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I got as far as the second mention of the oversize
dickey and quit reading
yeah right
7inches around and ten inches long. SOunds more like a pork loin to me than a cock--ha ha. Or a big roast beast.
Great Erotic Story!
Wonderful! Great fantasy! A blowjob to end all blowjobs! More, please!!!
Nice
I enjoyed reading about her sucking her very first cock. It made my cock hard and that was my goal.
Do you even have a dick?
Dude take a measuring tape and measure yours, your dimensions in the story are wack. It killed the rest of the story that was unbelievably good, even great.
Great Story
Very hot, very good discriptions, I hope you write more abour Bridget because you have a really good thing going here.
Great story
Simple and veracious. How many persons made the same on the mother-in-law´couch. Life, indeed, is a beautiful thing.
Loved the story but no need to exaggerate
Even though I rate your story 100 and hope to see more, there's no need to lessen your descriptive skills by adding size to the depiction; Bridget would've been sexy just doing what she did with an average guy, with your skills at writing. That measuring cliche is exactly that: a cliche. For those whose tastes run to women with oral appetites and facial/savoring fetishes, your writing has an appeal that deserves more exposure. Write again, please.
I agree with prior posts
Enjoyable story, good embellishment. Didn't have to have ridiculous penis size.
That's what it's all about!
Nice ! I held off till the end for release. That was hot! It would be too bad if my cock was still hard. I'd like to slip into Briget! Maybe, this time she will cum around!
Simply outstanding!
This is the best BJ facial story I've read so far on Literotica. It has the ring of truth about it, unlike many that are obviously poorly written fantasies. I'll be adding Hawksmoor to my list of favorite authors.
Very vivid and descriptive
You had me on the edge of my seat with your story. Almost wanted to read it kneeling down. Some of us just need to be used for pleasure without all the emotional baggage attached. I can relate so much to Bridget. Thanks for sharing.
Amazing story!
Loved every bit of it! The double blow..is the best! Could you make it to three please?..
Lovely lady
Either way: getting sucked and fucking a woman's mouth feel just as good when I come. I don't like facials either: the juice belongs in the pussy or the mouth. Or maybe spattered on the breasts or feet. But not the upper face. Oh, and I like small breasts too. Just a handful of boob is plenty.
Unfortunate and foolish lad
Ok so your telling me this young man, waited... pining over this girl almost his whole life... getting nowhere. And she's a little slut, using him for actual affection, since the guys that do fuck her obviously don't have any.
Just can't get excited about pity sex. Ugh.
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