Some parts were long "That was the mystery"
But most parts were excellent sexy and lucious.
I would like to have read a bout with your friends?
Fantastic, just long enough between the sexy parts to keep the interest. Sure would like to see more of this type of story.
thank you for an enjoyable story to read this morning, just enough to fulfill my desires and would love to read more of father/daughter relationships... very exciting and well written...will look forward to more stories. good luck and thank You ..
Keep up the good work...
Nearly a five but I can never get my head around eighteen year old girls acting so babyish. Dialogue needs to be a bit more mature. I think using the word 'Daddy' so often is a big part of it.
Needless to say I need now to peruse the previous offerings.
Enjoyed your story and I am looking forward to others just like this. Keep on writing.
While incest doesn’t appeal to everybody, I found this story to be delightfully sensuous. People fall in love and in some cases the only solution is incest. Sad as this may be, who are we to condemn these unfortunates to a life of loneliness? Another fine tale Scouries, keep them cumming!
This was both sweet and erotic. I applaud your restraint, and your patience in building the tension between father and daughter. Do more!
You have done it again, with another romantic erotic story. Thanks.
A REALLY NICE LITTLE STORY . I'M NOT TOO SURE IF IT ALL MAKES SENSE BUT IT IS QUITE EROTIC AND KEPT ME ON EDGE .
KEEP WRITING .
There is enough racial hate in the world, you don't have to make up more false hate for the sake of your story. I am a white American, but see no reason for this tasteless beginning. It turned me off so, I stopped reading. Maybe your story is good, but your hate is not. A one rating from this reader.
Will look for more from you..
Keep up the good work..
Ignore those ones that can't see the story for what it is..
Again Great Story
I thought it was the best story I have read yet! very erotic, and I love when the stories start out with some type of suduction-not just jump right in! will look for more great stories from you!
Racism. Nice. No, really, it's totally sexy it didn't ruin it at all for me.
Now I have to hit reset and start all over again, thanks.
I was intrigued with the story and have to say it was interestingly one of the best I have read in quite a while.
Why did you have to make such disgusting racist comments? I'm a white Christian Canadian and not only were your racial slurs disgusting, they are also extremely ignorant and show how poorly educated you are. I feel sorry for you if you think race can define intelligence, personality and even body odour! I don't know of any other race other than Arabs who have such huge proportions of their youth enrolled in engineering studies in university... one of the most challenging fields to study! Racism in any form shows a high degree of ignorance and lack of education on your part!
What kind of moron writes a negative comment about racism while reading a story about incest? Sorry folks, you can't have it both ways - you can't pick and choose your moral standards and expect others to respect anything you have to say. Fantasy is fantasy - and the bad guys are just as much a part of that as the incest...get off you high horse or go visit another sight.
there are aspects of your story that intruige me, the wantonness of the daughter, the inevitability of the father's submission but there are also things that it lacked.
1. I question the start of the story and would have liked to see some genesis of the feelings.
2. Where's the mother?
3. When the father succumbs to her it's through a yelling match and then presumably he acts with equal ferocity only to recant and say they had all night once she was in the bed?
All in all it's not bad but maybe that's what makes these things more frustrating.
the racial stuff at the beginning was a turnoff. The rest of the story, though, wow!
Erotic, sexy and fun! I would have liked more sex between them, although the initial fuck was excellent! As was her anticipation and build up.
nice story, but the racism turned me off.
and for your info, all arab men are circumcised. it is an essential part of being a muslim.
Good story when it finally got to where it was going. But really too much of nothing to get there.
I agree with the comments that it took too long to get to the sex, and not enough sex. I was hoping for more
In reading the other comments i realized the whole racism part failed to even compute with me. As a Nyer i can first and foremost say that unfortunatly after 9/11 it's a fear a lot of people have, and i appreciated the reality of that. With that being said i was in love with your story! I'm currently on my way to read more. I've never been in an incestious relationship and i've NEVER commented on a story but this really really intruiged me. Thank you and I hope you keep writing :)
The story was awesome, and to those who say it was 'ruined' by the 'racist' comments, I would just like to say "GROW UP, AND JOIN THE REST OF US IN THE REAL WORLD." Just about every country in the world holds great disdain for America, yet we are villified when we voice our opinions about the rest of you. Your disdain and hatred doesnt seem to stop all of you from moving here and enjoyings its freedoms, like freedom of speech, without which, you wouldnt be reading this story. Have you checked the chinese internet restrictions from the headlines lately? Everybody hates and fears someone else; don't slam a great story due to your intolerance for freedom of expression.
~If you can read this, thank a teacher.
If you're reading it in english, thank a soldier.
one of the best that I read in a very long time. Hope to see moor of you stories very soon
Glad to have you back again. As far as the accusations of racism, forget it. If the story had taken place in 1939 it would have been the Krauts who were the bad guys. 1941? The slant-eyed Japs. Since 9/11 its become the Arabs. Its a fact of life and a human frailty that we lump the guilty and the innocent into one group to intensify our anger for some grevious act or other. I can remember as a kid in the WWII years choosing sides to play war. One group would HAVE to play the "Jap" or the "Kraut" and they were expected to lose. That's the way it was. Regardless of age, race, or national origin, we all learn to carry our hate well.
As far as the lack of detailed sex, I'm afraid that comes from the pimply-faced teenagers who think you write stroke stories. Scouries, you are great at putting the sex into a story where it belongs and in just enough detail to draw the attention of the less then purient. Good job. Thank You. Ronnie w.
I enjoyed your story, which had enough romance in it to make me want to be "in it" and enough eroticism to make me real horny.. Thanks write some more
Thanks again for another hot story - It is always exciting to read another submission from you! Only criticism from me is that I too felt there was no need to bring in the Arab/muslim bit at the beginning. I found it stereotypically racist and unnecessary. But otherwise it was a pleasure to read and thank you.
u made me cum twice reading the story just once....
It seems that the 'climax' of the story might have been more effective through a buildup of smaller "we almost did it" or "make out" sessions.
You have never failed to please me scouries. I wouldn't worry about all the racisism crap, and just do what we ALL know you can do, and that's write damn fine, hotter than hell, erotica. Just keep 'em cumming friend...
Just wanted to make a few observations:
One – I want to thank everyone who commented and voted - as of today more than 37,800 people have opened the story, 813 have voted on it, I’ve got 32 public comments and over 30 e-mails. This is more votes and comments than any of my other twenty-five stories have received – Thanks!
Two – re the accusations of racism etc. - In my story Steffi is trying to awaken her father’s fear of her violation and so obviously paints her imaginary attackers as vilely as possible. Remember, in today’s America the bad guy is the bearded, crazed, Arab terrorist. To think Steffi would use any other group in the context of the story is simply foolish. Lighten up everyone - fictional characters aren’t worried about political correctness.
Racist nonsense. Cartoon sex.
How different people react to things?
It hadn't even occurred to me that there was anything racist in this - in fact the comments referring to racism completely baffled me.
What I read was a story I could lose myself in - I could "be" Steffi - feel her love and lust for her father; her excitement at making it happen; her fears that maybe she'd gone too far afterall.
Fantastic story, Scouries - your characters are believable; the battle between right and wrong - the settling for what feels right is great.
i came like three times just reading it dont know what i would do if i was the one actually in the story
This is the best story I've read on this site or any other. What a way with words. You built the story from a warm start to a crashing climax(no pun intended. If you don't do this professionally you should consider a change in carears!
What a great story. As to the racism comment cannot see what anybody is worried about agree with your comments 'what do fictional people know about it.' Keep up the good work+
i thought it was outstanding and very well put, i wish it had never ended, ohhh well
One of the best stories I have read so far.Keep up the good work.
masterpiece from the King of Incest. And the shameless pleading for the gratification of votes was just as impressive. Great job.
My daughter and I like your story have found bliss together.
Our sex life is unlike any other I have ever experienced.
We thouroughly enjoyed reading your story.
Thank you much!
MMM A great story....well written and believable.
Thoroughly enjoyed it, very well written. The suspense leading to the end was tremendous. An ace in my book, keep up the good work. Expect to see many more like it!!
The story was sexy and arousing. That's what most of us come to this site for. Well done. Keep 'em coming.
If that story is true I am amazed.
God!!!!! What a fabulous story. Absolutely one of the finest if not THE finest I have read here or anywhere else. I surely did not want it to end at all. Keep up the good work!!!!
a wonderful build up - sexy as hell - and a beautiful love... thanks
Well written Wonderful story. More, please.
I think the only problem I saw was his rapid change of thought concerning sex with her. It should have been drug out a little bit longer. I would have enjoyed him struggling with the moral dilemma of the situation for awhile before taking her the way he did.
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