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byAlessia Brio©
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by Anonymous

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by Maria239402/11/06

girl....

this IS good. really fucking good. I wish I had written it.
xoxox

~maria

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by cloudy02/11/06

Wow!

that last line is a left hook out of nowhere! Great job!

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by WickedEve02/11/06

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What a good poem. I saw the title and wasn't very tempted to read it, but I'm glad I did. :)

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by dysphemist02/11/06

Unexpected...

and powerful ending!

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by My Erotic Trail02/11/06

mentioned

Your poem was mention on the thread, NEW POEMS REVIEWS...

Thanks for the literary journey

~Art~

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by Belegon02/11/06

Love the way...

...it starts external and then becomes an inner rant. Spare, compact and effective.

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by LeBroz02/12/06

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Seeing what's often missed ~
The I in the other
Reflected back...

Well done.

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by Harry Leg02/12/06

Wow

I love this one. Still reeling from the left hook.

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by MissBri03/09/06

Damn...

Honey, I totally feel this one; perfectly articulated emotion.

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by hugo_sam03/26/06

Powerful

Moving through a thoughtful, intense rant to be brought up short in self-realization. Powerful and moving. Thank you

Hugo

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