I truly loved the story and wish it had of been me, I have had sex with one daughter of mine and a step daughter also, I only regret that I did not stay with them. It was the best sex I ever had, this story brought back many good memoiers, thank you so much
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Anonymous05/28/06
Loved it!!
Hmmm, very exciting. Had my juices flowing. I wish my daddy had been like that.
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Anonymous05/29/06
They cant hang
I loved your story. The people that are saying your store isn't very good need to sit back and think about one thing. Can I write a story as good as this one. Being a cridic as they seem to want to be means, THEY CAN'T do better. Keep up the good work. Your doing just fine.
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Anonymous06/01/06
comments
i like the story. well written and erotic.
im one of those readers who also read comments from other readers. sometimes those comments are as entertaining as the story itself. for those who thinks that the author is racist because of the made up nightmare of the young daughter, think about the category you're reading. at least the story doesnt have BDSM in it and its all consensual. dang, they even have kids and nobody seems to give a hoot about it. but the minor made up nightmare sequence of the story seems to rile some ppl. LOL
so i guess to some, incest is more acceptable than racism?
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Anonymous06/01/06
Wow!!
Whether real, or not, this story was hot!! The seduction, of the father, and the daughter, because dad wasn't as "innocent" as he lead her to believe, was so damned sensual..If true, I hope they live a happy and productive life together..If not true, well then I hope she has more inside her to tell..
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Anonymous06/13/06
very good believable erotic story
Racist? there's only one group that yells "Racist". The rest of us are from different places and different skin colors but who cares. My ancestors and probably yours were picked on and made to live in poverty when they came to this country not by yelling "racist" and demanding everything. I got where I am because I worked and saved. No one helped me and I was not one to say I want or I'm entitled because I'm poor and you have to support me. Get a grip and stop whinning and get a job. The current CEO of Walmart first went to work for Walmart pushing baskets in the parking lot! Ya think he would've made it if he kept yelling "Racist" and you WILL help me? Ohhhhh, Pooor me! Get a grip !
As for the Racist part, excuse me, I missed it 'cause I wasn't looking for it.....You understand that?
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Anonymous06/13/06
Holy ~!@#
My god! I don't have anything to say.
except, whoa! great story, a little disturbing, very sensual, a little weird. Incest? Hmmm!
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Anonymous06/13/06
Good writing
Very arousing. It actually turned me on, although personally I've never thought of my dad in that way.
Uncircumcised Arabs? There is no such thing. Muslims and Jews are usually circumcised,some Christians too.
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Anonymous06/13/06
I loved this story!!!!!
This was a truly wonderful story! I was blown away by your writing, you're very good! Keep up the good work!
I have to say that I really enjoyed the way you have written this story. Very well done!
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Anonymous06/14/06
WOW!!!
Now most of the time I wrote the word "WOW" it is my initials, but this time it satbds for wonderful, outstandingly wonderful!!! Is this just from your imagination or ispsired by a true story? this was ruly aw3esome!!! Very enjoyable!! Keep up the great stories!!!
by
Anonymous06/14/06
Great hot love story
I liked it very much. It was one in a million. keep up the good work.
by
Anonymous06/14/06
More
Please expand this sexy and romantic story! I mean, continue it.
You are a master!! What you do, you do well! It's always a pleasure to read what ever story that you've written. this one is no exception. Thank You. Ronnie W.
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Anonymous06/21/06
just like real life
I like the slow build mayby a little to much detail in the ist bit didnt like the ending I like to live in the now i met my girl friend when she was in year 12 she turned 18 the month I met her her 21st was good all her friends I am 50 now she and I are great together I love your story i dont have a daughter but I may as well have i fantasize about what you write. I am interested in the taboo suject I cant quite imagine doing it in real life but I tried but i withdrew thats why we write stories isnt it?
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Anonymous06/24/06
Common Drivel
This is a mediocre story by a mediocre writer who clearly wants to believe that voluminous feedback equals good writing. Sorry, sir. That isn't the case. This is an unimaginative story with an unoriginal theme. These are stereotypical, cardboard characters, and even the sex scenes are tired and overused. This author should, if he insists on littering the site with this drivel, enlist an editor. There are various grammatical and spelling errors: "Oh yes Daddy." There should be a comma between "yes" and "Daddy" there. "now longer was it just the innocent loving father-daughter relationship we'd lived for eighteen years." I assume you meant "NO longer"? Boring, common and trite.
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Anonymous06/26/06
" Daddy "
I think this has to be one of the best father -daughter incest stories that I have ever read .You have written it so well and the story plot is just perfect . I`d love to have a daughter like that .Ivan
That wuz great. Man, that shyt made me cum so much. I would have totally loved a different ending though. should be a book perhaps. :-)
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Anonymous06/29/06
Comment
Well-written. But in seeking suspense, you tend instead to tease -- that's my only criticism. Should you choose to elaborate on your theme, making the story a generational thing (a saga, as it were), don't bring in the children, please. You'll all wind up answering charges on Court-TV.
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Anonymous06/30/06
loved your story
were stationed away from home im in the army in serbia, i read your story and had a longing to be home with my "wife"
she is only 8 years younger than me but i think of her as my little girl.
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Anonymous07/04/06
you got your five.
an awesome story. i found myself having visuals.
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Anonymous07/05/06
"Daddy" A Great Read
Great story and well written.
You actually got me hard! I love the concept of these relationships and you portrayed the struggle to overcome morals and taboos very well.
It might be interesting to get the father's own view point as well. Ie to read how he becomes aware of and deals with the infatuation of his daughter. It would be cool to see how he encourages his daughter and makes her think she is controlling the action but it is really he that is besotted with his daughter and figures out this ekaborate way to seduce her while she is convinced that she is seducing him. This way he ensures not been reported for rape.
Anyway, I did get turned on by your writing, especially the idea that she would go into his bed while he slept and made him cum on her when he did not know. That is really hot!
Thanks
Lacem8
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Anonymous07/06/06
your story was out of this world.
Great story and well written.
by
Anonymous07/08/06
whos your daddy
i am a dad and have a step daughter we finaly got together when she finished high school and I am still with her we are so good together 48 goes into 17 very very nicely ( i was never good at maths) I have great sex everyday i never have the feeling she has grown out of being my (daughter) she is so young and sexy allways nubile and hasnt really turned into a full grown woman yet I want her as my young flesh that I take every night and I am allways fantasizing about her , there is something of a real turn on with taboo sex and the smaller the woman the more the turn on as if she is too young, I can't explain it any more your story is it I have the sexual desire every time with her she is allways innocent and loves me the older man taking her and its a little repressed every time that is the secret ingrediant. Love your work read it again and again its got the key points, taking that ewhich is forbiden young flesh sweet and soft innocent and in awe of you. well done.
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Anonymous07/09/06
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Anonymous07/09/06
The Best!!!
This was the best story I ever read on the topic of Father Daughter relationship. Keep writing!!
by
Anonymous07/09/06
Simply beautiful.
I love romance. Even though it is incest, it is still beautiful. I am married with 5 children, 4 my owe, and one adopted. I've been molested by an uncle, got pregnant and had an abortion at 15. There was nothing beautiful about it....But your story is beautiful and if all incest were something that was beautiful, you wouldn't hear all the horror stories on the new.
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Anonymous07/10/06
i wish more people would vote to
omg wowzorzs keep on writeing stuff like that and ill keep on comenting and voteing on it very nice story to not many on here with an actual plot and still sound good
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Anonymous07/29/06
brilliant
brilliant style of writing.so much heat with a good story line is hard to find.
keep writing.
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Anonymous08/01/06
A new Author to explore!! YEAH!
Not much new that I can contribute here, other than the story was very nicely written with a good buildup, some wonderful flashing back in time stuff etc. Only complaint I have - silly one, not the "racist" stuff that sent some people off - my complaint is that one doesn't get accepted to medical school at the age of 18 - esp. Harvard Medical school... she may have been accepted to Harvard College as an undergraduate for 4 years and then applied at 22 to Harvard Med for 3 more years....
My only complaint... great story.. thanks
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Anonymous08/03/06
Great!! Best I've ever read.
What a great fantasy!! Your writing is top notch, the way you captivate the reader with the struggle of the taboo of incest and the beauty of a young woman with an older, experienced man (even if he is her father)is a delight to this old man. Keep up the good work.
by
Anonymous08/04/06
Refreshing
A fantasy can be an enjoyable thing, and your little story gave it life that extended beyond the time that I sat here before the screen while reading it. The excitment you created did extend beyond the norm as I was able to take your well choosen words with me as I showered. Needless to say I/we,you and I had a wonderful mental time together...Thank you, with love
jak
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Anonymous08/04/06
Love
You succeeded in writing a story about LOVE between father and daughter involving sex. Most stories are more or less just about lust. CHAPEAU!
by
Anonymous08/06/06
I did not care for the racist comments
I did not care for the racist comments - just can't understand the need to talk about arabs and the blond christian people. Disappointing cheap shot and you have produced much better.
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Anonymous08/07/06
Very Very good
Good build-up that didn't let you down at the end. That got me super hot! I like it from the daughters POV but would've also liked it told from the father's.
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Anonymous08/07/06
Very nice
I loved it . One of the best stories i have ever read on lit :) Good job
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Anonymous08/09/06
umm
wow that was amazing i mostly read lezzy but wow that was the best incest story i've ever read!
Well done. This held my interest and the writing was superb. Too often grammar errors and mispuncuation clutter up what would otherwise be a good story--you overcame that problem. I'm not so sure that the comments about Arabs were necessary. I wouldn't deign to make character judgements about you, I just don't believe politics need to be inserted. They could've been scary animal/monster rapists and the effect would've been equal if not superior. Still, a solid story. I enjoyed it.
This story moved me differently than most father-daughter incest tales. It's extremely well-written, not graphic or crude, and just plain got me into it, and feeling the emotions along with the players.
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Anonymous08/13/06
description
Like many stories, i wish there were more descriptions
of of the female's. I happen to prefer 95 lb. 5.0 women/girls.
by
Anonymous08/20/06
ATZR247#1
Very Hot
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Anonymous08/22/06
outstanding
One of the very best stories I have read on this site.
by
Anonymous08/22/06
great
Great job, every part was interesting. Loved it, love all of your writing.
by
Anonymous08/26/06
keep on reading it!!!
a great love story!!
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Anonymous08/29/06
loved it
you and anne240 are the best writers on this site keep up the good work
English
Loved It Truly
I truly loved the story and wish it had of been me, I have had sex with one daughter of mine and a step daughter also, I only regret that I did not stay with them. It was the best sex I ever had, this story brought back many good memoiers, thank you so much
Loved it!!
Hmmm, very exciting. Had my juices flowing. I wish my daddy had been like that.
They cant hang
I loved your story. The people that are saying your store isn't very good need to sit back and think about one thing. Can I write a story as good as this one. Being a cridic as they seem to want to be means, THEY CAN'T do better. Keep up the good work. Your doing just fine.
comments
i like the story. well written and erotic.
im one of those readers who also read comments from other readers. sometimes those comments are as entertaining as the story itself. for those who thinks that the author is racist because of the made up nightmare of the young daughter, think about the category you're reading. at least the story doesnt have BDSM in it and its all consensual. dang, they even have kids and nobody seems to give a hoot about it. but the minor made up nightmare sequence of the story seems to rile some ppl. LOL
so i guess to some, incest is more acceptable than racism?
Wow!!
Whether real, or not, this story was hot!! The seduction, of the father, and the daughter, because dad wasn't as "innocent" as he lead her to believe, was so damned sensual..If true, I hope they live a happy and productive life together..If not true, well then I hope she has more inside her to tell..
very good believable erotic story
Racist? there's only one group that yells "Racist". The rest of us are from different places and different skin colors but who cares. My ancestors and probably yours were picked on and made to live in poverty when they came to this country not by yelling "racist" and demanding everything. I got where I am because I worked and saved. No one helped me and I was not one to say I want or I'm entitled because I'm poor and you have to support me. Get a grip and stop whinning and get a job. The current CEO of Walmart first went to work for Walmart pushing baskets in the parking lot! Ya think he would've made it if he kept yelling "Racist" and you WILL help me? Ohhhhh, Pooor me! Get a grip !
As for the Racist part, excuse me, I missed it 'cause I wasn't looking for it.....You understand that?
Holy ~!@#
My god! I don't have anything to say.
except, whoa! great story, a little disturbing, very sensual, a little weird. Incest? Hmmm!
Good writing
Very arousing. It actually turned me on, although personally I've never thought of my dad in that way.
Uncircumcised Arabs? There is no such thing. Muslims and Jews are usually circumcised,some Christians too.
I loved this story!!!!!
This was a truly wonderful story! I was blown away by your writing, you're very good! Keep up the good work!
Very Very Good!
I have to say that I really enjoyed the way you have written this story. Very well done!
WOW!!!
Now most of the time I wrote the word "WOW" it is my initials, but this time it satbds for wonderful, outstandingly wonderful!!! Is this just from your imagination or ispsired by a true story? this was ruly aw3esome!!! Very enjoyable!! Keep up the great stories!!!
Great hot love story
I liked it very much. It was one in a million. keep up the good work.
More
Please expand this sexy and romantic story! I mean, continue it.
Perfect
One is a million...thanks!
Bad finish
The slow build-up is not consistent with drab ending. Your imagination ran out.
great story!
wow this was just a fantastic story, very well written. thank you for such a great story, i'll be sure to look up your next submissions.
I have to doff my hat
Scouries:
You are a master!! What you do, you do well! It's always a pleasure to read what ever story that you've written. this one is no exception. Thank You. Ronnie W.
just like real life
I like the slow build mayby a little to much detail in the ist bit didnt like the ending I like to live in the now i met my girl friend when she was in year 12 she turned 18 the month I met her her 21st was good all her friends I am 50 now she and I are great together I love your story i dont have a daughter but I may as well have i fantasize about what you write. I am interested in the taboo suject I cant quite imagine doing it in real life but I tried but i withdrew thats why we write stories isnt it?
Common Drivel
This is a mediocre story by a mediocre writer who clearly wants to believe that voluminous feedback equals good writing. Sorry, sir. That isn't the case. This is an unimaginative story with an unoriginal theme. These are stereotypical, cardboard characters, and even the sex scenes are tired and overused. This author should, if he insists on littering the site with this drivel, enlist an editor. There are various grammatical and spelling errors: "Oh yes Daddy." There should be a comma between "yes" and "Daddy" there. "now longer was it just the innocent loving father-daughter relationship we'd lived for eighteen years." I assume you meant "NO longer"? Boring, common and trite.
" Daddy "
I think this has to be one of the best father -daughter incest stories that I have ever read .You have written it so well and the story plot is just perfect . I`d love to have a daughter like that .Ivan
Oh my!
Loved it!!
WOW!!!!
That wuz great. Man, that shyt made me cum so much. I would have totally loved a different ending though. should be a book perhaps. :-)
Comment
Well-written. But in seeking suspense, you tend instead to tease -- that's my only criticism. Should you choose to elaborate on your theme, making the story a generational thing (a saga, as it were), don't bring in the children, please. You'll all wind up answering charges on Court-TV.
loved your story
were stationed away from home im in the army in serbia, i read your story and had a longing to be home with my "wife"
she is only 8 years younger than me but i think of her as my little girl.
you got your five.
an awesome story. i found myself having visuals.
"Daddy" A Great Read
Great story and well written.
You actually got me hard! I love the concept of these relationships and you portrayed the struggle to overcome morals and taboos very well.
It might be interesting to get the father's own view point as well. Ie to read how he becomes aware of and deals with the infatuation of his daughter. It would be cool to see how he encourages his daughter and makes her think she is controlling the action but it is really he that is besotted with his daughter and figures out this ekaborate way to seduce her while she is convinced that she is seducing him. This way he ensures not been reported for rape.
Anyway, I did get turned on by your writing, especially the idea that she would go into his bed while he slept and made him cum on her when he did not know. That is really hot!
Thanks
Lacem8
your story was out of this world.
Great story and well written.
whos your daddy
i am a dad and have a step daughter we finaly got together when she finished high school and I am still with her we are so good together 48 goes into 17 very very nicely ( i was never good at maths) I have great sex everyday i never have the feeling she has grown out of being my (daughter) she is so young and sexy allways nubile and hasnt really turned into a full grown woman yet I want her as my young flesh that I take every night and I am allways fantasizing about her , there is something of a real turn on with taboo sex and the smaller the woman the more the turn on as if she is too young, I can't explain it any more your story is it I have the sexual desire every time with her she is allways innocent and loves me the older man taking her and its a little repressed every time that is the secret ingrediant. Love your work read it again and again its got the key points, taking that ewhich is forbiden young flesh sweet and soft innocent and in awe of you. well done.
The Best!!!
This was the best story I ever read on the topic of Father Daughter relationship. Keep writing!!
Simply beautiful.
I love romance. Even though it is incest, it is still beautiful. I am married with 5 children, 4 my owe, and one adopted. I've been molested by an uncle, got pregnant and had an abortion at 15. There was nothing beautiful about it....But your story is beautiful and if all incest were something that was beautiful, you wouldn't hear all the horror stories on the new.
i wish more people would vote to
omg wowzorzs keep on writeing stuff like that and ill keep on comenting and voteing on it very nice story to not many on here with an actual plot and still sound good
brilliant
brilliant style of writing.so much heat with a good story line is hard to find.
keep writing.
A new Author to explore!! YEAH!
Not much new that I can contribute here, other than the story was very nicely written with a good buildup, some wonderful flashing back in time stuff etc. Only complaint I have - silly one, not the "racist" stuff that sent some people off - my complaint is that one doesn't get accepted to medical school at the age of 18 - esp. Harvard Medical school... she may have been accepted to Harvard College as an undergraduate for 4 years and then applied at 22 to Harvard Med for 3 more years....
My only complaint... great story.. thanks
Great!! Best I've ever read.
What a great fantasy!! Your writing is top notch, the way you captivate the reader with the struggle of the taboo of incest and the beauty of a young woman with an older, experienced man (even if he is her father)is a delight to this old man. Keep up the good work.
Refreshing
A fantasy can be an enjoyable thing, and your little story gave it life that extended beyond the time that I sat here before the screen while reading it. The excitment you created did extend beyond the norm as I was able to take your well choosen words with me as I showered. Needless to say I/we,you and I had a wonderful mental time together...Thank you, with love
jak
Love
You succeeded in writing a story about LOVE between father and daughter involving sex. Most stories are more or less just about lust. CHAPEAU!
I did not care for the racist comments
I did not care for the racist comments - just can't understand the need to talk about arabs and the blond christian people. Disappointing cheap shot and you have produced much better.
Very Very good
Good build-up that didn't let you down at the end. That got me super hot! I like it from the daughters POV but would've also liked it told from the father's.
Very nice
I loved it . One of the best stories i have ever read on lit :) Good job
umm
wow that was amazing i mostly read lezzy but wow that was the best incest story i've ever read!
Well written
Well done. This held my interest and the writing was superb. Too often grammar errors and mispuncuation clutter up what would otherwise be a good story--you overcame that problem. I'm not so sure that the comments about Arabs were necessary. I wouldn't deign to make character judgements about you, I just don't believe politics need to be inserted. They could've been scary animal/monster rapists and the effect would've been equal if not superior. Still, a solid story. I enjoyed it.
Sensuous!
This story moved me differently than most father-daughter incest tales. It's extremely well-written, not graphic or crude, and just plain got me into it, and feeling the emotions along with the players.
description
Like many stories, i wish there were more descriptions
of of the female's. I happen to prefer 95 lb. 5.0 women/girls.
ATZR247#1
Very Hot
outstanding
One of the very best stories I have read on this site.
great
Great job, every part was interesting. Loved it, love all of your writing.
keep on reading it!!!
a great love story!!
loved it
you and anne240 are the best writers on this site keep up the good work
Awesome
I loved the story. The fact it wasn't the typical "oh daddy, oh baby" with tons of misspellings was great. Write more!
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