"Daddy?" I Whispered

yum

Wow that soaked my pussy. I came three times. Mmm

I wish I'd had a daughter!

A wonderful, sexy story! Redeemed, of course, by having the daughter be the agressor. BUT, the excellence of the story was a little tarnished by grammatical and spelling errors which, for me, were distracting. Errors stop the flow of the tale.

I thought the happy ending was very nice. All relationships that don't stick to 'the rules' don't turn out badly. Steffie is a strong, focused woman who carried through. Great!

Loved it!!

Great Great Job

This is actually one of the best stories I have ever read. There is only one story that is better and that is the one that is in my head that I could never get in writing. It would not be that different from this one.
Thanks again.

A masterpiece

To me this story seems so true... To my knowledge, love between father - daughter or mother - son is much more common than people think.

wow this is incredible to be able to put such a sexual fantasy such as this one is just truly amazing i am so incredibly horny right now!

The hell?

How come racism had to be a part of the story?
Suddenly Steff is complaining about Arabs.
WTF?

Arabs...?

That was so random and strange...and unnecessary... lol...

arab

yeah those arabs stinks....

IM SO GLAD THERE WAS NO SUCKING ON ASSHOLES , BUT ON SUCH A FINE YOUNG TEENAGE BEAUTY THERE SHOULD HAVE BEEN A LOT MORE EATING OF THE PUSSY. IT WAS A GREAT STORY ANYWAY DON SELF

Dreams cum true

I really enjoyed your story and do hope it will lead to him enjpying the children he has now fathered with her. Very nicely done. More please. Thanks. dp

Awesome!

This story has a common basis, but you always seem to do it better. Keep on writing, and I'll keep on reading them.

Great story, keep writing!

This is an amazing story, except the whole "sweaty, disgusting Arabs who are jealous of our blond hair and good looks" part xD I was just like wtf is that about?! Lol. Great story nonetheless.

Would have given it a five, but...

I loved this story--the pacing, the amount of erotic content balanced with exposition, and the tension between the two characters.

However, a couple of things stopped me from giving it a solid five. One being my own issue--I loved the story but didn't like that they had kids together (again, my own personal boundaries/issues).

Putting that aside, the description at the beginning of her dream with the "dirty Arabs" and "weren't circumcised" just struck me as unnecessarily racist and penis-shaming. It took away from what was otherwise a wonderful story.

Too Good

It is surprising how good this story is, amid all the other father-daughter stories on this site. The reason is simple. Told from the daughter's point-of-view, it emphasizes the romance of the relationship.The story could have been over-the-top, and therefore not believable. Scouries, as a writer, knows when to minimize the descriprions, thereby keeping it believable at all times.

disgusted.

Keep your racism and your elitist circumcision views to yourself, please.

to the disgusted anonymous

IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT---> FUCK OFF

Awsome

For all of us who have actually had this fantasy, it was an erotic tale.

Love for you to continue the saga perhaps after shes married!

fucking beautiful

Just fucking erotic

BY FAR THE HOTTEST EROTIC STORY I HAVE EVER READ LOVED IT!!!!

BY FAR THE HOTTEST AND SEXIEST EROTIC STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!!
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HOT STUFF!!

THIS IS ABSOLUTELY HOT STUFF!!! Really good. Keep up the good work.

Great

this was a great read i normally don't read erotic stories but dang this was incredibly well written

Amazing

I loved this because not only was it hot primal sex it went to a happy ending ^.^

good job

This story reminds me of my stepdaughter who I've cum in before!!

that was amazing

I had to cum twice while I read this

god

My pussy is soaking wet I need to be fucked

Wow

The fact that I read all of this says it all. I couldnt stop and I'm throbbing! It's times like this when I wish I wasn't in a long distance relationship.

My pussy has literally been dripping everywhere and squirting I need a good fucking pronto

Loved the story but

Was really thrown off at the end. When you said Steff was now thirty and Dad is almost fifty! Unless he is doogie houser and finished med school at 18, the math does not add up. By the time he was done with med school and in a practice he would be a minimum 28. If Steff is 30 then Dad needs to be almost 60 (not almost 50)! You did such a good and erotic effort with the story I wish you took a little more time to get the timeline correct! For me it takes away From the story! But still gave it a 5!

Never gotten this wet just reading something. ;)

hot and sweet

Too good to be true... but I had tiers when she read the note that came with her pearls, and I came with them that first night in Paris!
Cute story! well told and well read! :)

Learn to spell

the last to comment on this story it is spelled tear not teir but great story

DAMN... Great read!!!

Truth be said... I was going to stop reading this after a few paragraphs, no being my cup of tea, so to speak. But then I thought while reading, lets see how this plays out and I am glad I did!
Now the question is... some truth to this, *Smiles*

The sex scenes were very vivid and impressive, which makes me think the author reads a lot of erotic literature. While the dialogue was somewhat cliche, but doable. Some of the details made me question whether the story wasn't all fiction. When I got to the end where there is a mention of 3 daughters the fantasy is shattered in my view. All I think about at that point is how these girls are most likely underdeveloped or mutated in some way. I mean, that is why even royalty stopped the inbreeding. I don't see the point in ending the story that way... But I must admit it was hot, and that was what I was looking for so it served its purpose.

Good

Great story. Love the hard sex!!

love it!

I just love the whole thing. I jerked to it every second I could. best story I read in years.

What is wrong with Arabs?

What is wrong with Arabs? why do you describe them with bad language?
The Arabs wash them selves five time a day, because they are Muslims.
You are hating Arabs because you are racism!
The Arabs practice the Circumcision, you need some education about peoples.
Please be a fair and equitable!

me and daughter

It was totally awesome I to am in love with your daughter / wife me and my daughter have read it numerous times thanks

TOTALLY AWESOME STORY

I loved the way the story unfolded and the freedom they shared to be naked with each other and then the trip to Paris and finally fucking together was so beautiful.....and three kids to add to the nest....just brilliant - vice is nice but incest is best......go for it....you will never regret it....

Beautiful

I love this story. You are obviously talented. Don't know how long you've been writing, but you have certainly (obviously) found your niche. Don't worry obout those who are offended about your use Arabs. Its obvious that you simply had to use someone of a different culture adn religion that we don't totally understand. Just as easily you could have used a group of sweaty, drunken Marines. It is simply a tool to advance the story line. In here she never stops calling him Daddy even years into their marriage which is so beautiful and hot. Fantastic.

It's not very realistic.

its a story of incest

Not intended for real intended for full on climax whi,h was accomplished

Sensual

I loved it

umm

I would of changed the ending of it no kids no marriage

great!

Loved it. But no kids next time.

Great

Love it! Great ending - possible continuation?

sexting

Any0ne up f0r sextiing ..my piin ::2B72AA0F

Loved the story

To hell with those other comments from people ( who want remain anonymous) that didn't like the ending with kids. That's what showed there was true and undying love. Was wondering, is it hard to write in the first person as a girl/woman when you are a man? Keep up the good work and I'm going to check out some of your other works. I like incest stories because I think about my daughter and me wishing it would have happened to us but it never did. Now me 68 and her 49.

Turned me on!

My daddy played with me as a teenager and although he never "entered" me, he did a lot of other things.... he is dead now, but I often fantasize about the most naughty bits! Like when I got horny and sat on the sofa with my legs open age 16 Prhwaaaarrr

wow!

Best stories I ever read! You could feel the love, that's why I couldn't put it down.