you suck big time , first of all your part about the night mare with the arabs is so fucking far fitched than reality, if you know any thing about calutures the arabs and jews are the ones circumsized asswipe, and they clean thier asses after going to the bathroom un like you stinking ass using toilet paper. u suck dude.
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Anonymous08/30/06
Wonderful!
First, this was a story that I could put myself into and believe. Too many stories of this nature are hard to believe, while yours is more than realistic. Second, I must agree with others that state too many stories are filled with gramatical or spelling errors that detract from the story. It is very well written, and is easy to read...essential for keeping the reader going. Well done and keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more of your work.
my wife and i play this game often - of conflicted father and ineffably beautiful daughter, the wordless dance of seduction, guilt and rapture . . . it is always she who seduces me in our fantasies and i suppose that it must be that way in order to maintain some semblance (sp?) of righteousness - ya? whats a man to do? If he were to initialize some sort of sexuality he would be old and dirty and perverse and lecherous and yes ... however if he were to finally succumb to the persistant and unbearably provocative rituals of titilation from her - how could anyone ever judge him too harshly? The fantasy can only run in this one direction for me to be stimulated ... the other scenario is not rapture - just rape. good writing scouries- i came beautifully - i felt such an intimate bond with our young bursting heroine(though the cliched dream description was a touch weak - stay true to the imagination my friend)and i will look for more of your stories ... the psychology of what it is that excites me, excites me very much, you?
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Anonymous09/06/06
thank you for the load
You did a great job with the story, especially leading up to consummation (this was my foreplay). I felt myself growing harder and wanting to cum throughout the story. When they finally had sex, I stroked my member to orgasm as the dad violently pumped his hard cock into his daughter's soft, pink, wet pussy. His years of secretly wanting her all bubbled to the surface at this point. Being used to jacking off to photos, this was a great experience for me. I came about 6 hours ago and still feel the afterglow. Thanks!
Using the words: God and Jesus are a turn-off. Try Gosh and Jezzzeahhhh.
by
Anonymous09/12/06
Fantastic
This is the most believable and romantic Daddy - Daughter incest story I have ever read. great write More.
by
Anonymous09/15/06
amazing and sweet
Not only was this story hot, erotic, and made me cum 4 or 5 times, but it was also sweet, loving and romantic. The best of both worlds.
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Anonymous09/15/06
LOVED IT!!!
This is one of the best stories I've read so far. I loved the back story and the end but most importantly everything in between. Just reading it I could feel what they felt too. If only every story could be like this. And I loved even more they were from Pixburgh!
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Anonymous09/19/06
Personally one
Very enjoyable. Coincidentally, my own daughter is named Stephanie, so it was more than personal to me.
Keep up the good work.
by
Anonymous09/24/06
well thought out
well written and I suppose not over the top - could be quite realistic enough - which made it so good.
by
Anonymous09/26/06
Amazingg!!
The whole build and structure of the story was like the sex it wrote about, starting with foreplay and finally ending with a mind blowing orgasm, if only every story was like this 1, wel done my freind, keep up the good work
by
Anonymous10/02/06
perfect
One of the best storied i have read. It has eroticsm love and contintment. More please.
by
Anonymous10/04/06
very sexy
I can't quite explain why I enjoy father/daughter incest so much. I can honestly say that in real life, I have never been the slightest bit attracted to anyone in my family. I am a young female and I usually date men my own age but the fantasy of being taken by an older father figure (not my own father) is the biggest turn on that I have. Especially being dominated by two older men. Regardless, despite being incredibly liberal politically, the "racist" comments didn't bother me for the same reason that the incest doesn't bother me...it's fiction. The beauty of fantasy is that it is just that: fantasy. This story was probably the best erotica I have ever read because of the teasing and lucid descriptiveness. Kudos.
Lizzy
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Anonymous10/06/06
Have some tact!
What a waste! Your story was lovely but your apparent racism, even if it was a ploy for a character to bed another, was shameless, unadulterated trash - pretty much the only way to ruin that story. Have some more tact next time.
by
Anonymous10/07/06
father/daughter love is hott
we think your story was very hott my dad and i are lovers and have been for a number of yrs. we just finished your story and truly enjoyed it... hope to see and read more from you
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Anonymous10/08/06
NO RACISM IN IT!!!!!
There is no racism in it. She had a bad dream... she was afraid of being raped. Maybe she was thinking about 9/11. IF HE HAD USED WHITE, BLACK, ASIAN, OR INDIAN YOU WOULD STILL BE SAYING THE SAME THING. My point.... no better yet, my question is can you say any word that has to do about any race and not be called racist today?? God... AND EVEN IF HE WAS RACIST...... WHO F***ING CARES.... ITS HIS LIFE!!!! IF YOU DONT LIKE IT THEN DONT READ IT! IS IT THAT HARD???
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Anonymous10/09/06
Mind blowing story....
I usually like the shorter, "to-the-point" stories but I couldn't stop reading this intense tale. I felt like I was right there with my throbbing cock in my hand, pleading for Dad to hammer his smoking hot daughter. Juat an amazing story!! One of the best ones I've EVER read....ANYWHERE!
by
Anonymous10/09/06
true love
great love story, good detail, and very horny. thanks
by
Anonymous10/10/06
really good story.. worth the read!!!
the characters are very real.. and the story is very realistic.. i truly enjoyed it!!!
by
Anonymous10/10/06
Incestuos racist! Damn! Typical white cracker!!!
Father fucking his daughter, yet the Arabs are the bad guys. Then you go shoot up some poor girls and only fail to rape them coz the cops come around too soon. Yeah, but them smelly arabs are the bad ones.
Knowing some of your work, I give you the benefit of the doubt, that you were trying to show how your fellow white caucasians talk and think. All the same, if you just leave it floating in the air unchallenged, it sounds like you stand behind it. And before you know, Mr Scouries, the KKK and all the undercover and habitual racists are claiming you into their ranks and using your story as a platform to spew their filth.
Well written story, but my question is, "Is a white cracka fucking his daughter a better person than some arabs that rape her in her dreams?"
My answer, "No. The white cracka is was and will always be fucked up, for fucking his daughter and a whole bunch of other stuff."
In fact, the Arabs ought to fuck the white father in the ass for fucking his daughter. But if she is a slutty ho that creeps into her dad's bed naked, they ought to make her clean their cocks and get them hard again whilst she is at it.
Just giving you a taste of your own medicine, OFAY. And I'm not an Arab.
Plus anyway, think of all the black, vietnamese, american indians and all other races that were raped by a white cracker. Have you ever wondered why so many black americans are much lighter than the average African. There you have it, it was the white crackaz done raped them. For 4 hundrd years. Damn! Now I am having nightmares. Guess I need to go into my moms bed and whisper , "MUMMY!!!"
Just stop being a racist and keep up the good work. YOu are too talented to make such careless mistakes, unless it is your true colours you are actually showing. In that case, just keep on being redneck white cracker honky.
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Anonymous10/12/06
Absolutely the BEST!!
This is probably the best story of this type I have ever read!! Excellent work!
by
Anonymous10/15/06
Great but a little over the top
I loved your story although you might have gone a little bit too far with the whole arab raping her thing. Why was it them and not , oh i don't know, the irish? Arabs don't hate Americans becuase they are blond and good looking. THe entire eastern nations hate us because we are very arrogant. It might have been a little much. Besides, what 18 year old goes to their daddy when they have a bad dream? I didn't do that when I was a kid let alone now. And the way he just swallowed it. That was a little over the top. This is the only complaint that I really have. Otherwise the story was beautiful and I love your writing style. Maybe do a third person omniscient story instead of a first person once in a while. Keep it up though.
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Anonymous10/16/06
I was hoping...
...that this story would turn out better then the other two of yours that I've read. Unfortunately, the nightmare about "dirty Arabs" immediately put a bad taste in my mouth. Also, nobody goes to any med school (much less Harvard) without going to undergrad first. Did you know that? I guess I'll have to chalk it up to your ignorance. Better luck with the next story. I won't be sticking around for any more.
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Anonymous11/03/06
ohhh hot
How hot!!! I loved the whole thing good goin!
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Anonymous11/08/06
love it
more you need to do more of these
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Anonymous11/12/06
Sweet delight
I loved the climax and felt drawn in even thogh the (daddys) were a bit distracting. keep up the good writing and try not to anticipate the reviews they will come as they should. Shalom Jim.
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Anonymous11/14/06
Good Story
Liked the story even though it took some time before daddy fucked her. But in the end it turned out alright. Please write more stories like this. Maybe with a little more sex involved.
Thanks.
Mike NZ
Really loved the story. In particular, that Steff had to wait so long and work so hard to get her Daddy to fuck her. That built up the tension and made the story more realistic than if her father had had no scruples to overcome. Lovely story, keep up the good work. I'll try reading some of your others.
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Anonymous11/15/06
arab rape is hot too
I didn't feel like the "dirty arab" rape scene was racist. You could have picked any group, blacks, homeless, clowns, and the point would have been the same. It was a hot rape interlude before the real taboo. I think about angry black youths in gangs, which does not mean that I think all black men are in gangs and want to rape white women, and if I say they're stinky, it's just to add more perversion to the fantasy. If I say they all hate white people for keepin' a brotha down, it's to communicate the tone of the rape. We're talking about incest here. ARE there boundries? Who sets them? I say keep up the good work!
by
Anonymous11/16/06
a little better!!!!!!!!!!!
The story was very enjoyable. However, It would have been better if Steff had been a virgin and daddy had ventured her in all things sexual--Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!
by
Anonymous11/17/06
brill ending
good story, but the ending made it. I'm a sucker for happy endings.
by
Anonymous11/17/06
good story, sorry about everyone else
It's a shame you have to deal with the younger, sensitive, flat out ignorant people who post on racism and all that. Good story.
by
Anonymous11/19/06
Continuation
Great premise,is it going to continue or maybe another story along the same line and topic
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Anonymous11/20/06
Badass
wow ... I really liked that. I for one thought the ending was a little corney which is why I only gave this story a 4 but either way its really good. Wish I had a dad like that growing up. Ah but somethings are better left dreams. keep it up!
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Anonymous11/23/06
Greatest
THIS IS THE BEST FATHER & DAUGHTER STORY I EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE.
MY BEST WISHES TO U THE GREAT AUTHOR.
by
Anonymous11/24/06
wow
I voted for 5, if I could have, I would have given it a 10, it's the second story I read, posted by you, but it sertainly will not be the last:) Keep on the good work. Your admirer in Iceland
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Anonymous11/25/06
More please
This is definately the best father / daughter story i have read in a long time! Well done to you! Can't wait for the next..
by
Anonymous12/01/06
Amazingly hot
I absolutely loved the story...great work and keep it up...I'm looking forward to reading more of your submissions
by
Anonymous12/02/06
Superb love story...
This is a superb love story, with very hot sex! I love every word of it, and still trembling inside at how close to home this story hits.
Thanks!
by
Anonymous12/04/06
Great story.
Great story, but keep your math straight.
by
Anonymous12/05/06
Excellent, As good the second time as the first.
Many Thanks for taking the time to put fingers to keys. An excellent tale.
by
Anonymous12/10/06
wow
this was a grreat story! i loved it!
by
Anonymous12/12/06
Totally WOW!!
This is one of the hottest stories ever. The warmth, the love and the passion in this story is beautiful, yet smoking hot. Please more,more,more................
by
Anonymous12/12/06
Daddies delight
It has happened to me. I hadn't the wealth or opportunities to move or keep it quiet. We parted when she was 27 and I was 48. We still share our love.
by
Anonymous12/13/06
All Dad's
I wish my daughter an i had a relationship as good as your's , all dad's an daughter should keep the love of the family together.
Ray
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Anonymous12/13/06
Kudos
Great piece of work. Telegraphed the ending a bit, but so what; getting there was worth the read. Look forward to more of your work. Keep the faith, bro.
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Anonymous12/16/06
thank you
thank you so much as I had it in much the same way but I didnt have to work as hard as she did to get him. I had made up my mind.
It was very good. I loved the reluctance and the bit of history you threw in. Most stories these days are only full of sex, but I must admit I get much more aroused when I know the full story.
Keep up the Awesome work!
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Anonymous12/30/06
france
hot story great imagery. story was made bettr by your knowledge of geography.aand it had a HAPPY ending. good job
English
u suck
you suck big time , first of all your part about the night mare with the arabs is so fucking far fitched than reality, if you know any thing about calutures the arabs and jews are the ones circumsized asswipe, and they clean thier asses after going to the bathroom un like you stinking ass using toilet paper. u suck dude.
Wonderful!
First, this was a story that I could put myself into and believe. Too many stories of this nature are hard to believe, while yours is more than realistic. Second, I must agree with others that state too many stories are filled with gramatical or spelling errors that detract from the story. It is very well written, and is easy to read...essential for keeping the reader going. Well done and keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more of your work.
you asked for my words . . .
my wife and i play this game often - of conflicted father and ineffably beautiful daughter, the wordless dance of seduction, guilt and rapture . . . it is always she who seduces me in our fantasies and i suppose that it must be that way in order to maintain some semblance (sp?) of righteousness - ya? whats a man to do? If he were to initialize some sort of sexuality he would be old and dirty and perverse and lecherous and yes ... however if he were to finally succumb to the persistant and unbearably provocative rituals of titilation from her - how could anyone ever judge him too harshly? The fantasy can only run in this one direction for me to be stimulated ... the other scenario is not rapture - just rape. good writing scouries- i came beautifully - i felt such an intimate bond with our young bursting heroine(though the cliched dream description was a touch weak - stay true to the imagination my friend)and i will look for more of your stories ... the psychology of what it is that excites me, excites me very much, you?
thank you for the load
You did a great job with the story, especially leading up to consummation (this was my foreplay). I felt myself growing harder and wanting to cum throughout the story. When they finally had sex, I stroked my member to orgasm as the dad violently pumped his hard cock into his daughter's soft, pink, wet pussy. His years of secretly wanting her all bubbled to the surface at this point. Being used to jacking off to photos, this was a great experience for me. I came about 6 hours ago and still feel the afterglow. Thanks!
In the future...
Using the words: God and Jesus are a turn-off. Try Gosh and Jezzzeahhhh.
Fantastic
This is the most believable and romantic Daddy - Daughter incest story I have ever read. great write More.
amazing and sweet
Not only was this story hot, erotic, and made me cum 4 or 5 times, but it was also sweet, loving and romantic. The best of both worlds.
LOVED IT!!!
This is one of the best stories I've read so far. I loved the back story and the end but most importantly everything in between. Just reading it I could feel what they felt too. If only every story could be like this. And I loved even more they were from Pixburgh!
Personally one
Very enjoyable. Coincidentally, my own daughter is named Stephanie, so it was more than personal to me.
Keep up the good work.
well thought out
well written and I suppose not over the top - could be quite realistic enough - which made it so good.
Amazingg!!
The whole build and structure of the story was like the sex it wrote about, starting with foreplay and finally ending with a mind blowing orgasm, if only every story was like this 1, wel done my freind, keep up the good work
perfect
One of the best storied i have read. It has eroticsm love and contintment. More please.
very sexy
I can't quite explain why I enjoy father/daughter incest so much. I can honestly say that in real life, I have never been the slightest bit attracted to anyone in my family. I am a young female and I usually date men my own age but the fantasy of being taken by an older father figure (not my own father) is the biggest turn on that I have. Especially being dominated by two older men. Regardless, despite being incredibly liberal politically, the "racist" comments didn't bother me for the same reason that the incest doesn't bother me...it's fiction. The beauty of fantasy is that it is just that: fantasy. This story was probably the best erotica I have ever read because of the teasing and lucid descriptiveness. Kudos.
Lizzy
Have some tact!
What a waste! Your story was lovely but your apparent racism, even if it was a ploy for a character to bed another, was shameless, unadulterated trash - pretty much the only way to ruin that story. Have some more tact next time.
father/daughter love is hott
we think your story was very hott my dad and i are lovers and have been for a number of yrs. we just finished your story and truly enjoyed it... hope to see and read more from you
NO RACISM IN IT!!!!!
There is no racism in it. She had a bad dream... she was afraid of being raped. Maybe she was thinking about 9/11. IF HE HAD USED WHITE, BLACK, ASIAN, OR INDIAN YOU WOULD STILL BE SAYING THE SAME THING. My point.... no better yet, my question is can you say any word that has to do about any race and not be called racist today?? God... AND EVEN IF HE WAS RACIST...... WHO F***ING CARES.... ITS HIS LIFE!!!! IF YOU DONT LIKE IT THEN DONT READ IT! IS IT THAT HARD???
Mind blowing story....
I usually like the shorter, "to-the-point" stories but I couldn't stop reading this intense tale. I felt like I was right there with my throbbing cock in my hand, pleading for Dad to hammer his smoking hot daughter. Juat an amazing story!! One of the best ones I've EVER read....ANYWHERE!
true love
great love story, good detail, and very horny. thanks
really good story.. worth the read!!!
the characters are very real.. and the story is very realistic.. i truly enjoyed it!!!
Incestuos racist! Damn! Typical white cracker!!!
Father fucking his daughter, yet the Arabs are the bad guys. Then you go shoot up some poor girls and only fail to rape them coz the cops come around too soon. Yeah, but them smelly arabs are the bad ones.
Knowing some of your work, I give you the benefit of the doubt, that you were trying to show how your fellow white caucasians talk and think. All the same, if you just leave it floating in the air unchallenged, it sounds like you stand behind it. And before you know, Mr Scouries, the KKK and all the undercover and habitual racists are claiming you into their ranks and using your story as a platform to spew their filth.
Well written story, but my question is, "Is a white cracka fucking his daughter a better person than some arabs that rape her in her dreams?"
My answer, "No. The white cracka is was and will always be fucked up, for fucking his daughter and a whole bunch of other stuff."
In fact, the Arabs ought to fuck the white father in the ass for fucking his daughter. But if she is a slutty ho that creeps into her dad's bed naked, they ought to make her clean their cocks and get them hard again whilst she is at it.
Just giving you a taste of your own medicine, OFAY. And I'm not an Arab.
Plus anyway, think of all the black, vietnamese, american indians and all other races that were raped by a white cracker. Have you ever wondered why so many black americans are much lighter than the average African. There you have it, it was the white crackaz done raped them. For 4 hundrd years. Damn! Now I am having nightmares. Guess I need to go into my moms bed and whisper , "MUMMY!!!"
Just stop being a racist and keep up the good work. YOu are too talented to make such careless mistakes, unless it is your true colours you are actually showing. In that case, just keep on being redneck white cracker honky.
Absolutely the BEST!!
This is probably the best story of this type I have ever read!! Excellent work!
Great but a little over the top
I loved your story although you might have gone a little bit too far with the whole arab raping her thing. Why was it them and not , oh i don't know, the irish? Arabs don't hate Americans becuase they are blond and good looking. THe entire eastern nations hate us because we are very arrogant. It might have been a little much. Besides, what 18 year old goes to their daddy when they have a bad dream? I didn't do that when I was a kid let alone now. And the way he just swallowed it. That was a little over the top. This is the only complaint that I really have. Otherwise the story was beautiful and I love your writing style. Maybe do a third person omniscient story instead of a first person once in a while. Keep it up though.
I was hoping...
...that this story would turn out better then the other two of yours that I've read. Unfortunately, the nightmare about "dirty Arabs" immediately put a bad taste in my mouth. Also, nobody goes to any med school (much less Harvard) without going to undergrad first. Did you know that? I guess I'll have to chalk it up to your ignorance. Better luck with the next story. I won't be sticking around for any more.
ohhh hot
How hot!!! I loved the whole thing good goin!
love it
more you need to do more of these
Sweet delight
I loved the climax and felt drawn in even thogh the (daddys) were a bit distracting. keep up the good writing and try not to anticipate the reviews they will come as they should. Shalom Jim.
Good Story
Liked the story even though it took some time before daddy fucked her. But in the end it turned out alright. Please write more stories like this. Maybe with a little more sex involved.
Thanks.
Mike NZ
Well-written, sensuous tale
Really loved the story. In particular, that Steff had to wait so long and work so hard to get her Daddy to fuck her. That built up the tension and made the story more realistic than if her father had had no scruples to overcome. Lovely story, keep up the good work. I'll try reading some of your others.
arab rape is hot too
I didn't feel like the "dirty arab" rape scene was racist. You could have picked any group, blacks, homeless, clowns, and the point would have been the same. It was a hot rape interlude before the real taboo. I think about angry black youths in gangs, which does not mean that I think all black men are in gangs and want to rape white women, and if I say they're stinky, it's just to add more perversion to the fantasy. If I say they all hate white people for keepin' a brotha down, it's to communicate the tone of the rape. We're talking about incest here. ARE there boundries? Who sets them? I say keep up the good work!
a little better!!!!!!!!!!!
The story was very enjoyable. However, It would have been better if Steff had been a virgin and daddy had ventured her in all things sexual--Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!
brill ending
good story, but the ending made it. I'm a sucker for happy endings.
good story, sorry about everyone else
It's a shame you have to deal with the younger, sensitive, flat out ignorant people who post on racism and all that. Good story.
Continuation
Great premise,is it going to continue or maybe another story along the same line and topic
Badass
wow ... I really liked that. I for one thought the ending was a little corney which is why I only gave this story a 4 but either way its really good. Wish I had a dad like that growing up. Ah but somethings are better left dreams. keep it up!
Greatest
THIS IS THE BEST FATHER & DAUGHTER STORY I EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE.
MY BEST WISHES TO U THE GREAT AUTHOR.
wow
I voted for 5, if I could have, I would have given it a 10, it's the second story I read, posted by you, but it sertainly will not be the last:) Keep on the good work. Your admirer in Iceland
More please
This is definately the best father / daughter story i have read in a long time! Well done to you! Can't wait for the next..
Amazingly hot
I absolutely loved the story...great work and keep it up...I'm looking forward to reading more of your submissions
Superb love story...
This is a superb love story, with very hot sex! I love every word of it, and still trembling inside at how close to home this story hits.
Thanks!
Great story.
Great story, but keep your math straight.
Excellent, As good the second time as the first.
Many Thanks for taking the time to put fingers to keys. An excellent tale.
wow
this was a grreat story! i loved it!
Totally WOW!!
This is one of the hottest stories ever. The warmth, the love and the passion in this story is beautiful, yet smoking hot. Please more,more,more................
Daddies delight
It has happened to me. I hadn't the wealth or opportunities to move or keep it quiet. We parted when she was 27 and I was 48. We still share our love.
All Dad's
I wish my daughter an i had a relationship as good as your's , all dad's an daughter should keep the love of the family together.
Ray
Kudos
Great piece of work. Telegraphed the ending a bit, but so what; getting there was worth the read. Look forward to more of your work. Keep the faith, bro.
thank you
thank you so much as I had it in much the same way but I didnt have to work as hard as she did to get him. I had made up my mind.
Awsome
That Was totally AWSOME. Keep up the great work.
Wonderful
It was very good. I loved the reluctance and the bit of history you threw in. Most stories these days are only full of sex, but I must admit I get much more aroused when I know the full story.
Keep up the Awesome work!
france
hot story great imagery. story was made bettr by your knowledge of geography.aand it had a HAPPY ending. good job
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