awesome! very well written!
even better than the last story of yours that I read...I truly can't wait to read more :)
I absolutely adored it! I love your style of writing and your intelligent articulate approach. Your descriptions are accurate and sensual and your subject on this one....hot hot hot!! A real one handed read darling...am ready for a lie down now xxx
Loved it. Good sex.
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loved it!
awesome! very well written!
fantastic job!
even better than the last story of yours that I read...I truly can't wait to read more :)
Mmmm Mr Hocky
I absolutely adored it! I love your style of writing and your intelligent articulate approach. Your descriptions are accurate and sensual and your subject on this one....hot hot hot!!
A real one handed read darling...am ready for a lie down now xxx
Good scene!
Loved it. Good sex.
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