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Welcome back
From your long Winter's nap
With this tale well told
Of love's trust betrayed.
It was an honor to view
Your words evolve
In fairy tale rhyme
To love's trust doom.
And again
~~ WELCOME BACK!! ~~
Now where did I put the balloons & party favors?
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this poem mentioned on today's review..
missed seeing your pens..glad for your return...hugs/blue
once upon a time
there was a wanton vixxxen that enchanted us with her reads and I am so glad she is back. You already know what I think about this poem happy V-day L~
quite lovely....
I wonder...in the last line should you use "beats"? A tricky grammar one, for the grammar police to solve I guess. Please open the floodgates!
very effective.....
and though i've been so busy it is nice to see you back!! this piece weaves in the emotive and at the end has a strong longing effect. though its written in a simple fashion, it bangs away in the aorta loud and clear. nicely done......don
I know him...
He's the one that makes such a show of getting your number or email address; you know the story, after sharing a night of pleasure, he promises to get in touch later...and later never comes. Emily
Betrayal of trust
I like this variant on "Once upon a time." It's the fairy tale story of true love crashing on the rocks of a cheater's reality; hang him out to dry, I say. Patricia
Sex and Love---Don't Confuse the Two!!!
With love you can have great sex, but if all you want is the sex part---weeeelllll, there is the bathroom. And after peeking at the other comments, if you work at the love part, the sex will take care of itself---and how!!! And then why would anyone ever want to cheat???
Trust Betrayed.
He goes and plays, betrays her trust. Then when his part-time fling is over, has the nerve to want to pretend it never happened! The games men play! CP
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