I liked the character development most. Going from not so happy memories to a budding romance between social opposites was a good idea, and the addition of the "ghost bar" added an unexpected twist.
Nice writing!
A great Valentines story. I hope you have many more in the future. I WILL read them all.
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Anonymous09/09/06
I so so loved it
to me that was so romantic I love love loved it. I couldn't stop reading it. I could see it all in my head and it was so fantastic. I really really enjoyed it
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A very cute and enjoyable story
I liked the character development most. Going from not so happy memories to a budding romance between social opposites was a good idea, and the addition of the "ghost bar" added an unexpected twist.
Nice writing!
Wonderful, romantic and erotic
Thank you for a great story
looking forward to your next story
Very Good!
A great Valentines story. I hope you have many more in the future. I WILL read them all.
I so so loved it
to me that was so romantic I love love loved it. I couldn't stop reading it. I could see it all in my head and it was so fantastic. I really really enjoyed it
Yay! So cute!!
This little series was great!
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what happend to the rest of the story??
Beautiful!
I absolutely loved it, the whole series.
That was a really good twist. I liked it alot. It made the story unique. I love it.
What a surprise GREAT ending!
A terrific tall tale!!!
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