Greetings from India... Hope you can go further because they gave birth to three daughters..
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Anonymous07/22/08
Good but...
The story of incest you told was spun beautifully. But I agree with another commenter that it did come off very racist and xenophobic in the beginning. That was very unnecessary and almost ruined the flow of images that made this story appealing to me because I had to stop reading to calm my anger. I'd love to read more of your work on incest but with a lot less needless ignorance and sterotyping, even if the characters who convey it are fictional it reflects on the author.
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Anonymous07/23/08
AMAZING!
wow.. It was AMAZING! I could really see myself in the girl's place.. next to my boyfriend. I felt as though I could relate.. My boyfriend and I are 7 years apart. The story brought tears to my eyes as I told my boyfriend how much I loved him on the phone.. It wasn't just about sex.. but love, between a father and a daughter. That's what I liked most about it.
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Anonymous08/01/08
Truly a masterpiece
I've read some crap in my day, and even written some of my own. Good sir you are ot apart of the crap category. This tale was stunning, well woven, well put together, and didn't rush into the sex like other stuff I've read. Please continue writing at this calibar.
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Anonymous08/02/08
erotic and sexy
I loved this story. A few more erotic scenes would have been nice. String us along a little but it was wonderful!
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Anonymous08/02/08
perfect
breath taking is all i can say
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Anonymous08/07/08
Superb!
Truly excellent work. I'd even call this true literature. I've read a few stories here, and not a one came even close to weaving a tale of forbidden, relished sexual power. Right before the third page began, I couldn't take it anymore; my tension had built too high. I came so hard I thought I'd convulsed. Well, very well done.
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Anonymous08/22/08
Great but...
While the story was very well written, the sexual tension between the two drawing i think every reader to the final page i was almost about to close the page because of the racist and totally unneccesary comments near the begining, once you can remove that from your writing you will have absolute litirical masterpieces in your hands, I am personally from Australia and do not appreciate American "Superiority" one little bit, great story, im 20 and my 19 year old girlfriend and i have had many similar nights of passion, thank you for a great read.
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Anonymous08/28/08
cum
it made me cum
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Anonymous08/29/08
"Daddy" I Whispered
Loved the sexual tension and the discription of how Daddy got his girl. Always fun when daddy has a constant erection and is willing to let his maiden have her way with him,More,More, more@
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Anonymous08/31/08
"Daddy?" I Whispered
l thought it was great and to see how true love never dies no matter what
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Anonymous08/31/08
Loved it The second time I readed it Still HOT
Please keep up the geat writing
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Anonymous09/06/08
"Best" is small word to describe this story
Most exotic story...
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Anonymous09/09/08
"Daddy?" I Whispered
I thought the story was amazing. The first time I had read an incest story and it turned me on so much. Thank you for writing it. It got me really turned on. Well done :D xx
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Anonymous09/15/08
Loved it
Absolutely amazing story. I have been searching the stories here for one like yours but none of them were anywhere near as hot as yours
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Anonymous09/15/08
wow
the details are luscious and the story itself is enthralling--- wonderful work
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Anonymous09/23/08
well done
very well written. i'm especially glad that they didn't just 'get it on', but waited, the tension building and building as the story continued. well done, i say. and continue writing.
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Anonymous10/08/08
wow
Aside from the arab comment, this was one of the hottest stories here. great work
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Anonymous10/11/08
daddy
got my pussy wet.. i want moreeeee
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Anonymous10/14/08
Amazing
This was truly a surprise for me. Usually when I read incest stories their rather bland and it's all about the fucking. But you pace the story very well. And make the audience squirm wanting to get to the naughty bits. Though the wait was well WORTH it. Not to mention the sex scenes were very well written indeed. It's like a pro-longed orgasm. Usually fantastic and great, but when held off for a period it's explosive enough to shoot you to the stars.
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Anonymous10/14/08
Awesome Writing
I loved it.
If anyone out there is sick of using your imagination, I have some of the very best internationally produced movies available. They will not disappoint. Please email me to inquire ... PhaedrusEros(at)gmail(dot)com. Serious inquires only.
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Anonymous10/18/08
Great Story
Great story, excellent detail, having her have three kids as a result of her fucking her dad made it even better. Well done.
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Anonymous10/18/08
Hot Story
Nice, hot, juicy story...except for the racist Arab comment.
Okay, let's see ... lack of knowledge about grammar, punctuation, and even how to use elipses. The story itself was contrite and typical, what most incest readers would expect. A golden fairytale with a happy ending, although you thankfully didn't include the birth defects the three daughters would suffer from.
Do better, scouries, or sarahhhh, or whatever you might call yourself these days. I expect more, and you just don't deliver. Give me something I can really get into, and get off to, and I might put you on my faves list.
Or you could keep going the way you are and I'll just lump you in mith the kittenses.
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Anonymous11/02/08
Viva!
This is the best I've read so far. Excellent!!!!!
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Anonymous11/03/08
FANTASTIC !!!
Great story. Have no idea why peolpe will not vote - for you or anyone else. I will read the rest of your stories.
I liked it,very good story,and while I'm more into fantasy stories,note that I'll be looking at you'res from now on as well. You're a very good writer,and I look forward to more of you're stories.
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Anonymous11/07/08
HOT
Loved it.. Keep it up
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Anonymous11/14/08
always good
i always enjoy your writing, and this story is no exception. Keep up the good work... Loved it.
I AM that 'Daddys Girl' and was right there with you and her the whole story. Was excellent. Hope you have more!!
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Anonymous11/24/08
Woah.
I rubbed myself so fuckin hard in this story. ty for fuckin explosive orgasm.
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Anonymous11/25/08
amazing
love the story, it's so hot
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Anonymous12/05/08
this way too long; but good
this was awesome.. the best on i've ever read.
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Anonymous12/07/08
WONDERFUL WORDERFUL
a great and wonderful story of a very lucky father and daughter!. Daddy and I share such a love starting much younger than the girl in your story. I gave Daddy my anal cherrie at eight and my pussy cherrie at ten. We fuck every day and have a set of twin girls both of which share our bed and they let their daddy take their cherries at the same ages as their mother gave him hers. It is so wonderful to help them as their daddy fucks them in the ass as well as their tight little pussies. I am forty now and they are nineteen and just love to eat pussy as they fuck us. Thank you for a great story!!
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Anonymous12/07/08
Never read this story but am totally...
Disgusted by the previous commentor! Eew!
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Anonymous12/09/08
WOW
IT is a good story one that I would like to see come true for me.if it is any way to judge the storie I came 2 time before if was over. Keep up the good work. Bill
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Anonymous12/10/08
Intelligent Incest
I thought that the story was great. Not only did you provide a great tale of sex between father and daughter but you included an intresting setting and prelude as well. Without those the story wouldn't have been as good, I delighted in the build-up!
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Anonymous12/17/08
dont stop writing these!!!!!
hey dont stop writing these i love them i read this story 12 times already i love its great!!
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Anonymous12/29/08
omfg, this is awesome
plz plz plz write more!!!!!!!!
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Anonymous01/02/09
LOVED IT!!
I LOVED THIS STORY. I STROKED MY PUSSY AND WISH I HAD A DAD TO FUCK. I HAD AN ORGASM JUST READIN IT.
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Anonymous01/03/09
Awesome I whispered
You are really talent I loved it I have read it alot and think it is ace, From London England
English
xenophobic and racist
no text
Really loved it
Greetings from India... Hope you can go further because they gave birth to three daughters..
Good but...
The story of incest you told was spun beautifully. But I agree with another commenter that it did come off very racist and xenophobic in the beginning. That was very unnecessary and almost ruined the flow of images that made this story appealing to me because I had to stop reading to calm my anger. I'd love to read more of your work on incest but with a lot less needless ignorance and sterotyping, even if the characters who convey it are fictional it reflects on the author.
AMAZING!
wow.. It was AMAZING! I could really see myself in the girl's place.. next to my boyfriend. I felt as though I could relate.. My boyfriend and I are 7 years apart. The story brought tears to my eyes as I told my boyfriend how much I loved him on the phone.. It wasn't just about sex.. but love, between a father and a daughter. That's what I liked most about it.
Truly a masterpiece
I've read some crap in my day, and even written some of my own. Good sir you are ot apart of the crap category. This tale was stunning, well woven, well put together, and didn't rush into the sex like other stuff I've read. Please continue writing at this calibar.
erotic and sexy
I loved this story. A few more erotic scenes would have been nice. String us along a little but it was wonderful!
perfect
breath taking is all i can say
Superb!
Truly excellent work. I'd even call this true literature. I've read a few stories here, and not a one came even close to weaving a tale of forbidden, relished sexual power. Right before the third page began, I couldn't take it anymore; my tension had built too high. I came so hard I thought I'd convulsed. Well, very well done.
Great but...
While the story was very well written, the sexual tension between the two drawing i think every reader to the final page i was almost about to close the page because of the racist and totally unneccesary comments near the begining, once you can remove that from your writing you will have absolute litirical masterpieces in your hands, I am personally from Australia and do not appreciate American "Superiority" one little bit, great story, im 20 and my 19 year old girlfriend and i have had many similar nights of passion, thank you for a great read.
cum
it made me cum
"Daddy" I Whispered
Loved the sexual tension and the discription of how Daddy got his girl. Always fun when daddy has a constant erection and is willing to let his maiden have her way with him,More,More, more@
"Daddy?" I Whispered
l thought it was great and to see how true love never dies no matter what
Loved it The second time I readed it Still HOT
Please keep up the geat writing
"Best" is small word to describe this story
Most exotic story...
"Daddy?" I Whispered
I thought the story was amazing. The first time I had read an incest story and it turned me on so much. Thank you for writing it. It got me really turned on. Well done :D xx
Loved it
Absolutely amazing story. I have been searching the stories here for one like yours but none of them were anywhere near as hot as yours
wow
the details are luscious and the story itself is enthralling--- wonderful work
well done
very well written. i'm especially glad that they didn't just 'get it on', but waited, the tension building and building as the story continued. well done, i say. and continue writing.
wow
Aside from the arab comment, this was one of the hottest stories here. great work
daddy
got my pussy wet.. i want moreeeee
Amazing
This was truly a surprise for me. Usually when I read incest stories their rather bland and it's all about the fucking. But you pace the story very well. And make the audience squirm wanting to get to the naughty bits. Though the wait was well WORTH it. Not to mention the sex scenes were very well written indeed. It's like a pro-longed orgasm. Usually fantastic and great, but when held off for a period it's explosive enough to shoot you to the stars.
Awesome Writing
I loved it.
If anyone out there is sick of using your imagination, I have some of the very best internationally produced movies available. They will not disappoint. Please email me to inquire ... PhaedrusEros(at)gmail(dot)com. Serious inquires only.
Great Story
Great story, excellent detail, having her have three kids as a result of her fucking her dad made it even better. Well done.
Hot Story
Nice, hot, juicy story...except for the racist Arab comment.
well done!
WOW very hot story, lucky Daddy
UUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Nearly came myself uuuuummmmmmm
dad i whispd
well but end shd have stopped after med college and marry a classmate, and daddy with another young femme.
LOVED IT!
omg it has to be one of the top 3 best stories i have read on lit i loved how there is a story and not just sex
Fuck
m masturbating.....
FUCK UP
WAIT TILL YA SEE DEATH
This is what you offer up?
Okay, let's see ... lack of knowledge about grammar, punctuation, and even how to use elipses. The story itself was contrite and typical, what most incest readers would expect. A golden fairytale with a happy ending, although you thankfully didn't include the birth defects the three daughters would suffer from.
Do better, scouries, or sarahhhh, or whatever you might call yourself these days. I expect more, and you just don't deliver. Give me something I can really get into, and get off to, and I might put you on my faves list.
Or you could keep going the way you are and I'll just lump you in mith the kittenses.
Viva!
This is the best I've read so far. Excellent!!!!!
FANTASTIC !!!
Great story. Have no idea why peolpe will not vote - for you or anyone else. I will read the rest of your stories.
Great story
Well written, hot, sexy.
Very good,keep writing.
I liked it,very good story,and while I'm more into fantasy stories,note that I'll be looking at you'res from now on as well. You're a very good writer,and I look forward to more of you're stories.
HOT
Loved it.. Keep it up
always good
i always enjoy your writing, and this story is no exception. Keep up the good work... Loved it.
Believable..I loved it!!
I AM that 'Daddys Girl' and was right there with you and her the whole story. Was excellent. Hope you have more!!
Woah.
I rubbed myself so fuckin hard in this story. ty for fuckin explosive orgasm.
amazing
love the story, it's so hot
this way too long; but good
this was awesome.. the best on i've ever read.
WONDERFUL WORDERFUL
a great and wonderful story of a very lucky father and daughter!. Daddy and I share such a love starting much younger than the girl in your story. I gave Daddy my anal cherrie at eight and my pussy cherrie at ten. We fuck every day and have a set of twin girls both of which share our bed and they let their daddy take their cherries at the same ages as their mother gave him hers. It is so wonderful to help them as their daddy fucks them in the ass as well as their tight little pussies. I am forty now and they are nineteen and just love to eat pussy as they fuck us. Thank you for a great story!!
Never read this story but am totally...
Disgusted by the previous commentor! Eew!
WOW
IT is a good story one that I would like to see come true for me.if it is any way to judge the storie I came 2 time before if was over. Keep up the good work. Bill
Intelligent Incest
I thought that the story was great. Not only did you provide a great tale of sex between father and daughter but you included an intresting setting and prelude as well. Without those the story wouldn't have been as good, I delighted in the build-up!
dont stop writing these!!!!!
hey dont stop writing these i love them i read this story 12 times already i love its great!!
omfg, this is awesome
plz plz plz write more!!!!!!!!
LOVED IT!!
I LOVED THIS STORY. I STROKED MY PUSSY AND WISH I HAD A DAD TO FUCK. I HAD AN ORGASM JUST READIN IT.
Awesome I whispered
You are really talent I loved it I have read it alot and think it is ace, From London England
HAD TO READ TWICE...CAME EARLY THE FIRST TIME!!
THIS STORY IS INCREDIBLY EROTIC ... MY FAVORITE PART IS AT THE BEGINNING WHEN SHE IS LYING IN BED WITH HER FATHER WHILE HE SLEEPS.
PLEASE WRITE A SEQUAL TO THIS STORY . MAYBE ABOUT ONE SPECIAL NIGHT IN EUROPE.
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