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A good story but it does need some editing.
You might want to look into the volunteer editing program.
It was well written, but too many minor typos.
Regards, DJ
Totally unbelievable
That a straight girl walks into a bar-That a girl sits down next to her--Five minutes later girl #2 drops her purse--As the two girls pick ip the stuff girl number 2 begins playing with the pussy of girle number 1 and then they are offf into the wild blue yonder---
Har-de-har-har-har
Let's try to make the stories believable at least.
Great story! Wonderful Fantasy!
I really enjoyed this! It's a great quick fantasy! The charachters are nice, the sex is vivid! It certainly aroused me!
Great job!
Great story! Wonderful Fantasy!
I really enjoyed this! It's a great quick fantasy! The charachters are nice, the sex is vivid! It certainly aroused me!
Great job!
straight
Tell another one your straight ya and i'm the pope.
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