Really hot. I enjoyed reading it, got me very wet.
by
Anonymous04/09/12
wow that was fantastic
as a female i know how it felt for her .as a young girl i also made love with
my father.my mother died when i was very young .and my father and i began making love to each other when i was 13.
by
Anonymous04/14/12
Oh my god...
Seriously, this was immense... without doubt the best piece of erotic fiction I have ever read... by the end of it, I didnt even notice that it was a story about incest, it became a tale of raw animal lust, desire, passion and unrelenting sexual chemistry... thank you for giving me enough material to fuel my fantasies for a very long time...
by
Anonymous04/18/12
The best on this site by far!
I have read every single incest story on this site and this story has by far ranked my number 1. I am not attracted to my father, but I have always found the 'daddy/daughter' scenario to be at the top of my 'want list.' I would give anything in this world to find an older man who I could call my daddy and husband. Anyway, your excerpt, again, is the best I have ever read. Not only was it sensual and sexual, but touching and promising. I do hope that this is a true story, and if it is, I would give anything just to know you and talk to you because you, my friend, are an inspiration. From the bottom of my heart, Thank you. Thank you for sharing. - Ms. :)
by
Anonymous04/20/12
incest with emotion
hay im a doctor,basically a psychiatrist..just wanna say that it was an incest story and most of the peaple think bad as its forbidden...but this story was full of emotions and love not just hunger or just sexual urge which makes it no 1...
Honestly The best father daughter story I've ever read! Most people in the incest section don't have much for story telling, they just have a sexual fantasy they need to express. But with this its truly like art! Your story telling abilities are phenomenal! This is the first story of yours I've read but i have no book marked your page! Congrats on a job well done! 5 stars
by
Anonymous04/30/12
im wet as fuck.
by
Anonymous04/30/12
eating, sucking and fucking little cute young sweet fresh honey pussy
eating, sucking and fucking littleeee cuteee youngggg sweetttt youngggg pussyyyyy is a heaven in this earth ihave enjoyed this heaven more than 100 times includng
sweet young fresh cute little sisters and daughters
mail id nvrajann@gmail.com cutties are you rweady
by
Anonymous05/02/12
Damn
Wow dude, maybe the best I've read on this site -personally- let alone the taboo section. You're a great author. You put a sense of reality into it that I've seen in very few erotic texts. Very well done, keep up the good work.
by
Anonymous05/07/12
AMAZIN
This book was amazing and made me wet as hell.
One of the best stories I had read
by
Anonymous05/07/12
Gad, you guys have to be kidding
Was this dribble written with crayon? It sure reads like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I just wish I could take away stars.
Hope u keep on writing it was rellay good. hope to read more of you're stories tottaly hot hottt.
by
Anonymous05/20/12
OMG Best thing I've ever read I got hornier each word I read!!!
by
Anonymous05/27/12
A brake
This story some how was able to dis engage my brain from the day to day struggles, of what is next to get done.
I felt aroused, I felt relaxed,I wished more than once I could read faster to get to the ''oh yes'' part of the story. Then calming my anxious mood, by the fact, it is the leading up to the '' oh yes part of the story that stimulates the hell out of me.
thanks for the much needed break,
Cheers, Joe
by
Anonymous05/30/12
Came so many times
I masturbated to this story and had the most powerful awakening orgasms over and over again. I am a 22 year old female. Thanks for the great wank!
by
Anonymous06/01/12
Very nicely done. 21 year old male here; loved the story. Very rich flavor and details. Excellent work. More than happy to give a 5/5 stars.
Great story and told from the daughter's point of view as she sees herself as the only one who can take care of and be good to her father. It was good to see the father overcome his inhibitions and allow himself to fall into her charms and arms. I would only ask that you watch out for minor spelling mistakes and verify facts before using them.
You write as if you experienced something very similar to this. If you did, I hope you are still madly in love. If you didn't, you did an excellent job portraying the daughter, both with your words and with the sensual and erotic telling of her path of seduction.
by
Anonymous06/19/12
Exceptional
I did love how the story wasn't just straight sex, the suduction was what made this story stand out, nicely done!
by
Anonymous06/24/12
I loved the story . Best orgasm ever
by
Anonymous06/27/12
A Delight to Read!
My daughter and I read this story together as it reminded us of our relationship. It took us a long time to consummate our love but when we finally did it was all worth it. We have been together, as husband and wife, now going on seven years. I always wanted my daughter to have our baby and she finally did three years ago. The baby is healthy and now we are contemplating having another child. I love my daughter as a woman and I know she loves me. We have an insatiable appetite for each other and desire to spend the rest of our lives together.
by
Anonymous07/02/12
loved it
it was a very romantic and discovering story. i liked how it was not just sex, but also about the love fathers and daughters have together. very well done.
by
Anonymous07/03/12
best orgasm ever
It was hot sexy romantic and amazing . I humped my bed while stimulating my breasts while I read . I had the best , a HUGE , orgasm soooo good . Thank-you for a great read and an even better orgasm
your story has a good ending, but I wonder what would happen if her daughters start having feelings for her father?
by
Anonymous07/21/12
Father Daughter love
I loved the story. It sounded so much like me and my daughter Alexandria. Same story!! How a father and daughter tired to resist our sexual feeling for each other, but finally gave in to our mutual desires. We fell in love ten years ago, got married in another country, have lived together ever since!! Passionatley, sexually, so in love with each other. I don't think anyone suspects anything differently, Just a father and daughter living together. Our passion still lives. We take vacations together over seas, making love like two lovers!! Our relationship is wonderful. Jerry and Alexandria forever!!!
by
Anonymous07/30/12
Just a beautiful story!
Your telling it is beautifully and sensitively done.
. . . used as a primer by any wannabe author on How Not To Write. It takes some kind of genius to pen a story that's absent narrative drive and characterisation, but this writer manages it with ease. Add to that achievement a facility for the incoherent and illiterate and it's clear why the author's 369 alts are so enthused. It's also no wonder that the author is, as he repeatedly proclaims, raking in $millions from sales of his, er, unpublished and unpublishable books.
When i need some relief...i always read your stories. Excellent buildup...like a slow hand. Keep writing this kind of story please...all my love...abby
by
Anonymous08/23/12
Tasteful,
Respectful, no scat, name calling, or degrading of the female, fantisy is seldom what it seems, kids always tell, wives often confess, famlies are injured but for a moment it can bring a great sexual moment. I like this guy he has taste.
That is what I see... Happiness. Wonderful story. I really do look forward to more.
by
Anonymous08/26/12
hypocrites
I hate it that homosexual people will get so riled up about two men or two women being married, they say it is love so why should it be stopped. That is what this is a lot of lust too, but still love.
by
Anonymous08/29/12
Best by far of all stories I've read about insest
this storie was best by far of all insest stories i've read and I agree its not that uncommon for a daughter or son to have fanticys of makeing love to the one that seeded their very beginning of life its self
by
Anonymous09/04/12
Excellent Story
I enjoyed your story very much. It was very descriptive and made me feel like I would have loved to experienced something like this. Thank you again. Keep the good stories cumming (Pun intended).
So often the subject of incest is represented by writers as something temporary, or vulgar, with coarse language, where love has no place.
This story is beautiful, a love story that evolves over time. Thank you for presenting it here.
by
Anonymous09/18/12
MORE
I can't wait until there's a full length novel out. This story is like my life (except my father and I aren't doctors)
by
Anonymous09/22/12
Budding author blooming into something great.
That story kept my interest for a lot of reasons besides sex,it was really a story.
by
Anonymous09/25/12
Superb !
A wonderful, tender story of two people falling in love....legality doesn't matter, a nice story, well written, thanks.
by
Anonymous10/01/12
amazing
It was amazing. The best I've ever read. So much detail and depth in this type of story. You earned the five stars from me.
Really hot. I enjoyed reading it, got me very wet.
wow that was fantastic
as a female i know how it felt for her .as a young girl i also made love with
my father.my mother died when i was very young .and my father and i began making love to each other when i was 13.
Oh my god...
Seriously, this was immense... without doubt the best piece of erotic fiction I have ever read... by the end of it, I didnt even notice that it was a story about incest, it became a tale of raw animal lust, desire, passion and unrelenting sexual chemistry... thank you for giving me enough material to fuel my fantasies for a very long time...
The best on this site by far!
I have read every single incest story on this site and this story has by far ranked my number 1. I am not attracted to my father, but I have always found the 'daddy/daughter' scenario to be at the top of my 'want list.' I would give anything in this world to find an older man who I could call my daddy and husband. Anyway, your excerpt, again, is the best I have ever read. Not only was it sensual and sexual, but touching and promising. I do hope that this is a true story, and if it is, I would give anything just to know you and talk to you because you, my friend, are an inspiration. From the bottom of my heart, Thank you. Thank you for sharing. - Ms. :)
incest with emotion
hay im a doctor,basically a psychiatrist..just wanna say that it was an incest story and most of the peaple think bad as its forbidden...but this story was full of emotions and love not just hunger or just sexual urge which makes it no 1...
FAN-F*CKIN-TASTIC!!!!
Honestly The best father daughter story I've ever read! Most people in the incest section don't have much for story telling, they just have a sexual fantasy they need to express. But with this its truly like art! Your story telling abilities are phenomenal! This is the first story of yours I've read but i have no book marked your page! Congrats on a job well done! 5 stars
im wet as fuck.
eating, sucking and fucking little cute young sweet fresh honey pussy
eating, sucking and fucking littleeee cuteee youngggg sweetttt youngggg pussyyyyy is a heaven in this earth ihave enjoyed this heaven more than 100 times includng
sweet young fresh cute little sisters and daughters
mail id nvrajann@gmail.com cutties are you rweady
Damn
Wow dude, maybe the best I've read on this site -personally- let alone the taboo section. You're a great author. You put a sense of reality into it that I've seen in very few erotic texts. Very well done, keep up the good work.
AMAZIN
This book was amazing and made me wet as hell.
One of the best stories I had read
Gad, you guys have to be kidding
Was this dribble written with crayon? It sure reads like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I just wish I could take away stars.
very nice story
would love to read what happens next
Congrats
The best incest incest stories ever. Made me wet and lust.
it made me cum I wish I could do that with my mother
Woah!!!
Though I could never do that stuff, this made me cum. Twice. Well done man.
Best Ever.
Hope u keep on writing it was rellay good. hope to read more of you're stories tottaly hot hottt.
OMG Best thing I've ever read I got hornier each word I read!!!
A brake
This story some how was able to dis engage my brain from the day to day struggles, of what is next to get done.
I felt aroused, I felt relaxed,I wished more than once I could read faster to get to the ''oh yes'' part of the story. Then calming my anxious mood, by the fact, it is the leading up to the '' oh yes part of the story that stimulates the hell out of me.
thanks for the much needed break,
Cheers, Joe
Came so many times
I masturbated to this story and had the most powerful awakening orgasms over and over again. I am a 22 year old female. Thanks for the great wank!
Very nicely done. 21 year old male here; loved the story. Very rich flavor and details. Excellent work. More than happy to give a 5/5 stars.
Exciting and erotic
Great story and told from the daughter's point of view as she sees herself as the only one who can take care of and be good to her father. It was good to see the father overcome his inhibitions and allow himself to fall into her charms and arms. I would only ask that you watch out for minor spelling mistakes and verify facts before using them.
You write as if you experienced something very similar to this. If you did, I hope you are still madly in love. If you didn't, you did an excellent job portraying the daughter, both with your words and with the sensual and erotic telling of her path of seduction.
Exceptional
I did love how the story wasn't just straight sex, the suduction was what made this story stand out, nicely done!
I loved the story . Best orgasm ever
A Delight to Read!
My daughter and I read this story together as it reminded us of our relationship. It took us a long time to consummate our love but when we finally did it was all worth it. We have been together, as husband and wife, now going on seven years. I always wanted my daughter to have our baby and she finally did three years ago. The baby is healthy and now we are contemplating having another child. I love my daughter as a woman and I know she loves me. We have an insatiable appetite for each other and desire to spend the rest of our lives together.
loved it
it was a very romantic and discovering story. i liked how it was not just sex, but also about the love fathers and daughters have together. very well done.
best orgasm ever
It was hot sexy romantic and amazing . I humped my bed while stimulating my breasts while I read . I had the best , a HUGE , orgasm soooo good . Thank-you for a great read and an even better orgasm
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Good ending
your story has a good ending, but I wonder what would happen if her daughters start having feelings for her father?
Father Daughter love
I loved the story. It sounded so much like me and my daughter Alexandria. Same story!! How a father and daughter tired to resist our sexual feeling for each other, but finally gave in to our mutual desires. We fell in love ten years ago, got married in another country, have lived together ever since!! Passionatley, sexually, so in love with each other. I don't think anyone suspects anything differently, Just a father and daughter living together. Our passion still lives. We take vacations together over seas, making love like two lovers!! Our relationship is wonderful. Jerry and Alexandria forever!!!
Just a beautiful story!
Your telling it is beautifully and sensitively done.
An epic that deserves to be. . .
. . . used as a primer by any wannabe author on How Not To Write. It takes some kind of genius to pen a story that's absent narrative drive and characterisation, but this writer manages it with ease. Add to that achievement a facility for the incoherent and illiterate and it's clear why the author's 369 alts are so enthused. It's also no wonder that the author is, as he repeatedly proclaims, raking in $millions from sales of his, er, unpublished and unpublishable books.
You always get me there...
When i need some relief...i always read your stories. Excellent buildup...like a slow hand. Keep writing this kind of story please...all my love...abby
Tasteful,
Respectful, no scat, name calling, or degrading of the female, fantisy is seldom what it seems, kids always tell, wives often confess, famlies are injured but for a moment it can bring a great sexual moment. I like this guy he has taste.
Happiness
That is what I see... Happiness. Wonderful story. I really do look forward to more.
hypocrites
I hate it that homosexual people will get so riled up about two men or two women being married, they say it is love so why should it be stopped. That is what this is a lot of lust too, but still love.
Best by far of all stories I've read about insest
this storie was best by far of all insest stories i've read and I agree its not that uncommon for a daughter or son to have fanticys of makeing love to the one that seeded their very beginning of life its self
Excellent Story
I enjoyed your story very much. It was very descriptive and made me feel like I would have loved to experienced something like this. Thank you again. Keep the good stories cumming (Pun intended).
Very enjoyable
So often the subject of incest is represented by writers as something temporary, or vulgar, with coarse language, where love has no place.
This story is beautiful, a love story that evolves over time. Thank you for presenting it here.
MORE
I can't wait until there's a full length novel out. This story is like my life (except my father and I aren't doctors)
Budding author blooming into something great.
That story kept my interest for a lot of reasons besides sex,it was really a story.
Superb !
A wonderful, tender story of two people falling in love....legality doesn't matter, a nice story, well written, thanks.
amazing
It was amazing. The best I've ever read. So much detail and depth in this type of story. You earned the five stars from me.
This is, and has always been, my most favorite story.
Mmmmmm
Holy cow. 5 stars for me. It was so hot and sexy. Thank you.
loved it!
Thank you! It was an incredible read!
OH YES!
well written and developed. i very good read. and you gave us a good ending. thanks
wow
Absolutly amazing, i fantasize about my daughter, and this story sort of give me hope that one day she will truely be daddys little girl
wow
Got me so wet and turned on! Best story yet!(;
Reinforced
Your story gave credence to my daughter and me in our relationship which is in our fourth year. Thank you
good read
My daughter and I loved it keep writing.
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