All Comments on 'Mom and Sisters Humiliated Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Pure Unadultrated CRAP

Spank a cunt??

Treat women like--------Sick-sick-sick

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Wow you would think

that some readers do not know what type of sex they will be reading if they choose the incest catagory. You did not try to hide this under novels or Humiliation, if you don't like incest don't read it. BTW readers, considering what you will find don't read BDSM if this type of play upsets you, this stuff is fairly mild for a BDSM heading.

Get a life.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Going downhill

Chapter 1, while implausable, was erotic. This has decended into tripe.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
lost ground

The chapter lost the eroyic edge the first one had, mostly because our hero became an abusive asshole.

SmokeEaterSmokeEaterabout 18 years ago
What a waste of time

This story was just awful. Please don't write any more.

XodanXodanover 15 years ago
Abrut ending

..and we're not even sure of the connection with the first part. I dont get right why they dont rebel 3 against one boy. But anyway nice reading!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
to "Pure crap"

Some people get off to violence against women. You don't apparently, but you get off to something, not someone, or you wouldn't be here on this site would you? I bet there are things you get off to that others find sick. So thanks for commenting, but think before you type. Everyone has their turn-on, the only difference between mine and yours is how much pain and humiliation it takes to get there. So enjoy the other stories MR. Sad, me and MR. Happy are enjoying ourselves in our house, not my parents house.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Some readers

I thought it was a good story As I said STORY some people just read to much into what people write . It was more of a fantasy . just remember it is your story. and do not let them with the bad comment get you down. just keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
really immature

Your stories read like the demented fantasies of a nerdy powerless 13-year-old. Seriously, one boy is going to take down 3 women, one of them described as an athlete? Lame.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

So, part one was nothing but a wet dream? You should have made both parts separate stories. This way the whole doesn't make much sense. Two separate masturbatory fantasies stitched together do not a good story make. Sorry! I can tell you are quite young, so don't give up after a few criticisms, keep on writing, practice makes perfect!

Good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
yes more!

Moore! Fuck them hard. And for a Long time. And take moms in to

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
OMG KEEP DOING THIS

OMG U SHOULD MAKE A MOVIE UR AWESOME MORE MORE MORE

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 9 years ago
Great Story

But where is Chapter #3 . it should be the Beginning for Erin and the Beginning for Kate.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Its fake

I think this is fake

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Its fiction of course it's fake dumbass

5 for a good read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Where is Part 3

Great story please finish it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Looks like another writer lost

Since this has been languishing, probably in absentia, for so long I can only hazard to guess that we have lost another writer.

Anyone know what has happened?

C_frommnC_frommnabout 6 years ago
Sooo

Where is Part#3 and 4 . There should be at least that many. He has his sisters and friend under control. and Possibly impregnating them. Where is Mom during this. Will he take control of Mom and what will Dad do about the Pregnant girl's including his wife.

RanDog025RanDog025about 6 years ago
AUTHOR BAILED ON FINISHING STORY

YEAH SO FOR WHATEVER REASON THE AUTHOR BAILED ON CONTINUING THE STORY AND OR QUIT ALTOGETHER SO I GIVE ONLY A ONE STAR HOWEVER HOT IT WAS. I HATE IT WHEN THIS HAPPENS FOR WHATEVER REASON! NO ACTIVITY SINCE 6/6/08

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Where is part 3?

Shame part 3 has not been done as this is a good story.

Aussie1951Aussie1951about 3 years ago
Typical

Another want a be writer that doesnโ€™t finish what they started...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Yikes

How can you get โ€œbutter sprayโ€ in your eyes but be perfectly fine afterwards. Were you even the person who wrote the first part??

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Pure crap, totally unbellievable. No finesse at all just brutallity.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

A pure BDSM fantasy abuse and rape. Not very erotic. I guess some people like that stuff. I read some BDSM, at times they can be erotic if the author knows how to write. Keep working, proof reading and editing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Stories are old. People must not like them much not, many comments.

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