All Comments on 'The Gondola Ride'

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craigywidnescraigywidnesover 6 years ago
Good

I like these stories but they seem to end abruptly. Would love to see what happens when they are back in the hotel waiting for the trip home and what happens when she is back at school. Also if they have feelings at home and get together for more. Please do some longer stories or some with more chapters otherwise they are still good.

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