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Loving wives?
Group sex with a submissive husband taking a second hand cream pie and the whole thing now being run by now Master Christopher and the Domineering wife. The whole story was about BDSM/Submissive"
She said: Oh Mark, your little dick is hard as a rock.
"Oh, I want some dick. I want your dick. I want to be pounded by a big fat cock. Can you give me that...can you make Sara happy?"
"Lick my pussy...yes...lick my clit...drink his cum...ooohhh," Sara exploded again.
I really was expected a loving wives story. Got a BDSM Domineering and submissive story with group sex joined in.
Sorry I’m not into weak men and that’s my take. Guess I expected cheating wives. We do need different headers for stories. They need a cuckold/submissive category.
To each their own.
I thought from what parts I did read the writing was fine.
Hey Peggy the Twit, this is a Loving Wives Story
The catagory Loving Wives is for "adventurous married women" not prim and proper nuns as you would like to see written about. Why do you continue to read in the Loving Wives section if you can't stand cheating wives? It's what the category was designed for. I read some of your comments from other stories and the reasons you come up with to dislike a cheating wife story are hilarious.
I like your suggestion about coming up with a more straight forward category regarding cheating wives but somehow I think you would find your self in that category denigrating stories to make up for your real life failings with women. Seriously, I do sympathize if that is your reason for writing these comments but why take it out on these writers? They work hard to put their imagination on paper and they had nothing to do with your problems.
Fuck you Bazzz
You dumb fuck. Who made you the "Authority of Literotica"? My opinion is more important to me than yours. Also, Peggy does not have to agree with you. I think the story was lousy. What do you think about that?
I liked this
Despite the aggresion of a previous comment, I think this story is in the right category and not only that, I enjoyed it very much. Please don't let one person put you off.
Ian xxxxxx
Well-written and hot
Three consenting adults have sex, enjoy it and no one gets hurt. Who could ask for more? Thanks. Best, Ken
Great reading!
You can make your stories much more erotic by shooting your baby sperm into these other women as you fuck them in their fertile periods even if they are married to others.
Sit in the car
Before you write about "anything" check your facts
ther is NO way what you wroe could happen in so small
of a car
A very hot writer.
After reading several of your stories, I want you to know that I enjoy your writing. Keep up the good work.
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