The Vampire's Prize

great

I loved your story. It was like I was there a fly on the wall watching. I can't wait to read more about Scarlet and Max

Worst story Ever!

Wow, that was real garbage. If you wanna right vamp action, do be more like Ashby Star, he's great. He actually entertains!

Learn to write

(I hope you enjoy this and tell mewhat you think. This was my first one ever written and desrcibes me very well.)

what the hell kind of sentence is this? You'd have made my first grade english teacher cry.

Don't listen to them

Keep writing.

Great Story

This was a great story, and I hope to see more from you.

Your Story was great, I loved it.

Please write more and don't listen to the negatives.

So sorry, you lost me

right when he brought out the nipple clamps. Nothing personal, as I know some women enjoy them, but to me, that would not be pleasurable at all. So I couldn't even read the rest.

Wonderful beginning hon..

I just read Your story and I have to say.. Wonderful.. Do not take to heart to strongly the negative feedback.. Keep writing and letting your mind flow as your imagination soars and flies freely.. Not everyone will like some stories.. But I have seen alot of positive feedback here also.. So let your creativity free to grow..

Wonderful beginning hon..

I just read Your story and I have to say.. Wonderful.. Do not take to heart to strongly the negative feedback.. Keep writing and letting your mind flow as your imagination soars and flies freely.. Not everyone will like some stories.. But I have seen alot of positive feedback here also.. So let your creativity free to grow..

Wonderful beginning hon..

I just read Your story and I have to say.. Wonderful.. Do not take to heart to strongly the negative feedback.. Keep writing and letting your mind flow as your imagination soars and flies freely.. Not everyone will like some stories.. But I have seen alot of positive feedback here also.. So let your creativity free to grow..

OMFG!!!!!

this was a VERY amazing story.... please right more maybe a second chapter to this one....that would be awesome.

thank you

hope to read more of the story between these two.

amazing, woooooooooo. cant wait to hear more fo the story. please dont tell me that thats it, ill be waiting for a second part, please post soon.

me gusta...

I like this story, I hope to maybe hear more from it.

I love it!

Don't pay attention to losers who wouldn't know a good story if it bit them in the butt. I would absolutely love another chapter. I think you really have something here. By the way, I am anonymous only because I don't have an account on Lit yet. But when I get around to it, this story is going to be one of my first favorites.

I thought it was really good.. You should continue with the story!!