All Comments on 'Smoke and Mirrors'

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyabout 18 years ago
Sexxyyy !!

I love your humor !!

Your sly and sneaky here

alomost begging to be played with.

Love it Liar.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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It's one hell of a relationship here;

With its underlying theme

No wonder why the thought resonates,

"What happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas."

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 18 years ago
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Not many people can overcome the dual fatality of a "bad" title and first line. You do. Only problem is it has to be read to see the relationship.

Advise, better title.

TeeTeeTeeTeeabout 18 years ago
Wow

Loved it

thanks for sharing

Honey123Honey123about 18 years ago
:)

Your words always make me smile.

~Honey

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