Have to say love stories that are full and background which this is. I enjoyed getting to know both of them
by
Anonymous01/03/07
Fantastic Dad -Daughter sex story
Really a nice incest story of dad fucking daughter.Young girls
love to make sex with mature men.So young girls long to be
fucked by their dads.This story is really fantastic.
by
Anonymous01/07/07
The luck of some fathers
Ah, to be your father. Images that will rest in those special places of my imagination.
by
Anonymous01/07/07
None Better
I must say I have written a story or two myself but I have never read a better story. I look forward to reading as many of your stories as I possibly can, you have a great writing style and I found this story to have had an alternate effect on me than what I started reading it for. Please write more.
by
Anonymous01/08/07
just, wow
This wasn't like the"wam bam thank you mam" I usually fine here, it was deep, beautifully written and sexy, and amazing. You, are an amazingly tallented author.
by
Anonymous01/08/07
More, More!!
Great story, how about another chapter?
Make it as hot as this story. Plenty of sex with both screaming & moaning when they cum.
by
Anonymous01/08/07
You are without a doubt a great author
Your story was excellent.I felt like i was there.Keep up the great work....
by
Anonymous01/10/07
i wanna be stephanie so bad
ive never heard a story thats made me so horny. i want that with my daddy so bad, wish i could seduce him stephanie style. fuck the boring idiots that go on about racism and whether you got the education system down correct. sad. great detailed story, nice to see a progression in an story rather than rampant sex scenes from no where with little dialogue. hope to hear more frm u soon x
by
Anonymous01/12/07
A Stunner
Clearly, you're the real thing. A writer. You truly wove a seductive web that was impossible to escape (not that I wanted to). Compelling. Obviously, there is a certain inevitability in stories here, we know we're going to reach a climactic destination eventually, but you make the journey just as exciting and riveting as the climax. Wonderful stuff. I will continue to seek out your stories.
by
Anonymous01/16/07
phenominal
this is top quality work and the story had much more depth and passion than many kee[ up the good work. no matter who it ends up being i hope to find that much passion(and lust) in my life. thank you,
derek
by
Anonymous01/16/07
ROthpikan
wow. that story was unbeleiveable. the build up was explosive. please make many more stories because they are truely genious. i absolutley loved it. it was full of realistic fantasies that almost anyone an relate to. keep up the good work!!!!!!
by
Anonymous01/21/07
Awesome
Thanx
by
Anonymous01/24/07
Well done
This is a very nice story, the build up to the magical moment was short but intense and the discription of the love making as sweet and lusty.
Well done
Kargan
by
Anonymous01/25/07
great story
great story . . very nicely done . . . real life incest is not always someone forcing the other person . . it really can be based on honest real love . . .
by
Anonymous01/27/07
Superb!!!!!! Hats off
Dear Stef,
Your stoy is a wonderful peice of creation by human mind and your narration undoubtedly puts you in the pinnacle.
Keep it up and best of luck for future.
Sibi
by
Anonymous01/30/07
true love does win
This story was AWESOME! I'm 19 years old and I am in a very happy, fulfilling relationship with my Daddy. This story captures it all. Hate to leave such a short comment but I have to go fuck my Daddy now. ;)
by
Anonymous02/03/07
well written
well done and not something slapped together "for a quick wank" as some might say. there's depth to the characters and a very believeable setting keep up the great work
by
Anonymous02/03/07
Don't you wish it were you
I am 60 and have been having sex with my 19 year old granddaughter for a year now. Her 20th is comming up soon and we wish we could get married, but you know! All I can say, life is great, I hope to die making love to her. She sees no other men and I being widowed, we love for hours playing and loving. I am glad we can't have children. She promised to have one after I am gone and name it after me. I found my soul mate.
by
Anonymous02/04/07
amazing
i'm obviously not the first person to think this but i LOVED this submission. this is a real story, not the poor grammar and dirty words of others i've read before. it is beautiful, sexy...a true masterpiece. you keep writing them, and i'll keep reading.
by
Anonymous02/08/07
daddy
this story has got me thinking. i did wonder why my dad kept looking at me , you know that way. i didnt think anything of it but i do now. i do fancy him , so thanks to you i will and see if i can make him my first lover.
sharryn.
by
Anonymous02/11/07
One word SUPERB>
I have been reading this type of story on various sites for quite a while and have read both good bad and ridiculously bad ones, and have never either voted or written an appreciation, but this took me right in there and was so real and so well written that it took my breath away --- scouries you are a great author and I look forward to reading your previous and future work with great anticipation -- one word SUPERB.
by
Anonymous02/12/07
If only...
If only that could have happened to me...all I get from my beautiful sexy daughter is glimpses down her blouse and when we part a tight hug while I take that as an excuse to rub her back to find out if she is wearing a bra or not.
The seduction of the father, who so obviously wanted her but wasn't going to risk hurting his girl, was matchless. More foreplay before he jumped into her tight little box would have been great; how could any Dad fail to eat such a sweet pussy first?
The Arab dream scene did have racist undertones, but mostly it felt gratuitous. Could have been left out, unless the author just wanted to give her a chance to talk to Dad about sexual encounters. But that could have been done using one of her classmated, especially one that's hot for him. And I think that would have been hotter and a better fit in the storyline.
by
Anonymous02/15/07
Wow...
That took a really weird racist tone.
by
Anonymous02/18/07
Perfection
Thanks for writing such a believable story
by
Anonymous02/18/07
So detailed. So REAL! So arousing!
I can't remember ever reading anything that seemed so real and so sensual. I am 64 and I was transported back to my 30s, 40s, and 50s, and the two women I've love the most, and I nearly came in my pants while reading the last chapter of this MARVELOUS story. Thank you for sharing your gift of writing with the rest of us. You could still turn me on when I'm 90!!! R
by
Anonymous02/19/07
Baby Girl
If only I had a baby girl like you. I felt like I was your daddy and could feel all that he was feeling when you two made love.
Thanks
by
Anonymous02/21/07
passionate Love Story
Just thought your story was well written, loving. You didn't leave the reader hanging like many authors here. A true Love story, thank you
So, you have 228 comments on your "Daddy" story - 229 now. I started reading your work some years ago and I wrote at the time that it was brilliant. You craft a story so well, and as someone else has noted, you take the story to completion rather than get bored with it once the gravy strokes are done!
As many other readers of this story have also written here, the love between the two is palpable; the anguish of the father over the risk, social or emotional, of 'damaging' his daughter makes this such a super story, just of people ... the fact that it revolves around an incestuous basis is almost bye the bye.
I thank you very much. Best regards,
Fubar2k
Auckland, NZ
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Anonymous02/24/07
i wish i had that kind of Daddy
I dream about my daddy all the time but he doesnt even fuck my mother, let alone me.
My boyfriend is little substitute for dad!
this gave me the most explosive orgasm of all time, thankyou, thankyou, thankyou!
by
Anonymous02/28/07
loved this story...
great buildup to the inevitable event. a kind of foreplay for the reader. VERY WELL DONE! I will read more from you.
by
Anonymous03/01/07
Wow
This is some SMOKIN writing! I fell in love with Daddy, and thought I was 18 again!!! I will read this one over and over again!!
by
Anonymous03/01/07
Stupid intrusion
That stupid racist shit about "Arabs" (read "Blacks") wanting to rape our lovely blonde women was completely unnecessary and a complete turnoff.
Sal
by
Anonymous03/01/07
Core Shaking
You did a masterful job on a taboo subject. Could change a lot of opinions on incest. Thank You
by
Anonymous03/01/07
hot
work of a master
by
Anonymous03/04/07
hi honey
this story so realistic. i just like to know, is this story your real life story ? well, i love the way ur wrighting..i feel so excited when i was reading this...i like to see your pics plz e-mail if its possible nagahiahans@hotmail.com
by
Anonymous03/07/07
Masterful
I just discovered your work through your Daddy story. It's been some long time since I've read anything so stirting. Your lengthy introduction leading upto the exposive climax, pardon the pun, is as much seduction as it is foreplay. Plesae tell me that talent such as yours has made it to written publication. Thank you for the marvelous story, and I will be looking for more of your work.
by
Anonymous03/07/07
BRILLIANTLY EROTIC
Well I must say that you are the daughter that i dreamed of, I have my own,but shes not interested.Any way, masterfully done! Masterfully done! You are an extremely erotic woman.Thank you.
by
Anonymous03/07/07
Keep Up The Good Work
scouries:
Very well written. Do the children know that their father is also their grandfather? ...That their mother is also their half-sister? I'm having a lot of fun with this one...
Now...as the three daughters become teenagers, will mommy let daddy have sex with them as well? What if they become as infatuated with daddy as their mother/half-sister? In any event, daddy comes out ahead! (npi - no pun intended...well maybe!)
by
Anonymous03/10/07
Unwelcome Racist Rant
The racism about Arabs was not only inappropriate and offensive, but only demonstrative of complete ignorance. Educate yourself before spreading vicious propaganda about other cultures.
by
Anonymous03/16/07
arabs
Like all the arabs,far to sensitive to voice their comments.The story is a masterpiece of erotica....keep it up JIM
by
Anonymous03/18/07
hott incest fun
Being a doctor, i loved to fantasize with her every word on how it would be to be with one's daughter. Yum is all i can say. very hottt. delightful. Dr E
by
Anonymous03/19/07
Wow!
Has to be the best story of yours that I have read as of yet. Given the detail I wonder how much is fantasy and how much is reality.
by
Anonymous03/23/07
Top of the bill
It ticked all the boxes for me and my lady friend who is 37 and I am 58, we also started a long time ago, so we can relate to this story. Full marks 100%
by
Anonymous03/23/07
Scienfiction
It seems to me it's fabolous story. How you got out from law, public eyes and your own mother. If it's real nobody find out. It's illegal.
by
Anonymous03/26/07
Absoultly Fabuloso
Do the children ever ask about their Grandparents??? I loved it, personally I'm not attracted to my family members but this story is Awesomeness
That was...incredible.
I haven't felt that pleased with anything in a very long time.
I must just give you an appluase to your skills as a writer.
That was just...insanely incredible.
I'll never forget your story.
by
Anonymous03/27/07
hell
what can i say BUt wonderfull
by
Anonymous03/27/07
Hot! But shame about the anti - Arab bit
This story was freaking hot! Almost had an orgasm with the daughter at the end just from reading it. If only there wasn't the Arab bit - I'm sure Arab daddies are just as hot!
English
fabulous
Have to say love stories that are full and background which this is. I enjoyed getting to know both of them
Fantastic Dad -Daughter sex story
Really a nice incest story of dad fucking daughter.Young girls
love to make sex with mature men.So young girls long to be
fucked by their dads.This story is really fantastic.
The luck of some fathers
Ah, to be your father. Images that will rest in those special places of my imagination.
None Better
I must say I have written a story or two myself but I have never read a better story. I look forward to reading as many of your stories as I possibly can, you have a great writing style and I found this story to have had an alternate effect on me than what I started reading it for. Please write more.
just, wow
This wasn't like the"wam bam thank you mam" I usually fine here, it was deep, beautifully written and sexy, and amazing. You, are an amazingly tallented author.
More, More!!
Great story, how about another chapter?
Make it as hot as this story. Plenty of sex with both screaming & moaning when they cum.
You are without a doubt a great author
Your story was excellent.I felt like i was there.Keep up the great work....
i wanna be stephanie so bad
ive never heard a story thats made me so horny. i want that with my daddy so bad, wish i could seduce him stephanie style. fuck the boring idiots that go on about racism and whether you got the education system down correct. sad. great detailed story, nice to see a progression in an story rather than rampant sex scenes from no where with little dialogue. hope to hear more frm u soon x
A Stunner
Clearly, you're the real thing. A writer. You truly wove a seductive web that was impossible to escape (not that I wanted to). Compelling. Obviously, there is a certain inevitability in stories here, we know we're going to reach a climactic destination eventually, but you make the journey just as exciting and riveting as the climax. Wonderful stuff. I will continue to seek out your stories.
phenominal
this is top quality work and the story had much more depth and passion than many kee[ up the good work. no matter who it ends up being i hope to find that much passion(and lust) in my life. thank you,
derek
ROthpikan
wow. that story was unbeleiveable. the build up was explosive. please make many more stories because they are truely genious. i absolutley loved it. it was full of realistic fantasies that almost anyone an relate to. keep up the good work!!!!!!
Awesome
Thanx
Well done
This is a very nice story, the build up to the magical moment was short but intense and the discription of the love making as sweet and lusty.
Well done
Kargan
great story
great story . . very nicely done . . . real life incest is not always someone forcing the other person . . it really can be based on honest real love . . .
Superb!!!!!! Hats off
Dear Stef,
Your stoy is a wonderful peice of creation by human mind and your narration undoubtedly puts you in the pinnacle.
Keep it up and best of luck for future.
Sibi
true love does win
This story was AWESOME! I'm 19 years old and I am in a very happy, fulfilling relationship with my Daddy. This story captures it all. Hate to leave such a short comment but I have to go fuck my Daddy now. ;)
well written
well done and not something slapped together "for a quick wank" as some might say. there's depth to the characters and a very believeable setting keep up the great work
Don't you wish it were you
I am 60 and have been having sex with my 19 year old granddaughter for a year now. Her 20th is comming up soon and we wish we could get married, but you know! All I can say, life is great, I hope to die making love to her. She sees no other men and I being widowed, we love for hours playing and loving. I am glad we can't have children. She promised to have one after I am gone and name it after me. I found my soul mate.
amazing
i'm obviously not the first person to think this but i LOVED this submission. this is a real story, not the poor grammar and dirty words of others i've read before. it is beautiful, sexy...a true masterpiece. you keep writing them, and i'll keep reading.
daddy
this story has got me thinking. i did wonder why my dad kept looking at me , you know that way. i didnt think anything of it but i do now. i do fancy him , so thanks to you i will and see if i can make him my first lover.
sharryn.
One word SUPERB>
I have been reading this type of story on various sites for quite a while and have read both good bad and ridiculously bad ones, and have never either voted or written an appreciation, but this took me right in there and was so real and so well written that it took my breath away --- scouries you are a great author and I look forward to reading your previous and future work with great anticipation -- one word SUPERB.
If only...
If only that could have happened to me...all I get from my beautiful sexy daughter is glimpses down her blouse and when we part a tight hug while I take that as an excuse to rub her back to find out if she is wearing a bra or not.
Hot and Believable
The seduction of the father, who so obviously wanted her but wasn't going to risk hurting his girl, was matchless. More foreplay before he jumped into her tight little box would have been great; how could any Dad fail to eat such a sweet pussy first?
The Arab dream scene did have racist undertones, but mostly it felt gratuitous. Could have been left out, unless the author just wanted to give her a chance to talk to Dad about sexual encounters. But that could have been done using one of her classmated, especially one that's hot for him. And I think that would have been hotter and a better fit in the storyline.
Wow...
That took a really weird racist tone.
Perfection
Thanks for writing such a believable story
So detailed. So REAL! So arousing!
I can't remember ever reading anything that seemed so real and so sensual. I am 64 and I was transported back to my 30s, 40s, and 50s, and the two women I've love the most, and I nearly came in my pants while reading the last chapter of this MARVELOUS story. Thank you for sharing your gift of writing with the rest of us. You could still turn me on when I'm 90!!! R
Baby Girl
If only I had a baby girl like you. I felt like I was your daddy and could feel all that he was feeling when you two made love.
Thanks
passionate Love Story
Just thought your story was well written, loving. You didn't leave the reader hanging like many authors here. A true Love story, thank you
Comments!
So, you have 228 comments on your "Daddy" story - 229 now. I started reading your work some years ago and I wrote at the time that it was brilliant. You craft a story so well, and as someone else has noted, you take the story to completion rather than get bored with it once the gravy strokes are done!
As many other readers of this story have also written here, the love between the two is palpable; the anguish of the father over the risk, social or emotional, of 'damaging' his daughter makes this such a super story, just of people ... the fact that it revolves around an incestuous basis is almost bye the bye.
I thank you very much. Best regards,
Fubar2k
Auckland, NZ
i wish i had that kind of Daddy
I dream about my daddy all the time but he doesnt even fuck my mother, let alone me.
My boyfriend is little substitute for dad!
this gave me the most explosive orgasm of all time, thankyou, thankyou, thankyou!
loved this story...
great buildup to the inevitable event. a kind of foreplay for the reader. VERY WELL DONE! I will read more from you.
Wow
This is some SMOKIN writing! I fell in love with Daddy, and thought I was 18 again!!! I will read this one over and over again!!
Stupid intrusion
That stupid racist shit about "Arabs" (read "Blacks") wanting to rape our lovely blonde women was completely unnecessary and a complete turnoff.
Sal
Core Shaking
You did a masterful job on a taboo subject. Could change a lot of opinions on incest. Thank You
hot
work of a master
hi honey
this story so realistic. i just like to know, is this story your real life story ? well, i love the way ur wrighting..i feel so excited when i was reading this...i like to see your pics plz e-mail if its possible nagahiahans@hotmail.com
Masterful
I just discovered your work through your Daddy story. It's been some long time since I've read anything so stirting. Your lengthy introduction leading upto the exposive climax, pardon the pun, is as much seduction as it is foreplay. Plesae tell me that talent such as yours has made it to written publication. Thank you for the marvelous story, and I will be looking for more of your work.
BRILLIANTLY EROTIC
Well I must say that you are the daughter that i dreamed of, I have my own,but shes not interested.Any way, masterfully done! Masterfully done! You are an extremely erotic woman.Thank you.
Keep Up The Good Work
scouries:
Very well written. Do the children know that their father is also their grandfather? ...That their mother is also their half-sister? I'm having a lot of fun with this one...
Now...as the three daughters become teenagers, will mommy let daddy have sex with them as well? What if they become as infatuated with daddy as their mother/half-sister? In any event, daddy comes out ahead! (npi - no pun intended...well maybe!)
Unwelcome Racist Rant
The racism about Arabs was not only inappropriate and offensive, but only demonstrative of complete ignorance. Educate yourself before spreading vicious propaganda about other cultures.
arabs
Like all the arabs,far to sensitive to voice their comments.The story is a masterpiece of erotica....keep it up JIM
hott incest fun
Being a doctor, i loved to fantasize with her every word on how it would be to be with one's daughter. Yum is all i can say. very hottt. delightful. Dr E
Wow!
Has to be the best story of yours that I have read as of yet. Given the detail I wonder how much is fantasy and how much is reality.
Top of the bill
It ticked all the boxes for me and my lady friend who is 37 and I am 58, we also started a long time ago, so we can relate to this story. Full marks 100%
Scienfiction
It seems to me it's fabolous story. How you got out from law, public eyes and your own mother. If it's real nobody find out. It's illegal.
Absoultly Fabuloso
Do the children ever ask about their Grandparents??? I loved it, personally I'm not attracted to my family members but this story is Awesomeness
Amazing.
Very nice. That'll be something to keep and read for hours durning the night when my pussy is throbbing! ^.^;
HOLY MY GOD.
That was...incredible.
I haven't felt that pleased with anything in a very long time.
I must just give you an appluase to your skills as a writer.
That was just...insanely incredible.
I'll never forget your story.
hell
what can i say BUt wonderfull
Hot! But shame about the anti - Arab bit
This story was freaking hot! Almost had an orgasm with the daughter at the end just from reading it. If only there wasn't the Arab bit - I'm sure Arab daddies are just as hot!
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