by Liar
I love your humor !!
Your sly and sneaky here
alomost begging to be played with.
Love it Liar.
It's one hell of a relationship here;
With its underlying theme
No wonder why the thought resonates,
"What happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas."
Not many people can overcome the dual fatality of a "bad" title and first line. You do. Only problem is it has to be read to see the relationship.
Advise, better title.