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The basic story was great However the Yellow
stream stuff was a turn off to me personally although I understan that some my like it. Therefore I refrained from voting as I only grade 5 or 1 and this was neither to me.
A lovely story
Liked everything about it. I've known several women who "went" when they came and found it a delicious sharing of a very intimate sort. Write on!
More, must have more!!!!
Please give us more stories about the adventures of these two. I would give anything to have a female that would come so hard.
Give us more of the wet stuff!
I love stories that mix pissing and fucking and this is a real good one. Nice intensity. A lot of stories involving piss lack real sexual heat but this ain't one of them. Sadly I've only had one lover who liked to play with pee and I really miss our golden games. A woman who pisses uncontrollably at climax after hot fucking, as in this story, is still my ultimate dream. This story got me off like a damn. I really hope you'll be encouraged to write again soon!
Your Mouth Full?
Very well written a great fantasy. Would love to piss like that on my wife and she on me...I was disappointed that you didn't have her piss in your mouth...maybe next story.
Thanks to the last guy to comment but
She did pee in his mouth - that's what started the whole thing. She lost control while he was eating her and pissed directly into his mouth (a personal fantasy of mine :-)
I'm sure he's going to get a whole lot more of her piss, and she his!
Thanks again for the comment, and glad you liked the story!
LOVELY HOT AND WET!
All sex should be hot and wet like this! A real turn on and no nastiness at all. It just proves that you don't have to be 'dirty' to enjoy loving wet sex with lots of saliva, piss and cum. Although the setting was banal the action was anything but!
Loved it!
That story left me wet and aching for more. I loved how you were able to take a fetish that so many perceive to be "dirty" and depict it as it truly is, something hot and sensual. I do agree with previous reviews, that it would have been great had she sat atop him and gifted him directly into his mouth, but maybe leaving it out is what left me so hot and pleased. Great story!
I just LOVE this story!!
This got me so incredibly HOT that I had no choice but to play with myself and cum ... HARD!! I even
'wet' myself a little!! Just like Angela, I always pee when I cum ... and I often cum when I pee!! I like to
taste my pee and my lover's pee, so sex often happens in the tub at my house!! There's just something
INCREDIBLY intimate about opening yourself to your lover's offerings ... when he or she covers my face,
fills my mouth and splashes my body with their golden nectar, I feel like they've marked me with their
own scent and I have truly become their property!! And I, in turn, mark them as my own whenever they
make me cum!! Sybil
Glad you liked the story
Pity you left it anonymously though! It's always good to hear from like minded individual with an adventurous streak.
I really ought to get round to writing more! Any suggestions anyone?
writing back.
hi, you left me your link when you sent feedback to me after reading "a wet afternoon".
im so glad you left the link, your story was amazing, i really enjoyed reading it, so erotic! every part of it believable, i think when a story sounds fake, it ruins the fantasy, this really kept it alive. i hope you will continue to write.
marielit x
Great Story!
I loved this story,apart from the extremely erotic content, with pee and fucking combined, i found it both well written and paced. Looking forward to more of the same.
Sexy and wet and amazingly good
I've been into pee play for pretty much as long as I can remember. It's so great to find a story (and author) on Lit who loves it as much as I do! I'd love for you to get in contact with me so we can email about something we obviously both love.
What a Peeing Experience!
I read your story after you commented on mine so am appreciating this little community a lot. I have only had one pee experience and it was very controlled. Just me sitting on his face and peeing into his mouth and then taking him in my mouth and drinking him up. i LOVED the feeling of peeing into his mouth and loved the idea of directly gifting from my inside to his. There was sex involved before and after that but not part of it and I knew NOTHING about pee play until the moment this lover surprised me by asking.
So, this piece was HOT! Mostly I just feel very let into a little erotic secret and shown the sexiness and fantasy of it. Reading the comments was really sweet too as it gave me another insight. I appreciated the writing and the bravery of talking about this. It doesn't immediately turn me on but I am into sensations and experiences as much as pleasure and was happy to read.
Thanks TickleTiSexy
I loved writing this story although at the time I had no experience in this area - just a very vivid imagination. I've since met a very sexy, open minded, adventurous lady and we've tried many things. She has peed in my mouth - and on my body and I loved every moment. I've returned the favour and she loves the feel of my pee running over her breasts. Pee play is now a frequent part of our fun and games even as we explore other ideas together. The reality was so much better than anything my imagination could dream up though!
Brought back fond memories
Many years ago, I was involved with a woman who had never had her pussy licked and after the first time, we did it a lot-usually her sitting on my face or in a 69. One of the first times we 69ed she came so hard that she lost control of her bladder and when she filled my mouth with her pee, I filled her mouth with my cum. Like Angela, she was embarrassed until I told her to sit on my face the next time she wanted to pee. Mutual peeing became a regular part of our lovemaking.
There is 1 problem with this story
There is 1 problem with this story, It's way too short, Loved the story.
More!!!
Yes! Another chapter or ten.
Please add some more to the story. Perhaps his fetish is revealed to his wife and the three of them become close and indulge frequently. Great story well told!
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