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Distinct lack of "clink" in life

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by annaswirls02/16/06

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oh heartbreaking!

I do not think the last line is necessary, as you plant the image in the mind of the reader in the title, and in the silence itself.

I love the idea of the lack of the clink. Wah!

anna

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by SeattleRain02/16/06

your poem has been mentioned

in the new poems review thread:
http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showth read.php?p=16252040#post16252040

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by LeBroz02/16/06

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I agree with annaswirls' view on that last line
A degree of subtlety is called for here
For the silence speaks volumes
As no one rallies round the nice guy.

And a warm Welcome to the poetry side of Lit.

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