"Daddy?" I Whispered

Boring

Almost back clicked before I had the first page read. Get an editor and don't waste our time with racist crap either.

betrayed

I once defended you against people calling you racist in their comments, but that was before I saw the awful things you post in the forum.

Satisfying

I enjoyed this story more than most others I've read. I'm glad that I found a story that sets the mood for what's inevitably going to happen. I mean, all these stories are about sex right? Well I prefer a story and that's what I got when I opened this particular link. I do, however, wish that the sex portion could have been elaborated on a bit more...instead of having all this background information to tease me and then everything becomes concluded rather quickly in the last page. It was a let down, to say the least, but still good.

As for the supposed "racism," it wasn't directed to anyone arabic, or a stranger, nor was it even a true statement. She was making up a lie to tell her father and as someone has said before, this is a stereo-type that MANY people unfortunately share and I REALLY doubt that every person on here complaining about the supposed racism in this story is not guilty of some form of racist thought along those lines. If you were to say no, you'd be lying. Technically, her vanity in herself and her father and evidently her race, could be seen as RACIST even if the word Arab had not been mentioned. It would just depend on who you asked.

"Wow"

The story for me was tender and loving. Sexy, daring, and oh so good. Not only do I give you a high 5 but you also brought up my manhood to its fullest lenght. For that I owe you for the best story that I have ever read. Thank you for sharing your life with me and your experiences. And yes your Daddy/husband is a very lucky man.

You've gotta be kidding!

Race-thing??? Gods! where do you people surf? Porn sites 24/7? Ever hear of Suspension of Disbelief? Scene-Setting?
The "girl" made up the story about the dream, it was fictional for hells sake! fiction within fiction. Put your anti-redneck attitudes to bed where they belong.

Idiots

What would you idiots have had her tell her father about? Monsters with fur and tentacles that came out from under her bed? The boogey man? I hate people and the crap they spout about "racism". Odds are, and statistically it has been proven that everyone has a racist thought once in their life. Racism has been around since the dawn of man. so PLEASE GET THE FRIG OVER IT YOU STUPID INSIPID IDIOTS. Chances are you have passed someone on the friggen street and they have thought something very racist about you. I thought the story was good enough. It could have moved a bit faster. But its better than most of the bull crap on this site. With all their "OH YES I AM CUMMMMMMINNGGGG!!!!!" Come on! Real people don't react like HALF the people in these stories. And the ones that do are the ones that have read those stories or seen the porns with everything over reactive. Please GROW UP people. Racism is inevitable and if you can't just STFU and get used to it then you should probably move to the moon. Infact, please do. I'll fund your trip, but please forget to pack your pressurized suits and airtanks.

very touching

Its rare to read something touching in a porn site. You could almost feel the father daughter love. A little weird to have them get married but to each his own! I thouroughly enjoyed your writing. I got caught up in the story and not just the sex.

Fabulous!

One of the best daddy-daughter stories that I've read. I loved the slow build.

I loved the story

Best eritic story, im looking forward to your next ones!!!!

Amazing!

That was the most amazing incest forum I've ever read. I'm glad you love your DAD! I read the whole thing with pleasure!

Good f...... story!

Good job of building the story. Would have liked tom have seen more moaning and ... since she is a teen and probably not experienced in lovemaking . H ave read other stories by you on other sites and enjoyed those too.

ending

loved it loved it loved it but didnt like the ending. the marriage was ok but that they had daughters of their own? thats a little much. but great story.

a thing of beauty

I loved the story, what a lucky father I see no wrong in two adults even father and daughter enjoying each other, no harm in this as they are both adults having sex of all kinds God, how he must of enjoyed the young and inocent thing as she seemed to enjow very much more power to them

lovely and romantic

I applaude your story as is has content as well as pasion desire and a completion to it

THE ABSOLUTE BEST!!

YOUR WRITTIN SKILLS ARE FANTASTIC. I SAW EVERY SCENE CLEARLY IN MY MIND AS I READ. THIS IS *BY FAR* THE BEST STORY IVE READ ON THIS SITE!! THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR TALENT WITH US!

more to this than meets the eye

I loved your story, and I understand it. For I have a relative that I am deeply in love with. But we both have a problem, a very serious problem. What ever you do, don't care this thing to your grave. All people have sinned against God, for we were born with a sinful nature. But the only way we can get rid of this sinful nature is to ask Jesus Christ for forgiveness and ask Him to be our Lord and savior. He will forgive us of all sin no matter what it is. Then we can spend all of eternity in Heaven in love and peace. But without that forgiveness we will spend all of eternity in the fires of Hell where we will be in constant pain and torment forever. No matter how much pleasure we get out of a sin, no matter what it is, it is not worth spending eternity in Hell.

It gets even better . . .

. . . the more you read it. This is the third time for me. I don't remember if I left a comma before, and I'm not going to sift through 316 comments to find out. But kudos to you, Mr. Scouries, for excellence in erotica. This is the one story that really should be made into a movie. Somehow I can picture Jessica Alba starring as daughter Stephanie, and you of course, starring as Daddy. Your biggest fan, Sarah. Are you adopting these days?

Awesome!

Excellent work. Awesome detail, and "HOT"!!

Awesome!

Excellent work. Awesome detail, and "HOT"!!

Very excellent

This was fantastically written, and I am SOOO glad I decided to click on it. Amazing writing, thank you!

Mind Blowing

I absolutely loved it. I would love to see more from you. Please continue writing and submitting. Thank you.

Wow!That's amazing!

That was amazing I would very much like to see more from you.That was the greatest love story I've read in a long time!

This is what stories shold be about

I like to write and your storie has given me lots of thoughts, I too got hard just reading it,
Thanks

AMAZING

OMG IS THIS REAL WELL I DONT CARE THAT WAS HOT BY FAR THE BEST I'VE READ

Wow. I'm sat here, my whole body seems to be tingling. Not many stories have that effect on me. wow.

Nice

I give it at least a 90. It was well written and thought out. A bit predictable, but that is almost inevitable in this genre. I did appreciate the slow build up. There were few if any grammatical errors! I find poor grammar and spelling both disappointing and distracting. Maybe its just me. :-)

Daddy?" I Whispered

Wow yo all i can say is wow that was hot

tooo hot babe

Oh. the word are not enough to explain what i feel when i read this story. i get an orgasm in the toylet after reading this story without any foreplay

Wow

Probably the best story i've read on this site. 100% Believable and left you wanting more. Excellent.

I loved it.

I'm glad it worked so well for you. Hope it lasts. Good Luck.

I loved your story.

This story was great. I could invision the story in great detail. I love how well you set it up with the characters along with the events that lead on to the final destination of marrage. My only question is is this story real or not real. In any case I could see it as a real event. I look forward to reading more storys by you.

Fantastic!

Riveting! It was so good I wish there was more to read. Keep up the good work!

Great Story

two great writers from Pittsburgh. Sarahhh and You, first readinng of your submissions.
Will be watching and reading your offerings

odd but it was a very good story!

This story was odd but interesting this is my first story reading about this type of situation. It was different.

Amazing

wow i absolutely LOVED the ending at first i was like "eh i dont know if i wanna read this" but then the more i read the more i liked it..anyways the story was one of the best ones ive read on this site..... most endings leave me hanging this one exceded my expectations :] thankyou and please keep writing

Mmmmm......

..thank you...this so described my fantasy....so good to know another mind conjures up the same ... one day, I hope my fantasy comes true...:-) as this story has portrayed.

YUMMMMMMMM

It started Sooo Hott , but when it came to middle eatern men, it got stupid , middle eastern men & they are circumcized, cuz I had some middle eatern.The rest of ur story it was very hottt.

GREAT

It started out just anothe daughter father hook up, but from there to being married, it was great, never mind about the kids, it was a great story, thanks

make good for buttwipe

all the boasting you do in the forums i thought i reading something really good. third rate not even.

Nice!

Loved it! I don't read father/daughter stories really much because they're pretty lame.. but I liked this one! 10/10!

WOW

i love to read forbidden stories and your's was awesome i loved how you showed how it all started and how you went right up to the present day

the best

it was the best and most detailed daughter/father story i ever read

OMGGG

That was the best father daughter story everr and I've read alot ;)

One of the better stories of this kind I've read. Quite enjoyable.

Sublime

This story was absolutely wonderful; I can't say enough about how much I enjoyed it. ;]

Loved it! Got me off - and that's why I was here!

Thanks much, I'll check out more of your stories!

YEAH BABY!

When reading this I could feel my heartbeat accelerating with every word, and when Daddy gave in to his little girl I was lost. You have a gift- wow- dont lose it and please give me more! GIVE ME MORE!

Wow :)

I have always had a 'daddy' fantasy and this was a very good story! Thanks :)

Yum!!!

I enjoyed every word. I was soaked! bravo!!!

Seductive

Very Very sensual and erotic I could almost picture her teasing him and got hard when he did.