"Daddy?" I Whispered

ITS NOT UNCOMMON

great story
i actually know a girl exactly like that except that she isnt a doctor and she doesnt have kids lol,
incest is more common than u think ;P

btw this is the best story on this site

iv never commented before but .... that was a good read. i had to say it.

Anonymous

I am happy to hear that there are lucky fathers and daughters out there. I wanted to be with my daughter but circumstances prevented that dream for me.

i never had a thing for my father it was always my uncles. Very well written and i give you a five.

I want my daddy

I want my daddy !
But im younger than 18 im 15

Very well written for the most part, though I will say I found the part on arabs more than a little racist, (just a side point as well, but something that is niggling at me since i read it: most arabs are muslim, and therefore are circumcised at birth!), and it made our protagonist come across as terrifically manipulative! However, it also highlights the idea of incestuous desire as stemming from an idealogical fear of the other, the outsider, and as a desire to hold on to the familiar, and I feel that is what the author was trying to convey, if a little heavy-handedly.

That said, I thoroughly enjoyed this story and its underlying message! It's clear that the author knows the subject matter very intimately, and managed to both entertain and inform with their work. Keep up the good work!

Great story i love the part when u say information about father and daughter incest.

Please

Author sure spends a lot of time writing reviews of his own story. This story is racist, childish, and in great need of a proofreader.

A working imperfect romance! Astounding!

The story was touching. And I was until now, sure that incest was wrong. But if a daughter can be that happy as a partner to her father, then by all means it must be legitimate. I was surprised when you talked about having kids, but it's truly romantic that such a marriage worked. Congratulations on your beautiful marriage. 5/5!

great Story

A very graphic story and enjoyed it may be consider describing more about the clothing and underware you were wearing when you dressed for your father in the story context.
Other than that loved it.
kdp1955

Amazing

Our three girls were born during those years, and now at 11, 9, and seven they're the centre of our existence, of our happiness.

Lol is he going to fuck them to?


I read this story and i'll be dammed if i let my future daughter take away my future husband >.<
I;m going to do everything in my power to keep him under my power :3

This was wonderful

daughter

Well, it definitely gave me an orgasm

1 happy father

found the story very nice but it toke too long leading up to finaly getting to Paris and the relationship to start. It would have been better to cut the start down and writing about the relationship and sex they had on there holiday.You could have written about their wedding night and how they started their family. But on the whole a nice story.

Though I don't

feel that way about my father, NO WAY. It made me really hot because I can understand if someone else feels that way and I applaud them because it's a beautiful thing to share, especially if it leads to something promising like marriage and all the more luckier if there are healthy children! A sweet story, I'd give you 3, simply because I felt the arab comments were distasteful on your part; I am not attacking your moral standing as I am sure you didn't want to convey such a message, you just wanted to deliver a special story to us that we could all learn from. :)

i wish

after i read this i would have sex with my dad, but i would never want to marry him. i love these long stories they make me relly wet.

WELL DONE -

Excellent story flow. Good suspense and tension. Length of article is very good. Timing and character interaction is well planned.

True Love

Well written. Good story!

Almost 5*.

If it weren't for a few 'localization errors', it would have been 5 stars.

NOTE: We Americans drive on the right side of the street, hence the driver's side is on the left inside the car so it would be his right hand free on page 2. Also, we don't generally use the term 'bum.' Try 'ass' in the future, when the characters are American.

Awesome!

I barely made it through without needing a pack of kleenex. I will be back!

Loved it

Loved it.. I haven't read stuff like this since early high school a few years back. Now I wanna research this! And is it possible to marry your father? Or have healthy children? Haha.

Thanks!

you will go to hell,thats pervertion.repent

you will go to hell thats pervertion and diabolic

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwww w.

YUUUUUUCK!

Whoow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a wonderful story, full of suspense and sexual expectation. I love a story where it all falls in together and your knickers are soaking wet with the way it makes you feel. Father/daughter love is something special but to take it too another level like you have done here makes it even more exciting. I have always loved my father dearly and used to share his bed on a saturday morning when he didnt go to work. I loved those special moments when it was me and him snuggled up together, nothing out of the ordinary happenned but as I grew up I always thought about what it would be like with my father........thanks for the story.

Awsome!

This story, is just wow. Awsome is an understatement, but it's the best word I can think of at the moment. And for all the people who say yuck or ew or whatever. If you think it's so gross, why are you reading it in the first place? Don't stop writing Scouries, you're absaloutely awsome.

amazing

i absolutely loooooovvvveeedddd it!!!!!! it was very well written and it definitly did the trick and got me wet and ready. i loved the romance of it also. i also think adding the end where u know they are still together and have children was very good!!! well done!!!

Father and daughter

Great great story my daughter and i read it togather and got us so worked up we just had to get undessed and make love, we have since became lovers,so much thank you

Fantastic

My sister & I just finished reading this and it is beautiful. You clearly understand pacing and mood, and you have a real penchant for capturing why it's so romantic. Utterly sensational; we loved every moment of it! Thank you for bringing so much class and art to this genre.

-Jack & Megan :)

Comment On Story.

This was a great story, from start to finish.

The part I enjoyed most was "If its so wrong why is there Ten Million Hits on Yahoo, and why are a Million Fathers sleeping with their daughters tonight" The Daughters Arguement could not be topped.

I love happy Sex and although I am much more into Sister, Brother, close age Incest with the Sister being older.

As long as the Female is totally oboard and in charge and happy I am okay with anything that does not involve Anaimals. Leave the Barn alone except to have Sex in it.

I find reading Stories better then Pictures and Better then Videos as Stories take place over a longer period of time. Far more Graphic and No One Is Working The Camera.

You are a fine writer from the Female Point and I shall read much more of your work.

I am glad the girl went on to get her degree. That they live a fairly normal life etc.

Bodyies do not have to be in great shape and Penis does not always have to be Big to make a good story, however there is No Harm In Doing That.

We just want the people to be mostly sober, non violent, and the female on board.

best ever

this is the best story ever. you are a fabulous writer.

keep up the good work

i loved the way you built up to the climax of the story! the sexual tension between the characters from beginning to end was brilliant! keep writing, you're really good!

wow

Excellent, hard as a rock, gonna read this one to my daughter, as I am inside her.

Grand-daughter/daughter incest

wouldnt it be cool if you did were he also impregnated the daughters too and they all had kind of like a five-some :)

captivating!!

I am not a supporter of incest, but you have written so well it seems real. My cock grew harder as I read to the end of your fascinating yarn, and I wanted to relieve the pressure in the only way left for me. I lost my fuck partner 6 years ago,after 60 years of wonderful intimacy, and have had to resort to hand jobs, which are great but not as great as having a warm, lovely woman involved.

Mmmm

I shall read this also whilst banging my young daughter

wow

This was just mindblowingly hot, I'm a girl and came twice. Soo hot

Thank you

Easily one of the best stories I've read on this site to date. Maybe one of the best erotic stories I've ever read. I feel that most "erotic stories" these days have lost what really makes them erotic and have simply become poorly written smut. Your story is a shining example of excellence in a place where I had almost given hope searching.
Bravo, really.
~ A Fan

Great

Lots of erotic stories are placed on this site but very few are well written where the stories leave the boundaries of just an erotic story and goes towards literature. Your's is one such story where along with the language and writing style, the emotions are also taken care of. Good writing , keep it up.

Nicely done

I think one of the best lines from the story is, "wearing our orgasmic juices like a proud cloak". The ending though was very enjoyable. Nicely written, good flow, nice execution.

So ... when do you write the book and how can I buy a copy?

So well done. I enjoyed every moment of it! Don't stop now ... your fans are waiting!!

Good work

This is a great story your a gifted writer I'd love to be her daddy.
Have you considered writing a series? My favorite series is a back rub 4 Julia check it out.
Thanks 4 the story was hot;)

Best story I ever read on literotica.you rock.

Maybe you should start a series or write a book

Great Incest story

The story may not be entirely true but the way it was written it is thrilling, infact I think I can rank it 87%. PLEASE NOTE that my runking is based on evaluation of the overall.

So your overinflated ego loves comments on your stories? Well, here goes. I found this story to on the level of a junior high schooler. The female protagonist, Stephanie, speaks like she's 12, not a college graduate.

The plot itself is paper thin. The father throughout the story seems reluctant to participate in any of this and he seems more like he's forced into it. That's just the impression I got. I always had a feeling of uneasiness coming from him.

As far as them having a child together, that's ludicrous. Do you realize the risks involved in blood relatives having a child together? For starters, if the child does grow up healthy and normal, how do you think he or she would fair emotionally? "Oh, here's my mom and here's my dad, who's also my grandfather." Um...eww. Of course, there are very good chances the child could end up with serious birth defects because of being conceived between a father and daughter, so just add that to the emotional trauma the child would have to face.

The overall writing leaves a lot to be desired. You're in serious need of an editor. For being the self-proclaimed #1 author on Literotica and self-proclaiming this as the best story, you might want to polish your writing skills a bit more. Perhaps you could attend one of those writing seminars you're so fond of promoting. Surely, you must know someone who can teach you a few things about writing sensual, erotic incest stories.

This story is nothing more than a stroke story that reads like it was written by a 12 year old. Fitting since as I mentioned at the beginning of this comment, the female protagonist comes across as 12, not 20 something.

So there you go. You wanted a comment, you got it. Although I'm sure you won't share this one on your thread because it doesn't sing your praises and tell everyone how wonderful you are.

Too bad, if you learned to take the good with the bad, maybe you could rise above your ego and actually become a better writer.

Best I have read so far!!!

I loved this story I have been reading on here for almost 2yrs and this is by far one of the best. I hope you will write more for these Characters and hopefully write in the novels section too.....

ummm...

Pretty lame story. I generally like the father-daughter dynamic, yet somehow it failed to arouse me. Get a new hobby.

Also the Euro wasn't introduced around Europe till January 1999... so why did your "dad" give the Frenchman some in 1994?

i really enjoyed your story ,,,it kept me reading right from the begining
it was erotic and sexy love story,,and i will look out for more,,from you ,,thank you,,

I loved it 16 and dream of it

I love these stories i'm 16, M and I dream of this when I get older

Fantastic story!

This reminded me of my experience with my daughter. You have a great talent for writing.

Feedback

I enjoyed the psychological facts thrown in the story. The Electra complex usually happens around six although like your story it can continue once the daughter "grows up". I also like the fact that you had a story, not just a sex scene.

(Though a small note it is highly unlikely that at least one of their children wouldn't have come out without a birth defect. What with the DNA being so close.)

All in all good story I enjoyed it 4