"Daddy?" I Whispered

An very, very nice Lovestory.

oh...

This story is amazing!! :)

Romance is not dead is it?

This is a lovelt story. Godd writing and especially good descriptions of the emotions the central protagonist is feeling. Well done

kids

You should include details of their kids who have 2 heads and low IQ's. Maybe daddy will nail his kid/grandkids and we need some buttsex action where he squirts his ballbatter in her shitbox.

GREAT STORY!

I thought your story was great good details and an even better climax. The only thing that bothered me was when they are arriving in France a character says "bienvenue, welcome" in the style of french spoken in Europe bienvenue is used to mean the same thing as welcome in english so you really don't need it again after that.

Nice!

wow you are good I'm only 24 and I used to write a little something you gained another reader.

shocked

I never read a story like this with a beautiful ending..You are a great writer needless to say 5 Stars!!!

Style, fluency, characters, but...

You have a fantastic writing style and a fair building of the primary characters, along with little quirks to the subsidiary characters that really puts the depth into your story that makes readers carry on through the pages.

Having said that, I feel that you have lost a fair few readers in the beginning, with the daughter's feigned 'rape' nightmare.

You have a skill with writing and a talent for building tensions & creating plot developers, which makes me wonder why you write this little insert so terribly.
In one small section, you manage to make a good portion of your readers cringe, while insulting an entire group of people.

The inflections against Arabs and their stereotypical collocations is someting that is not only outrageously unneccessary in the story, but also ludicrous in the way that you portray them, specifically as a people, as the antagonists to the story, as well as the noticable glorification of the protagonists American status.

Creating race/nationality specific roles in this nightmare adds nothing to the story, and shows the character, and the author, in a very questionable light. It has extremely racist attitudes, both positively and negatively to Americans and Arabs respectively, and it averts people from continuing to read.

I gave you the benefit of the doubt, continued to read, and was glad that I did so, because you are a very talented writer. However you must be extremely conscious of what goes into your writing, because it doesn't simply cast a shadow over your work, but over yourself as an author as well.

do keep writing, but please bear in mind how your reader will follow your words, and how it will affect their view of your stories.

To Those Who Disaprove

If you read this and feel guilty for it, don't insult this talented writer, simply rationalize it, both parents were blondes, her mother cheated on her father and became pregnant with her, no incest, no two headed-babies [which is impossible, so go read some biology books who ever said such a ridiculous thing]. Rationalize this and just make up a back story if you're uncomfortable with it, just because it's not there doesn't mean it's not a possibility. And to the author, Darling, please continue to write and to give us all wonderful happy endings such as this, ignore those who seek to drag you down [though i do agree that the comment about Arabs is rude and a completely unnecessary stereotype, even though my fiance fought in iraq and has a nasty opinion of the Arabian people, but still, just say they were hideous, and if at all possible, make at least one caucasian, if us whities are also to blame it makes it un-racist, nifty huh?] anyway, keep writing and keep up the Daddy/daughter incest, it's what certain people like me crave

860 comments! that just about says it all - perfect!

It was okay

I was into it until you mentioned "dirty Arabs." Racism like that isn't sexy. Not only that, but you seem to think that Americans are better than others. Besides that, it wasn't terrible, I guess. But that really put me off.

Dirty Arab?

Loved the story but the pick on the arab bit was not called for. You have too good a writing style to pick out any specific peoples and could have made them 2 guys in a dark alley that scared her. No reply required, just wanted to ad my 2 cents.

Perfect!

Wow. I enjoyed the whole story that went along with it too!

What a great story

What a great story of love between father and daughter, I could feel the love in your writing.
I am filled with envy of this man.
Keep writing you do it so well.

Wow!

That was so Hot! My panties are completely soaked. Thank you!

Ummm

The story was sweet, sexy and romantic. But the racial profiling was very uncalled for. I hope you were just reaching for shock value instead of following such a low value system.

wow, gave me the biggest hard on ever

Was awesome, couldnt stop reading and thinking about this, was awesome and im into blondes anyway so it works for me!!

Anonymous

One of the most romantic incestuous stories that made me wish i had a Virginia Slim after reading it.

Wow

As in Wow, how totally sexy and WOW, how totally racist.

WOW LOVED THIS ALOT!!!

Very beautiful story.. What a lucky man he is...

great story. but i couldn't help thinking about how many disabilities their children must have considering they're inbred hahaha

Makes meh horney

oh god i'm sooo horny now.
i'm sooo wet.
ahh someone fuck me!
the BEST

Beautiful story, except...

I loved the story, except for the fabricated dream about the "big, ugly, dirty" Arabs who wanted to rape her, etc. Get rid of the racist overtones and it'll be perfect.

DADDY DOC AND DAUGHTER

WELL VARY GOOD AND YES I DID MAKE IT TO THE END TWO TIMESONLY BECAUCE THE READING WAS GREAT AND I LIKED THIS KIND OF STORY WITH HAPPY ENDINGS I WOULD GIVE A 5 PLUS STARS TOP MARKS IN MY BOOKS
THE LAY OUT OF THE STORY FIT THE PICTURE NICE LOVEING AND CLOSE.
I WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE OF THIS KIND OF STORY................."R".........

"SEEMS"

A FAIRY TALE ,LEAVES NO REGRETS ONLY SMILES.

Racist

You're obviously a racist cunt! Typical fucking yank! And for the record, as most Arabs are muslim, they are circumcisied.

wtf? rascist!

Who the fucking hell do you think you are? So fucking racist!!!! "The big, ugly, dirty" Arabs who were so mean and wanted to rape me Daddy....
What the hell?!!!!!!!! You destroyed the whole fucking story. god....I cant even believe people are so fucking narrow minded. Americans are so "smart and healthy and good looking.." what the fuck?!!!!!

A good Story

I love the story and it is easy to read. Very good. I gave 4 stars because in parts it was stretched to long.
And too those other comments about racism, don't worry.
Some people just need to find the bad in everything.

LOVED IT !!!

I loved it. From begining to the almost incredible happy ending.

A Very Good Story

Very well written, ignore the small minded people who complained about the racist bits, do they complain if someone gets murdered in a story?

Wow

Wow... Did the kids turn out fine? Anyway, pretty good story. Her dream was... Well, if she felt that way, she felt that way. Once again, nice story.

I enjoyed the story. It was a good read, and I thoroughly agree about dirty Arabs. If I had nightmares about any such thing, you can be sure it would be about a disgusting Middle Eastern. :)

OMFG

this story is perfect, anyone who complains about racism, look at the history of mankind...then you can comment. OH WELL. This beautiful work of art, which could be fantasy....arguably is the greatest incestuous stories on this site. I gave it a five. NBP

this is m fav.!!!

i am totally in love with incest!!!! ( even though i would never do it) this story makes me cum every time and is my absolute favorite!!!!! i gave this story a 5... but the racist part kinda shocked me....

loved it!!

Loved,loved,loved!!!

A DAUGHTER'S LOVE

I wish I had a daughter or two like that.

the fuck u had wimpy36.wa@gmail.com

Knowing that's your Father was the best Fuck u had.

fucking sick

Wtf is this shit

Dayyyym

great story especially the sex at the end. loved her naivity and the racism that everyone talks about didnt bother mme in the slightest- ITS A STORY for christs sake!
great work keep it up

Classic

Indeed a classic,

WoW

Good story but three kids is a no no by any member of your family even if it is a fiction story that's gross!!!!!!!! And married to your own dad that's worse!!!!!

Phenominal

This story was amazing. To adress some people's problems with the racisim this story wasn't written in present day, so the racisim is very accurate and a nice touch. And this story tells perfectly of the romance, I loved it so much that I've actualy read it more than once.
The story flows perfectly from one event to another, creating the illusion that the reader is actualy a part of the story.
I give this story 5 stars, and would happily give 5 stars again.

pretty hot it had me all wet wishing i was her

short & sweet

not too lengthy, good build up, great sex scene & seductions!! do u feel the racism added to the story? if it was to show state of mind of the characters, it only shows us they r racists. who practice incest. still, it made me quite wet!

Stop complaining

Who ever said this person was racist. How would u know if they were racist or not. And to the person bad mouthing this it warned u in the beginning so why keep reading? It was a great story, 5 stars.

I don't usually read this kind of story

but I found it well written and intriguing, excellent. 5*

OUTSTANDING

absolutely loved this story!!

wet all the way

i love incest stories,but yours was phenomenal. thank you for this sexy,passionate,naughty,lustfull,yet in the end beautiful story. totally got me feeling horny. 5*****

Budu bu ba baa I'm lovin it

Gotta love incest, best story I've read in years, even better then the sex stories I've been reading lately. 5 damn *****'s