"Daddy?" I Whispered

Problem

Having incestuous children is irresponsible. It can have a horrible end, as all know. At risk of sounding cliche, it's a crime against nature.
Also, I'm anonymous because I don't have an account.

Right, but wrong

I love the story, but I feel sorry for the children. There is a high rate of child birth-defects in incestuous relationships, because the DNA strands are too similar, and they overlap and merge together. That's the only problem I have with the book.

Great

I also fantasize about my daddy. We have been involved for a while now and I still remember the first time my mother went on a business trip (BTW it was some really naughty fun).... Anyway great story!!

To All The Naysayers...

"Genuine Love," Nuff Said!!!

The whole defects with incestuous children has been proven invalid. You would have to have incestuous kids that had kids with each other that also had kids with each other for anything to actually happen. Two relatives having children isn't any more dangerous than two strangers having babies.

fantastic daughter.

The daughter have shown true love and carecter by pursuing his father all the way, dispite his undecissivness and conservative upbriging.
I love the story which sounds so real. So loving.

Yes!

Very well written. An engrossing story. Very erotic. The only story I've ever rated or commented on.

Stories about incest are great as fantasies or as something to turn you on but what governs them are the laws just about everywhere in the world. It doesn't matter what an individual thinks, the law says it's illegal and almost everywhere they are enforced especially when one of the participants is a minor or a child of the other participant. Even when both are of legal age, you still can't get a legal marriage license.

Many of us have fantasized about it, however.

This is still a very HOT story and I gave it a 5........

YES AWESOME

Love it love it love it!!!

Amazing! :)

This story just kept sending waves of orgasmic pleasure up and down my whole body! I couldn't stop masturbating and rubbing my clit after reading. ;)

amazing!!

I was more in love with the way this was written. great job!! I voted a total 5 stars.

Dripping

I almost came a number of times, if someone touched me, that would have done it.
Thank you.
Now I need to cum,, later

Delish!

Loved the series...thank you for "reading my mind: ;)

My Fantasia

This is actually a 10, Hard at th start n th same at th finish, I have dreamed of this story and so many others. Bring on more, Perhaps a novel. XXXXXXXXX

Awesome!

Ho hum, another 5...I'm sure you're quite used to them by now.

Not fazed

It looks to me like "Daddy" was already in lust with Stefanie for quite some time as he did not seem very upset at all of the actions and decisions she made. Perhaps it made his decision easier. Enjoyed the story very much, like most of your stories.

Really good, but damn that one spot!

The spot where Daddy finally loses it and carries Stef off to the bedroom, I thought it was going to be abrupt, hard and fast. But just as he gets her on the bed, he slows down! Nonononooo!!!! I wish he had shoved himself in her so hard right away and kept at it like an animal. Ugh. It was still good, but the momentum of the story got thrown a little bit and it wasn't as good as I expected it would be. There is nothing wrong with hard and fast, but so many authors seem to follow the same mushy cliche routine. Finger her, taste her, THEN fuck her. I say, FUCK FIRST! Anyway, the story was good, but the climax of the story could have been more intense. But that is ME, not the millions of other readers. I find myself to be in the minority most times. Guess that's why I belong in the non-con section.

anonymous

Beautifully written story, loved it. The ending was perfect, the two of them consummating the relationship through marriage and children. Halfway through the story I was hoping it would conclude this way, and it did. Just perfect.

So beautiful, there are no words to describe it. My Dad and I are lovers and have been for four years. Thank you for this wonderful story

stopped reading after the bit about the arab rapists, totally unnecessary to further gross stereotypes about a group of people like that

one nore hole

I wanted her to try daddys monster anally and hear her painful groaning.

longer

I really enjoyed the build up. But after the climax, the denouement came way to fast. I wish it had more about them exploring the taboo and talking about it. All in all a great read

I loved it:D I wish my daddy would fuck me but so far that hasnt happened

Good

Great story with great build up but the racism was completely unneccessary.

Ashish singh, India

Its a very beautiful story to read. Loved it very much. Thankyou.

meh

seemed racist

I love it

I found it funny also cause she has the same name as me

verrygood

One of the best that I've read latley keep writing

Great!

Wonderful story! Sexy writing! And a damn good ending! I love stories like this.

Well Done!

Well thought out. PROPER use of the English language. A truly enjoyable read!

Excellent!

One of the best I have ever read. Whether from a strictly writing view, a story about love and sexuality between two people, a seduction tale, or any other viewpoint.

Loved it

Absolutely a wonderful story...
I am a bit hesitant when it comes to Taboo topics such as this.
However, this story has suaed me to be more accepting.
Thank you for the wonderful read.

Amazing!!!!

So well written and extremely arousing!

loved it

I have the same problem as your dad had my daughter is coming up to 18 and she has been flirting with me since she was 16 I had to send her back to her mom's as I didn't want to upset her by turning her down but loved your story

I liked it

I didn't like how you added that the people in your dreams were ugly, fat Arabs. I am Arab my son is Arab my dad is Arab my two brothers and one sister is Arab. It's really insulting to me.

Good, but..

The way you described the "Arabs" was extremely offensive. No idea why you would think that was alright. Unnecessary racism in what was otherwise a very good story.

Niiicceee!!

Super enjoyable to read! The only thing I would say is that you have a couple of grammatical errors and writing no-nos that could easily be remedied by having a skilled beta reader or editor. That is the only thing that leaves you a hair short of literary taboo perfection! ;) As I said, it's only a couple of things. Also, while I don't condone racism, it actually suited the story; it is perfectly believable for a young woman, the daughter of a surgeon (and therefore probably very sheltered and naive), to fear a group of people that is foreign or that carries a stereotype in America. I'm not saying it's right, but it's true. Could have just as easily been a group of black men or what have you. So well done, Scouries!!

True love

It seemed as if you took your time to write such an amazing story, not just a slutty daddy fuck me story. I sat on the edge of my seat reading your story, I really loved this story such depth and body. Thank you for sharing such a exciting story. I wish more stories were of this caliber, you are obviously a good writer please!! Keep up the good work.

Offensive to Arabs

I'd suggest, if you took offense to what was said in the story, either don't read it or simply go back to your own country.

Loved

Looovvvveeeeddddd the ending. Great story.

Sweet and passionate

Love the relationship and excitement between father and daughter.

loved this

I truly enjoyed this I am with my (daddy) for twenty years....

even though there was quite a bit of sex, i think it was more of a love story. 5 stars because i couldnt give more.

Facts out of whack

An 18 year old girl does not get accepted into medical school. She needs to attend college for four years. A girl with this amount of immaturity has not completed four years of college. I realize that stories on this site are fantasies, but the fantasies are supposed to in the relationships, not in distorting the way things operate in the world. In some aspects, the story is well told, but, as always, you should write about things that you understand.

fuck hatred

Yea right!!! Keep spreading hatred towards arabs, people like you keeping racist on the road. As for the story, it was amazing I'll be objective here. So thanks for the magnificent story you racist fuck. (No sarcasm, I like your story much)

What's with the hate?

That awkward moment where white supremacy rears its ugly head takes away from the story...

Omg

Omg omg who do you think u are to be writing professional stories? Go fuck yourself

BULL SHIT

WHAT BULL SHIT ARE THESE PEOPLE TODAY FUCKING IGNORANT OR WHAT MESSING AROUND WITH THERE FAMILY MEMBERS LIKE THAT THAT IS TOTAL UNCALLED FOR BULL SHIT YOU BOTH SHOULD BE ASHAMED OF YOURSELVES THAT IS TOTAL DISGUSTING

Wonderful Story

Loved the story so sexy and wonderful ending. Anna