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Third Person Ch. 05

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by bornagain10/29/06

mind transference

its almost transferring your mind to another body your spirit vacates the body and transferes the body tp phillips body .
Pat.

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by Anonymous08/03/07

very sick shit

very sick shit

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by caoimhe4206/10/10

No more? it's a very interesting concept, and I think you could do a lot with a storyline like this :)
plus you just left us hanging lol! Anyway thanks for writing, it was delicious while it lasted.

eva

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by bimsandy200311/30/12

fantastic

thank you, it was an utterly amazing story, just couldnt stop reading. when r u posting more plzzzz

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