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Absolutely stunning
Best I've read recently. So realistic and maturely written, beautiful imagery and I love how you actually took time to develop the characters. Amazing, just amazing. Please keep up the excellent work!
One of the very best
This is one of the best stories, any category, on Literotica. The characters are real, the sex is real, the friendship and romance is real. It is very touching and sweet, and very, very hot.
Absolutely excellent
This is the best story I've read on literotica, in any category. Just fantastic.
Perfect
The best Literotica story, period.
The Best Story Ever at Litero.
It made me cry it was so sweet ... and hot.
Thank you for all that it took to write this.
May all of your sexual liaisons be as special
as this story.
Me.S.
great
One of the few stories that I could relate to...most of these are just full out raunchy sex stories designed specifically for erotic interest. There are really only two that I read where the story was just as (if not more) important than the sex...this was one of them. I felt like I was reading something from my own life...
the best
this is the best story i've read on Literotica. Hell, this is the best story about anything ive read in the past several months.
Just...wow
Incredible doesn't cut it. Not only is it a beautifully written piece, but the story is incredible. It's so much like my life story that it's frightening. I don't know what else to say. It hits home. Thanks.
waste op space
Porn for people on dial-up
The Most Romantic Thing I've Ever Read
Perfect, actually made me cry; when I have my first time, that's exactly how I'd like it to be. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this.
Superb
Absolutely fantastic! hope my first time will be as good as this!
Beautiful
Intellegently and passionately written. You are a master with words. Best story I've ever read and re-read and re-read...
Excellent!
Very well thought out, very well written. Just very sweet and so entertaining...The best story I've read on the site thus far! Don't stop writing!
Great story!
Thank you for submitting this story.
The Best
Why do I need to add to what has already been said? What a story! What writing! Thanks for placing this gem amongst what can sometimes be tedious bonking!
I was thinking of submitting a story myself, but why bother when this one is here?
praise praise praise
Best erotic anything I have read in my entire life. Heartfelt and brilliant. You should be very proud.
made my day
Please, don't write more of this, i've got to learn for my exams!!
Amazing
The way you described it in the beginning made me think that it might not be your best work, and if it's not I would love to read more. This was one of the best I've read so far. I might choose this sight to get the stories from.
beautifully put
So many stories on this site are about sex as recreation or even an animal act. This one is the only one I've come across that shows it for what it should be: a beautiful and powerful way of showing love for someone. You did not cheapen it. Thank you.
Thanks!
Reminds me of my first time; reminds me of why I read rather than watching. I really don't like the way so much erotica is essentially meaningless. Good show. A+.
Amazing
Definetly one of the best first time stories out there. Other than a few minor issues I have with it, it's superb.☼ JD
Incredible.
Any chance you might be able to write a sequel? I'd love more of Thuy and Jake's idle chit-chat.
A+
Weldone- a nice, honest and exciting story!
Love it
I loved the story, it was really touching. Do you have anymore material?
One of the best...
A very good story, sensitively written, with really nice characterisation. Like all good stories, yhe lead in and sex weren't seperate - they worked beautifully together. I know a sequel would be appreciated - but only if you needed to write it! In other words, let the characters dictate the story. If there is a sequel demanding to be written, then go for it. Thank you for taking the time to write this!
Aww
I thought it was so sweet, and it was kind of awkward/funny like my first time, so it brought back nice memories. ^.^
2?
Another?
Interesting.
That's the first time I've read one that was actually realistic. And so far, it's the only time. Brilliant.
Kicked ASSSS!!
Good Job, Well Done, Bravo, Moooore please.
Thank You!
Ah, that my life had turned out that way!
I hope some folks can relate.
Beautiful story,
Xavier
Simply Great!
It was so good, I'm practically speechless! Especially memorable was the part where he tasted her for the first time and she covered her face with the pillow. That happened to me with a beautiful Oriental girl, and I cherish that moment time and time again. Thanks for a great story!
gleah.
It's wonderful, except for one thing.
The hymen is NOT inside the vagina. It's outside, at the entrance. I know that erotica writers from time immemorial have been describing heroes pushing a ways into the heroines and then encountering the hymen, but it's complete and utter bollocks. It's physically impossible. And it throws any reader who happens to be familiar with anatomy right out of the story. Please stop.
loved it
Very erotic story! The characters where way more realistic than anything I ever read. They realy responded to eachother and it certainly brought up some great memories. Thanks for submitting it and I hope you will whrite more storries soon.
this story is the shit for real
This story kicked ass because 1 it was well written and two something similar happened to me.... well done
I'm amazed
I laughed, I cried, I smiled, my heart beat fast...
Wonderful story!
WOW!!!!!!!
hav never bothered to coment befor but this one made me want to hack into the voting program so i could vote 10 or 11 5 ain't enough
Incredibly touching and believable
This author has a tremendous talent for dialogue, better than what you read in most best-selling novels. The characters' words and thoughts are so natural yet clever that you are pulled into the story as though you are part of it. Excellent work.
Amazing
That was the most touching, well written story I've ever read on this site. Congrats and keep it up!
Amazing... really amazing
Simply beautiful...
This story made me forget all around me while reading. Drawn into the emotions of the characters. I laughed, cried, felt along with them.
Amazing work, please, PLEASE keep it up!
Utterly Speechless
That was the best story that I've read in a long time. I almost felt like the character in the story, and you are extremely romantic as well. Very, very excellent job! Your partner is lucky! :) Thank you for the story.
oh dear lord
that was inarguably THE best story ive ever read it was so, you got it, everything, it made me laugh and tbh at some points i was so close to cumming myself with no need to touch anything, that ending, oh it was so lovely and funny. write proffesionally i swear you'd be huge unless you do already, i wouldnt be surprised
Amazing! SImply Amazing!
I have never read a story this deep and meaningful in my entire life. You have an amazing talent for writing and I really hope to read more of your work in the future.
No words...
Wow! That was hands down the best experience I have ever known. I hope my first time is as tender as that.
Beautiful
I am so excited to see the rest of your stories!
Best story I have read on this site! Thanks!!!
There are a lot of good to very good stories
here in Lit's archives but sometimes it is hard to locate them....
this one is a simple story, with a simple plot, but it is so well told --- as a story --- that you could almost see, feel, and touch the characters lives.
there are very few, if any, stories here in Lit that would surpass this little one in being a great little piece of literature, in any genre. i've read more heartfelt stories here before --- especially of the tragic kind --- but this one is so well told, so simple, it is almost sublime...
wonderful
it is the most wonderful story i have read here....
So very touching!
This is the first real "love" story I have read on Literotica so far; I sincerely doubt I'll find one so cleverly written again (unless you write it). Tenderness mixed with humour, awakening love and a beautiful first-time sexual experience...incredible! Thank you.
just wow
I have been reading many a story here for more years than i can count, and i must say you wrote a most excellent story.
Usually i dont go for longer stories, but you had me waiting for each page. Its currently 5:30 in the morning, but i just couldnt stop untill i finished. Awesome work. Very well done.
Nice story, BUT
"'Not too deep," Thuy said taking the pillow from her face. "Remember, it's not broken."
"Broken?"
"Hymen."
I looked down expecting to see some sort of film across her but couldn't. "Should I be able to see so I don't break?"
"Don't think so. It's inside.'"
NO, IT ISN'T INSIDE. The hymen is at the entrance of the vagina - look it up on Google,if you don't believe me
Don't guys know anything? Answer: no, they don't
A hymen inside the vagina??????????
Please don't write 1st time stories if you don't even know where the hymen is located! It's at the entrance not inside the vagina! Talk about ruining a story!
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