"Daddy?" I Whispered

Warmth

True love and warmth is what i felt, imagination or truth ?????? all I'll say is this, you brought a tear to this girls eyes. keep up the great work.

wow

That was very hot and sexy! Certainly got me going....

Squirt!!! Squirt!!! Ahhh..... Not bad!

Only one reason I didn't give it a perfect ten. I'm a pervert, and proud of it. Being a pervert, and especially fond of having my cock sucked,.. I found your story lacking a few good juicy, detailed blowjobs, and your ratio of liter to erotica being to heavy on the liter. Don't get me wrong. I don't want you to take my honest opinion as bashing. I did like it alot. You have been blessed with an awesome talent for story telling. I just think that an erotic story should have more sex and of course a few good blowjobs and pussy eating. More, Monsieur! More!!

Wow!

You must have enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it!!

thank you for sharing

it reminds me of how my daughter seduced me years ago. she awoke me with the most perfect blow job i had ever had i was too far gone to stop when i awoke and when she had finished i was hers. thank you again for sharing.

uuhh

niicee story- but there's no beaches in Rome!!

Just a little too long...

The only problem is that it was way too long. It just left me thinking WHEN IS HE GONNA FUCK HER ALREADY! but it was still good

beautiful...

Absolutely beautiful, as always.

Jessica

great

lved it - 2 comment for a couple of other readers though - i agree with whoever said that you could have leant slightly heavier on the sexual element. Don't get me wrong, the tension was great, but perhaps we could have had a little more detail from europe? It seemed to be over fairly quickly once the sexc started.

and to another reader - he didnt say there were beaches IN rome - and there certainly are beaches NEAR Rome - to the west and south.


All in all, great story, one of the best i have read.

Just leaves me wondering if the girls will grow up to be like mommy...

addition

same reader as below - just with a couple more things to say.

The rascist bit was completely unnecessary - i know she needed an excuse, but there are plenty of nightmares. And the story would have been just as faithfully served had the men been american. Even with them being 'arabic' (i assume u know that 'arab' isn't a nationality?) there were some needless insults in there (filthy, smelly, etc). your prejudices showed through there, which is never an attractive trait in an author.



also, ignore the people saying they couldn't believe she was 18 etc etc. Many 18 yo girls, particularly 'daddies girls', come across as much younger, particularly in private.
my own daughter (20) when she is around me, acts like she did when she was about 11. (and there is nothing sexual in our relationship) It's a comfort thing. (and also to do with the fact that she has me wrapped around her little finger) She likes to be feel safe and protected. Even my ex wife acted more like a little girl when we were alone - it's not even restricted to daughters, and especially not just to incestuous daughters more please!!!!

a bit different from the usual father-daughter...

a bit different from what ive read..usually its the dad that cannot resist temptations..this one i lik emost because the father wasnt that sexually hungry to just throw away everything..he was keeping his feelings for himself at first..i like the way it ended too..ohh i want to fuck ryt now hahahaha

boring

Not romantic, not sexy and a tad bit racist. I love the daddy theme...this story just didn't do it for me.

Love it

I loved your story. It made me want to go to the next page and read more!!

mmmm good

Loved loved loved it. although didn't much enjoy the racist dream bit. the rest i loved. so nice to see the daughter for once seducing the father. a nice spin on things.

racist comments?

Yeah I was really into the story until I read that..it wasnt necessary..and made me completely lose interest..and move on to a different story.

excellent

excellent story tnx

Incredibly sexy! Loved every moment of it!

Fantastic!

Excellently written--a delight to read!

Inspiringly sexy and romantic

Inspiringly sexy and romantic

Wow

That was an excellent story. You had me hooked on every word. When they finally made love I got butterflies. i dont thinly of my father that way but it was a great story of love.

good

this was a good story but a bit
different. your an awesome writer,
keep it up!

Good Job Keep It Up

I think your story was well written, and I truly like the way you didn't leave your readers hanging, you let us know where the characters were in their lives some twelve years later. Don't stop writing and forget the negative comments you might get. Even though I'm not into incest, if all is said and done your story was a turn on when father and daughter got together. It was your description of the love scenes that help the attetion of the reader we forgot all about it being a father daughter.

why the racism?

racist. there was no need. completly ruined an otherwise good story

Excellent!

I really enjoyed this story. Its the first incestuous story that I've opened, and it immediately caught my attention. It was well written, and I enjoyed that it was much longer than most of the other stories I find on here. Most definitely a job well done!

Paradise

I'm an 84 year old male and over the sexual hill, but it was wonderful to at least get another glimpse of Paradise...and I still have memories.

Very good story!

I have read incest stories before but this story was not only well thought of but also kept me interested throughout the whole writing.

Wow!

Wow says it all.
Brilliant story.

Amazing build up, graphic detail. Simply awesome.

Please write more like this. Perhaps a sequal?

Awesome Story -- More!!!

Your story is fantastic. You had me hooked on every word. I couldn't wait to read more and when they made love it was just amazing.

The build-up, the seduction, everything went so well together.
Please write another father - daughter story.

Talent like yours should not go to waste, more stories please!!!!

Seriously Mind Blowing

NEVER have I read a story with such enthusiasm. Your style is excellent.

wow

fucking fantastic sorry for swearing but it was damn good stuff. i cummed 3 times and the build up was great just have to read the bit about her dad picking her up and carrying her to her room and i am cumming. also i could imagine it all great stuff keep up the good work.

HOT, oh soooo hot!

My wildest fantasies in print, best written incest story so far .... just what I hope one day will happen between myslf and my daddy!!! mmmm....thanks!

Daddy oh Daddy..

The story was very well written and needless to say I masterbated slowly to each phase of the written piece. Keep writing and we shall keep enjoying. Thank you...

Holy crap. lol

holy shit... I don't think I've been that wet over a story here in a long LONG time. Congrats. lol. I mean, I'm not so much for the incest thing, but for the incredible age difference, (I like older men,) It's SO kinky when the story is between someone who is inexperienced, and someone who knows what the hell their doing. I tend to think of it as... mentor sex. the inexperienced one is learning what sex really is all about, in his/her partner.

Great stuff

OMG i loved your story please write more like this

MASTER PIECE

Show me another author who write better errotic stories than you. Your way of writing is great, the way you build up to the sex scene, the discription, it is
all great.
Your stories shows what an artist you are, reading your stories has me cumming more than watching a porno flick. great immagination(if not cudoos to you). ......... ps this reader can wait for another masterpiece from a master writer who respect the sex act to give a little build up before and after. GREAT WORK KEEP IT UP.

Damn

that was the best story I have ever read I got so horny I wish I had a man like that, some one that I can go to paris with and have sex all night long it would be amazing

Well written and enjoyable

I don't read a lot of incest stories, as often they seem creepy to me, but your story was very good, quite well written and arousing. I know what you mean about the voting thing too, as I have a few on here that have had many views, but not so many votes sometimes. I will have to look for more of yours when it's not 3 a.m.!

Ecstatic...!

Erotica reading is just not my thing but a friend mentioned of your story and pushed me...I am so happy she did...

If I could vote more than once, all the stars would be used up...!

If I had a single wish, it would be that this is your biography as nothing else could be more deserving...

You truly are aware that sensuality is a language of its own and that it is the glue that bonds love forever as sensuality never ages, but only disappears when someone makes it disappear...

From the beginning to the end of your story, your sensual love excels in the realm that only a real and sincere love could possibly exist...sensually, love, and everlasting...!

Congratulations...

damn what a story

must be a true story, too good not to be real... your dads a really lucky guy to have a sweetie like you

WOW - Nothing can be said but WOW!

This was a sizzler! Fantastic! Did I say I TOTALLY enjoyed it? Well, I DID!! :-)

The hardest theme to write about

So hard to write in a pleasing way about controversial subjects like incest.
Very well done, fascinating, it kept me reading from start to finish.

Better than all the rest

Just what I would love to go through myself . I hope my daughter reads this and wants the same . No harm in dreaming .

i loved it more more more

I loved the story made me want her more and to love her like my daughter. she was hot as hell and he is a lucky guy to have a willing sex partner is divine and one who loves you like that is a godsend. :)

Beautiful

Absolutely Beautiful ....

..B..

it was great

I loved this story. It had great sexual suspense build up, then a releasing ending. It was GREAT!!!

Absolutely breathtaking

Holly wow...I could actually physically see this all happening. it was both wonderful and pleasantly detailed. I will admit it turned me on to no end and who deffinately desire to see more of thy work.

Amazing

This story was one of the best erotic incest stories I have ever read. I don't have a father - but if I did, I'd want it to be just like him. I fantasize - nightly - about something very similar. This turned me on more than any story ever has. Thank you for writing this. And ignoring those who don't like it - or think it's wrong. I love it. And I can't wait to read more of your stories.

I Wish

I usually dont read the long stories but this one I mean wow it had me hooked. I never had a thing for my dad but if I had a dad like the one in the storiy I totally would! It seem not only sexual but very loving wich is great... and BTW I got so soaked reading the story VERY WELL DONE

VERY HOT!!!!!!!

omg! this was so hot.....I felt my hips rollin as I read this...i grabbed my hubby and said come on daddy! lol no joke made for realllyyy good sex...ha! keep it coming

Wow!

Well, now I know why this story has received such acclaim. It is a masterpiece of incestuous writing. Good job, my friend.