All Comments on 'Cupid's Arrow'

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TeeTeeTeeTeeabout 18 years ago
Chuckles

Very cute, thanks for the giggle

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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A nice humorous write

Now it's time to partake

Of some hot Valentine strudel

And behold once again

{I said behold, not hold}

Cupid's arrow pointing hard, straight and true.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Very funny

This made me laugh, Art

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I like it....

except for "High enough to hunt ducks with a yard rake".

Then again I was just getting the flow. sand

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenabout 18 years ago
My Erotic Trail...

always leads to a wonderful fable and this piece is no exception. MET, I am in awe of your non stop ability to create the fun storytelling only Aesop may have beat - and ONLY maybe!<grinnin'> A sexy strudel Valentine poem ala Art for us funlovin' fornicators. A great job, mi amigo!

Your Valentine Vixxxoxoxox

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyabout 18 years ago
Nutty and Fun !!!

I loved it. A great welcome back laugh

and very Happy thoughts. You know

I do so love Cupid ...

* winks n giggles *

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
oops

I was so on the fly monday I forgot to comment...this is just a fancy delight..I love the last line best...hope you had a great Valentine Day with Nin...blue

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