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Sorry...
... but this story is complete rubbish. There's nothing believable about the characters, the situation or the sex.
Awful
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You write "I couldn't believe my eyes or ears..."
Unfortunately, neither can I.
weird
weird and gross...not "sexy" at all
Hotter than Hot
I thought it was hot as hell....I am dripping still....more, more.....
Sick
Sorry but no guy would suck on another guy if there were two other naked woman in the room.
Rather unbelievable - even allowing for a fantasy
Although some of the English itself wasn't bad, the story was just too unbelievable to be sexy. Need some lead up rather than just diving into sex like that.
Oh, and ignore the comment about a man not sucking another man's cock. Whoever left that comment is just a homophobe!
Why the gay?
I gotta say that was pretty hot until he started sucking the other guy off. What was that all about, nobody wants to hear that. Although its not very believable at all, the rest of the story is still hot, just get rid of the gay stuff!
Good idea for the sex, but rough lead-in
The lead-up to this makes it difficult to get into. The idea of a teacher asking to bang a couple of parents without any other lead-up was hard to get through. The ideas for the sex action were good, but the descriptions needed more punch.
Make my Dick Hard
Too many nitpicking comments. Can you take any article here seriously? Made my dick hard reading so it scores high.
misclassified story
jeez, folks. it's a hypnotism story; isn't that obvious?
I'm kind of picky when it comes to grammar...?????
It's OBVIOUS that you're neither "picky", nor educated. This pathetic excuse for a story is FULL of misspellings, grammar errors, and is silly to boot.
Leave writing to writers, or at least to educated people.
Good but some problems
I really got hard and loved that story but the problem was that the POV kept changing between Debbie and John. Choose one character to keep as the narrator and it should be sizzling
Is this true?!?!?
Dude good story
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