"Daddy?" I Whispered

Enjoyable writing!

Your writing flows nicely and is pleasant to read. The dialogue is not stilted, and the characters have distinctive and believable voices. The sex is nicely written--erotic and hot, but with taste. One of my favorite stories on the site!

A little wordy to by honest, still gave it a 5

another fantastic story

I love the mental foreplay of both of them, well written and very hot

Awesome!

Awesome story! Drove me WILD with the sexual tension Father and Daughter.. it was beautifully written! What other stories have you written with a similar story line?

Happy life

That was aswome an I hope that u live a long anhappy life with him

Great Story

most of the other stories on this site jumped right into the incest sex like it was as east and as acceptable as taking a walk in the park...this story actually went through several realistic stages when the daughter and father r trying to get things started...great job I just wish I wasn't an only child and that I had a dad!

Daughters are always ....

Daughters always have their daddies wrapped around their pretty little fingers ... and if they would be completely truthful to themselves, daddies wouldn't have it any other way.

A lot of Daddies dream of becoming their daughter's lover and then their husbands, but for better or worse they control their urges and never let their feeling take control.

Your story and so many just like it allow us to fulfill our dreams, fantasies and forbidden urges without damaging our daughter or our families. Thanks for the fantasy and please keep writing your talents and imagination are a wonderful combination.

Love to read more of your writings.

Amazing story

The title of this coment says it all

Very very good !!!! Keep up the good work

propaganda of hatred

you write a story incestuous, or you make a propaganda of hate against Arabs?

"They scared me so much Daddy! They were foreigners... Arabs I think, big, ugly, dirty men with long smelly beards. They wanted to rape me Daddy, despoil me because I'm an American.... "
" They hate us Daddy. They hate us because we're blond and good looking and healthy and smart and happy and Americans and Christians..."

remember that it is the Americans who made 4 million dead in Iraq, while continuing to do the propaganda of hatred against the Arabs for the next time the U.S. will be 8 million lives in another Arab country.

"Propaganda of hate" - get real dude, isn't your presence on this site against the Koran or something?

Fucking idiot - go back to your 3rd world country and stay there jackass.

Amazing work...please try to write abt an indian conservative daughter and dad as well..even my dad has a thick black cock..this story reminded me of him..i hav seen my maid giving him a blowjob once..

Amazing work...please try to write abt an indian conservative daughter and dad as well..even my dad has a thick black cock..this story reminded me of him..i hav seen my maid giving him a blowjob once..

very good

Extremely hot story.

Well well well

I see what all the hype is about. ;D I've never been into the incest angle, but that is definitely hot.

I loved it, but one little error shone through

I really loved that story. In fact, you are a very good writer. However, you should take note that there are no tactile nerves in a woman's vagina, except at the opening and at the G spot. And don't pay attention to nasty comments from the obviously self-hating.

My own fantasy!

Powerfuly written! I enjoyed ever second but the part I most liked.... well I think it was everyone's favorite part ;) Thank you for this amazing story, I will read again.

Loved it

I loved every inch of it

Sex dad and daughter

very good

fulfilment

at last, her waiting paid off big time and was totally sated

Wow.

That was a very good story. I really liked how you touched all three stages of the relationship: the foreplay, the sex and the "morning after". You know, their lives together. It was perfect, and innocent in a weird way for being an incest story.

Nice work.

great

Excellent!
Can't wait for your next one.
Loved the time line

cool

fuckin seducing;;;

Coincidence?, Naw

i love your story! And what a coincidence i had a sexual relationship with my dad too! ( Also with my brother :)) keep writting!

Perfect

Your story was wonderful. I loved it. The story progressed really well and was very sexy. Makes me think of the relationship with my own father. Keep writing. You are wonderful. Thank you for sharing

very nice

i wish my dauter would let me fuck her like that, and my daughter-in-law too

ONE OF THE BEST WRITTEN PIECES I'VE READ. WELL FORMED, GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT, AND GOOD READING RIGHT UP TO THE END.

enchanting!

Although I had read this story some time ago, it held me enthralled to the very end. My 87 y.o.cock rose to the occasion as the sexual union of father and daughter took place. It was so well described, and I was an observer of the most wonderful thing that can happen between man and woman. I gave it 5 votes!

Simply amazing!

It paints such a vivid detailed picture in my head.

Review

Amazing story, Really does give a mind blowing image into this story of love!

MORE MORE MORE

THE ONLY THING THAT COULD BE BETTER WAS IF I WAS THERE WATCHING

bigoted trash

Of course the men who raped and abused her in her dream were "Arabs." You are bigoted, semi-literate American, who, despite what another reader says, cannot spell simple words. Even the sex scenes were unimaginative and boring.

drinkin hateraid

I thought its a great story. American girls are afraid if Arab men. Look at the American media. They kill American soldiers. Beyond that story has great detail and a pleasent buildup of tensions.

I get it...

I really enjoyed your story, it's a bit of a fetish for me. I am a girl from a single mother family, so for me "father" is a vague authority figure that I confuse in my head with something of a "Master" in a slave/Master relationship. Always in control, that sense of ownership and protection...

As for the racism comments, the public would have said that to -any- group you put in that role; black, Asian, white, even something vague like "poor", or "fat".

However, you may want to paint a different bad-guy, because your story is set in 1994. 9/11 hadn't happened yet. It's far more likely she'd paint a picture of a fear of Europeans, more in the flavor of "Hostel" than generic "Arabs".



Oh, and to the reader saying "all Muslims are circumcised"... When did he mention the religious sect of the Arabs? Not once. He painted "bad people" as stereotyped as he could so the girl could manipulate her father. Not once did he say they were Muslims, nor terrorists. So now who's being racist? You saying all "bad" Arabs must be Muslims??

lovely

this is a fettish for me too but i dont like my dad or anything. at first this turned me on extremely but then at the end not only was i turned on but it was a really sweet story :) very well put together.

I loved it, but I found the part of the Arabs raping her (although she was making it up) very racist and offensive...other than that great job.

Sweet

I thought it was exquiset. These are the types of stories i enjoy: a longing for them both but one avoids it[or tries to], a lovely tension buildup and the embraces. i laughed at the bellhop part. keep writing!

The Future

Please let the story continue with the three daughters!

your story has captivated me twice now. I enjoyed it both times ive read it! I sincerely applaud your creativity. Thank you so much for your story.

Amazing

Amazing story but thought it was stupid tht they got married

nice story but too

nice story but too much long

SEXY!!

Very nice! Please make more!

loved every line!

please write more and more! this is one of the best!

this story was very well written, but the ending was kinda of bleh and uneeded.

10+++

I GIVE IT A 10++++++++....IT WAS AN AWESOME STORY...I WANT TO READ MORE FROM YOU....KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK...AND MORE ABOUT FATHER/DAUGHTER INCEST SEX....I LOVE IT

question

You have three daughters correct? Would you mind it if he slept with them when they reach legal age? Could you dare think the father of your kids would sleep with them? Could you picture that? I don't have a problem with incest but its a interesting thought. if you did have a son would he have a problem with you sleeping with him?

yeah

It was a good story but how old was the girl again 18 or 8? That daddy shit got on my nerves. Daddy wasn't needed.

perfect

Its awesome n jz perfect n the best one I ever went through

OMG !!!!

it was awsome !!!

Wow

Awesome story really amazing