake. I could feel, smell and taste Thuy. I am way impressed with your efforts. Thank you for this story.
loved it
Reminds me of my first time. Thanks for a story that takes me down memory lane.
awesome
you're a great talent, keep up the good work. Definately one of the best stories i've read on here:)
Amazing
That was thoroughly amazing, it made me hot and it was just a good story anyways.
great
really very indearing. loved the story and thought it was very hot
Something different
To be honest, I usually come to literotica to..get off.. heh. Then I read your story, and it was perfectly lovely. Reading it gave me the same anxious feeling that I would imagine Jake and Thuy having. Your characters are beautiful. The story was beautiful. I just really, really loved it. Thanks!
Oh P.S. still got me off. haha!
wow
this was the best story i've ever read on this site, or any other for that matter. i love how you took a little time for the characters to interact so we could understand their exact feelings. there are only two words for this story-
absolutely AMAZING
i love it
Amazing
Simply the best story I've ever read on this site. I was there with them, I was him. I cried.
It felt more real than most mainstream romances. Truly sensational.
Thank you.
Wonderful
That was so lovely. It was really nice to read something that just wasn't about sex and getting there straight away! It felt realistic and it made me feel all gooey inside when I'd finished reading haha. Good job.
I Could Just Die!
I absolutely LOVED Nothing Between Us. It was my first erotic story I've ever read and I'm glad I picked this one. You rock.
holy crap
It was so realistic, its like what I wanted my first time to be like. you could feel the love and romance flowing out of every word, it was like it was like how I felt the first time. EXCELLENT! Keep up the good work!!!
What's left to say?
A beautifully told story. Thank you.
Simply the best
This is quite likely the best story on Literotica, and I have read a lot of them. Romance, the innocence of the two young people, the passion of one's first love, a slight inter-racial touch, not too much. It is realistic, tender, sexy, and even this middle-aged man loved it!
Wow
This one should be published... majorly hot
wow
it was beautifully written. think about getting this published, this could be a great short story. amazing
gud
It was good, really described the passions and feelings two go through on their 1st time. Credit to you and the original Author!
Very professionally done; excellent
I agree with what others have been saying about this story. It's very well written. What stands out the most about this story is the character development. The author really takes his time to describe the characters' personalities, their appearances, and backgrounds, giving the reader the feeling of knowing these two characters. Also very well edited.
awesome!!
cute story! it was very well written.
Utterly Believable
This is one of the best stories I have come across on this site. I was particularly impressed by the dialogue between Jake and Thuy during the first two pages, while they are still just friends. The give and take was exceedingly well done, with even inside jokes from their past thrown in. You are to be commended on a superior story, please keep up the good work.
WoW!
That was by far the most impressive story I have ever read on this site and deserves it's top billing. Well Done and thanks
nice
this was an incredible story. it seemed like it could be real. the dialogue, the action, the intensity of the emotions...everything. fantastic.
Overwhelming.
A beautiful story. Reminded me in part of my first time with the woman I loved and still love. Made me jealous, too. I only wish my own experience could have been like Jake and Thuy's.
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