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*mentioned on today's review*
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well isnt that the truth!
Time stands still...
as does the heart when the word "Love" is spoken. This is a tight and tender poem that only a person that has both inhaled and exhaled the feeling could write. Lust may be powerful, but in comparison...the always weaker sex.
Today you have penned the universal key that unlocks the heart. Like loving the right one, this one is a true keeper, Leon.
Vixxx
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An excellent first Senryu Leon.
wso
poetic truths
you have a way with words, and this says it all with so little in a big way, nice write.
S and S
Short and sweet, that is. Thanks for sharing LeB.
Tess
Short
A short, sharp image. Nice one
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the begining of a thought
is always only one word
splintery fragment ideas
mandala fractals can be traced
back beyond their origins
yet I always get trapped by words
there's never nearly enough
to say what I want to say
so I am ever envious of
a simple few lines
that say it all.
So true
Leon, Don't know what a senryu is -- okay, I'll look -- but I like what you say here and the way you said it. Thanks. CP
Beautiful
Perfection again.
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