"Daddy?" I Whispered

Loved it

I loved this story cause I hate stinky fat arabs

ignorance

I love how people want to hate on The writer in this comment box. If you don't like it don't fucking read it. It was your choice to b on this specific page so get over your self. To the writer you did a fantastic job an fuck anyone who says other wise. Their obviously have mixed emotions about said topic yet were intrigued enough about it to read far enough to get to the comment box on the last page.. Congrads on writing an entertaining story :)

Stupid people

A bunch of you guys that are hatin on this writer and saying "who do you think you are trying to write professional stories" or whatever should just leave as well as those who are saying this is sick and this is bullshit. If you didn't like it then why'd you keep fucking reading? Yes you do have the freedom of speech but, BITCH you also have the right to remain silent! Now before all of you try to reply to me and say "go fuck yourself!" I just wanna tell you four words. Been there, done that.

Yes!

I loved it your really good at writing these kinds of stories!

so you hate the story

so you hate the story and the fact that its father daughter love but you clearly
clicked on incest read the entire story just to waste your time on a hate comment to express your disgust ....but you still wanted to read it thats i call a disgusting
hater
personally i loved it

Racist and illegal fantasy

This was racist against arabian people and messed up fantasy. Having children with family can cause life risking problems for the children. It is illegal and i think its wrong that a dad fucks his daughter, and blaming that the mother left isnt a good enough reason for them to have sex.

Daddy

"So?" you asked, Why don't more readers vote? I can only speak for myself, naturally. Still, I believe my feelings are the same as others. We are taught from people who are embarrassed to even raise the subject. These kind people are afraid to talk to us, their young children.
Such power there is in fear, one suspected back then. So confusing and indeed, worrying. When we learned anything about sex, as we grew up, it was likely from a friend, who knew little, a book we were not supposed to be reading, or from a kind, concerned, informed, loving adult. That latter may have happened to others, but I never saw it.
So, we, your readers, have been programmed since we were tykes, to not respond to those who, like you, inform us with love and caring. What a shame: for us to fear, even late into our years.
Your story is great. Loved it. Never had a daughter, but I am not surprised to read your statements about the number of father-daughter love relationships there has been. Great job, Scouries
Jack

What a wonderful story. It's not just centered into lust but also into love. You should write more stories.

Exquisite.

That's it. Simply exquisite.

good but do better next time

more on the sexy seduction and teasing

Great story but ....

It's very romantic and full of feelings between lust and love and joy ... you are one of my favorite writers but honestly i notice some kind of racist about Arabs in your stories thats disappointed me .in the first chapter about the dream of his daughter to seduce her father and second in your story ( Alison's ankle ) I hope you avoid this area during your writes to keep all your reads around you if you really want them around ...

Was good until it was racist...

I was getting really into it and it was a great story, but the racist comments about Arabs and white supremacy and dirty foreigners completely threw me off. I couldn't enjoy it after that which was a real shame! Please consider editing the racist comments out!

its a very romantic story. carried away :)

I can feel the love and romance, best story i read so far :) please write more!

I usually read father/son but this is first one I read about father/daughter and I enjoyed it...it just need a bit of the sex story since that is the reason we are read this story

Yeah the dirty Arab rape stuff,I ignored,and the married part and blah blah.. But I loved it..I always like the energy of the daddy who wants it but holds himself back.

1994 was before 2001!

You made the excuse she used the racist men raping her to awaken her father and how she used a fear of his or what would be scary. Why would it only be Arabic men and no other race worked when the events took place long before 9/11/01? That makes as little sense as it does to use a particular race to paint as gross and bad. Would her father not have been just as horrfied by the white and dirty red necks who violated her with their crack smoking, toothless mouths? I suggest he would have been every bit as horrified. The rest of the story was great, but that part did mess up the flow.

To the idiot speaking about the world hating America and being racist against us, well I suggest to you that crap like what is written in this story, your attitude, and a continued sense of entitlement has caused that scorn for us. The if you can read this in English thank a soldier is frankly insulting to soldiers and their families, and I would know. Other countries learn to read and write in their own language and a great number of them also learn in English. That has more to do with their superior education system and the importance that is placed on learning. Even being far behind most of the world in all school subjects people like you continue to feel superior, and then don't understand you are a huge part of why no one likes Americans. We aren't being shipped overseas to fight and die so the world can hate us and believe we are all entitled, ignorant tools. We are being shipped to fight to help make a difference in the world. That fact is obviously lost on one, such as yourself, with your own head shoved so far up your backside. Enjoy your entitled opinion of yourself, but at least try to realize you are the only one tooting your horn.

wonderful!

I thought the story was great! The Arab comments were a little much,but other than that,it was fab! It shows that if u dont get over something it'll drag on forever and stef definetly didn't let moms death get in the way of her true love!

Touching

Very, very well written. Thanks for sharing, I only wish it had been longer.

Absolutely Beautiful

Thank you so much for righting this. It was fantastically written, and had a gorgeous storyline that makes me wish I could just keep reading it forever!

My first experience

The Daddy and daughter first experience during the European honeymoon needed to be developed more. Remember this was their first sexual experience. The reader wants more graphic description of the bedroom scene. Could she un robe and let it drop so Daddy could see a woman dressed in a sensual satin corset and nylons. Could the daughter see that the Father( lover) was the man going to de-flower her pussy for the first time, as a special moment . Heavy breathing, dimmed lights, a bed that shook violently. the reader wants more. However, the writer did a great job anyhow.

Great storie thst really got me excited.Disnt want it to end

like it

great job

Enjoyable but needed more details

Very good story but it lacked some details...
It was a long but enjoyable read but I felt a little cheated when I finally got to them having sex. I expected more details. For example; the magically appearing finger in the ass.... the scene needed more details like how it got there, how she felt at the first contact and so on.
All in all, I enjoyed it but it left me wishing it had more.

Lame

The girl seems immature, childish, and spoiled. Nothing attractive about that.

paris

great love story and a very lucky daddy to have a daughter/wife as you

n1

Loved the buildup. Needs a tad more action and depravity. Maybe some thrills. I really liked the parts when she wasn't legal, it really reveals how she was raised. An interesting young woman

wow

I loved it, needed more action .. probably her dad licking her good. Don't end such a sexy story with kids .. took away from the excitement. These are just stories but I really wana try it..

More...

This was a wonderful story, I hope you continue writing and let us see more of these intense heart felt stories... personally I wondered what would happen if the girl was only 15 or 16? ha ha ha

Thanks again for a great story

I Really Enjoyed This One!

So nice to read a story about "LOVE". A forbidden coupling,barriers to be broached,entrenched morals to be wrestled with,all being overcome in the name of love. Well done!

So believable and lust into love, great read thanks.

Keep writing and we will keep reading, good stuff .

who wants to be my daddy

My pussy was so wet when he finally took her. I love your stories! They are perfect to read right before letting my fingers explore my naughty place.

Amazing!

Probably the best story I've read on here. Literary style is mesmerizing and made me breathe heavy. Love the idea of a beautiful young woman seducing her father. Dr. James is a lucky man! best of all, it's a love story that ends quite beautifully. Great job!

I made it to the end so i felt I owed you a comment and a rate. pretty great story man! The only thing that was a little weird was the first part. it was something along the lines of "what if there are more foreigners daddy?". It just felt unnecessarily racist and out of place. I gave it 4 stars on an otherwise 5 out of 5 for that. Good work!

I really got turned on and couldn't stop until I finished it. Really well described though the end seemed like an effort to not make it any longer. I quite liked it.

I couldn't stop reading it until I was finished

i really enjoyed this story from start to finish. It reminds me of my own daughter where we have a loving father/daughter relationship and wonder if it would go further. Keep writing stories as they do captivate the imagination.

great story, kept my attention

Got my cock up, dripping and throbbing

Great Story

Really turned me on = must go and visit my Daddy!

Yeah....No

I stopped at the first page. 'These big smelly Arab men wanted to rape me cause I was American??? Get the FUCK out of here with that shit

Best story ever

Made my so horny and my cock really hard

Wow!

Amazing story. Great plot, outstanding structure. Simply
and utterly addicting. Couldn't stop reading!

Ive read this a few times and still love it!

...I see a couple people got riled up at the 'dream' story she fed her dad. Heh. ...of course the whole point was to say something specific to get her dads panties in a twist. I suppose the complainers wouldn't have said anything if it were a couple of dirty white bikers that had raped her... No, they wouldn't have said a fucking thing. Just because certain characters are being used doesnt make something racist. You act like there couldnt be arab rapists, I assure you there are. Just like there are rapists of every other race, nationality and religion out there in the world. You shouldnt have to walk on eggshells just because someone takes offense at something. Someone is ALWAYS going to be offended!
"The dirty, smelly rapists of unknown color, nationality, religion and sex raped me in my dream daddy! The penises were blurred out with a sensor mark daddy so they could have been using strap-ons, so who knows what sex they were daddy! Oh wait, I shouldnt call you daddy, should I? That might offend the straight males out there by insinuating that a daddy might fuck his daughter, wouldn't want to offend that group!! Oh, parent of unknown sex and sexual orientation, I was so scared!! The socially challenged persons of unknown race, religion, sex and sexual orientation in my dream raped me! Oh nevermind, I'm sure it was all my own fault and somehow I must have convinced them that its what I wanted!"

Yeesh!

amaging

good...... it had awaken both love and lust....!!!!!!!!!

Oh yeah!

I'm so horny! This made me so wet! :D

You do well; great writer, wonderful narrative, great command of the language, good structure, excellent construction, grammar and syntax. Tight flowing paragraphs. If you are writing for woman you may have it. For men I found it a little tame and predict

She title line. Oops

awesome

the lucky dad got such a sweet daughter..
is there any one... who does incest sex...
contact me

Love

Family, love and such is always strange but even in those times, better than ever.

great

He found, and almost rejected, the one woman in the world who would always love him without condition. Family Love should never be discounted, it is very real. And it is just as real today as for these many thousands of years. Poor man. Her slow seduction of him gave him little choice in the matter. The story being written from the POV of twelve years later is really good. Long enough for them to have made many memories, but not too long to be able to recall them clearly. It seems that night when his final barrier came down he committed himself wholeheartedly and never looked back. He's lucky. Being her father and Doctor, he knows EVERTHING there is to know about his wife. For most husbands, at least the first 18yrs of his wife's life is pretty much a mystery to him except for what she decides to tell him. A good place for both of them. I don't think you need to add anytihing to this. Everything is here.

Beautiful!!!!

I had a step daughter that wanted me to make love to her and I wanted to but because of time and pressures, I refrained from doing so. I have always regretted not making love to her. I envy your dad!!!! Thank you, hon. My email for a response if you please is, sgte51948@yahoo.com.

Perfect!

I love that you can develop an exciting story line in just a few chapters! Excellent story teller! Thank you for all those erotic moments with just enough teasing and sex to keep me flipping pages and wondering how you could make the story better...for me it's a perfect mix of storyline and sex...loved it, keep them cumming!

Boney

Outstanding. I am an older guy with ED issues, even with meds. I LOVE daring stories with a good build-up, the best way for me to get off!